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Happily Ever After..or is it?

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by aliasfan_614, Mar 2, 2003.

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  1. aliasfan_614

    aliasfan_614 Captain

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    okay...well...here's the first chap..plz tell me if you like it...the story is in Syd's POW....

    ~Chapter 1~

    I looked down at his face. He looked at me with a stare that made me feel as if he was looking straight through my soul. I had to look away. Those perfect green eyes made me want to cry.
    “Syd?” he asked me softly.
    I couldn’t even look at him when I talked. I tried to focus on my shoes. “Wow,” I said simply.
    He now stood up and put his hand under my chin and raised my face so that I could look directly at him. “Syd?” he asked again.
    I started to cry gently. “Oh Michael,” I said softly as tears of joy streamed down my cheek.
    “Yes?” he said hopefully. He reached over and wiped a tear.
    My face broke out into a smile. “Of course I will marry you, Michael. Of course.”

    I sat up in bed, and sighed deeply. A dream. It was a dream. No. Wait. It wasn’t a dream. I only wished it had been a dream. Only, I knew it was a memory. A very old memory...
    I glanced sleepily at my alarm clock. It read 5:23. It was still dark outside. I turned off the clock’s alarm and walked into the kitchen. I poured myself a cup of yesterday’s, now-cold coffee. I sat at the table and drank in silence.
     
  2. Bondgal2007

    Bondgal2007 Rocket Ranger

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    I love it please keep going!
     
  3. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    I hate to be the bearer of bad news, and you can flame me all you want for this, but I have a story named Happily Ever After which is actually the sequel to A New Hope. I don't want people getting my story and your story confused.

    ~me :angel2:
     
  4. aliasfan_614

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    :( ..sorry alias elle....question though....should I repost it under a new name or something so ppl wont be confused?!?!
     
  5. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    It would be very much appreciated if there was just a title change...

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  6. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    Alias Elle is right. Happily Ever After was her story which I became quuite addicted to. Anyway, back to your story. I love it! Please keep writing! I want to know why Sydney wished it was a dream!
     
  7. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    thanks... :shamefullyembarrased:

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  8. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    I love it! Keep going! :D
     
  9. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    Aww, poor Syd...
     
  10. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

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    grrr please write more, and if you make vaughn dead then i refuse to read
     
  11. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    Yeah, same here, and I hope they don't divorce or something... I dunno, it just sounded sad. :(
     
  12. SpyGurl001

    SpyGurl001 Rocket Ranger

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    True!! I think they should always be happy!! oh well the world don't work that way........but please keep going!!


    ~KM :angelic:
     
  13. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Sometimes it works that way... sometimes...

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  14. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    nice job! but didn't alias elle name her fanfic that? :LOL: lol just wondering
     
  15. sydandvaughnforever

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    Ooooohhh....this is really good! Please Pm me!
     

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