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FANFIC game

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Chanel, Mar 6, 2003.

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  1. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    okay.. u no the game where one person starts telling a story like a paragraph and then u pass the story to another person... well this is almost exactly like this. okay ill start out w/ a few lines of a story and then the next person who reads it will write th e rest and hopefully we'll have a great story..
    (im not sure where this should go so i thought it was sorta fanfic)

    okay.. heres the first couple of lines... :blink:

    Sydney was driving to her apartment when she saw something out of the corner of her eye. She immediately went into suspision, her min dusaully does that. Someone was following her, and she thought she knew who it was...
     
  2. aliasfan_614

    aliasfan_614 Captain

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    sounds like fun... ^_^ ....hers a few more lines

    Sydney turned the corner, just to make sure the car behind her was actually following her. She prayed it wasn't. Sydney looked into her rear-view mirror and watched in horror as the black van turned the corner also...
     
  3. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    i like the idea! a line or two...

    the person in the van opened their window and pulled otu a gun. Sydney sped up...
     
  4. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Ok I can do this.

    She took and left then a right and then she turned into an ally the first thing she did was called Vaughn.''Vaughn, I need to talk to you right now.''

    Kelli
     
  5. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    ooh, fun...

    "Sydney, what is it?" asked Vaughn worriedly.
    "I'm being chased by a car and their shooting at me," she said while maneuvering the car through the busy Los Angeles Streets
    "Well, can you see who's in the car?" he asked.
    "Yes, it' my mom," her voice trembled as she spoke in a barely audible whisper.
     
  6. SpyGurl001

    SpyGurl001 Rocket Ranger

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    "your mom?!" Vaughn said with doubt in his voice " are you sure?"
    "Yeah, Vaughn! I'm not blind, it my mom!" Sydney said frustrated
    "Ok Syd, listen to me turn right to the warehouse, I'm calling Kendall to tell him"
     
  7. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

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    Here is mine :D
    Sydney gets finally to the warehouse.Vaughn calls Kendall.
    Kendall"Hello"with a sleepy talk
    Vaughn"Kendall Sydney...i mean Agent Bristow is being chased"real worried
    Kendall"Agent Vaughn its 1:00am"
    Vaughn"who cares Agent Bristow is in trouble and if you dont send anybody then im going for her"
     
  8. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    here's more from me

    ''Agent Vaughn, how do you know this?''
    ''She called me.''
    ''Why did she call you.''
    ''Why not?''
    ''Well,''
    'Kendall you get a team together or I go after her.''
    ''Well Mrs. Vaughn I think you should get going then.''
    ''You jack a$$.''

    Kelli
     
  9. SpyGurl001

    SpyGurl001 Rocket Ranger

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    Vaughn hangs up the phone angerly..damn him that son of a....

    Vaughn gets into his car and calls back Sydney, however she isn't picking


    ~KM

    (Alias*Keli Mrs. Vaughn??? he he Kendall has a little slip up?)
     
  10. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    Calling sydney back he tells her to pullinto the alley on new market stree take a right onto the small road and run into the seven eleven and then go to the nathrooms he would meet her there.......
     
  11. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    vaughn waits for sydney for ten minutes, but she doesn't come. after thirty minutes, vaughn gets worried...
     
  12. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    Vaughn called her on her cell. After three agonizing rings someone picks up.
    "Syd-" began Vaughn before any words could be said on the other line.
    "Hello." said a voice (NOT Sydney's)
    "What have you done with Sydney?"
    "Well, you'll just have to wait to find out, won't you."
     
  13. The Kate Vartan

    The Kate Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    aliaschick4mv, you have a knack for cliff hangers don't you?

    Vaughn started to breathe more quickly. He started to say something, but the person on the other end hung up.
     
  14. aliasfan_614

    aliasfan_614 Captain

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    me again.....

    Vaughn had to think quickly. What was he going to do? Even he didn't know...He thought for a monent. He quickly picked up his cell phone and dialed Marshall's number...
     
  15. VaughnFan13

    VaughnFan13 Rocket Ranger

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    "hello?"marshall answers.
    "hey, marshall----" vaughn is cut off
    "hey man...it's like late...you know? i was sleeping and dreaming this really great dream..." marshall gets cut off.
    "i need your help NOW!!! kendall wont do anything, but sydney's in danger!" vaughn says
     
  16. nancee

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    "well okay but u know the thing is"
    "marshall!!!track syds cell and call me"
    "okay um agent vaughn?.."
    *click*
     
  17. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

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    Me again
    Vaughn,now driving faster than ever.
    Marshall calls him.
    Vaughn doesnt answer for a long while. :o :o
     
  18. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    LOL, thanks I just love them! That's what makes Alias so great. Sorry, here I go:

    "Vaughn"
    "Hey. I was wondering why you didn't pick up."
    "Did you get a location?" asked Vaughn impatiently.
    "Yeah. And you'll NEVER guess where it is."
    ***





    Ehh, not so cliffhanger-y but whatevr.
     
  19. aLiAsFaN_14

    aLiAsFaN_14 Rocket Ranger

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    ok- ill give it a shot-

    "just tell me where it is!" vaughn yelled in the phone and you could definetly sense how scared he was (for sydney).
    "its...." suddenly vaughn's phone went silent.
     
  20. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    marhsall quickly redialed a few times until Vaughn came on
    "yeah where is it gorram it" Vaughn yelled
    "its...Baltimore"Marshall said
    (how they get to baltimore in like 3 hourse i have no clue but whatever maybe it could be this superfast traveling ambaldi thing who knows)
     

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