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highschool reunion

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Xtremelimits08, May 10, 2003.

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  1. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    ok guys this would be my first fic so before i post it i wan't to know if u would read it or not? so heres a little spoiler/summary

    Vaughn is reminded of his past when he has a run in with some highschool buddies and flings (ex g~friends if u were wounderin) at his highschool reunion.But one of them is out for revenge and will do WHAT EVER it takes to get it. And the one person vaughn can turn to.....betrays him.....or so he thinks.

    so tell me what u think is it worth writing? and please tell me the truth!!!
    and yes it is syd who betrays him
    i thought this would be something to get ur minds off of the whole vaughn being married to someone else in the Telling..
     
  2. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    lol i think i might have spelt reunion wrong how do u spell it?
     
  3. Aliasfan23

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    yea I think you spelled it right...reunion yea that's right...Please post it! It sounds like it could be good!
     
  4. VaughnFan13

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    write it! how does syd supposly betray vaughn? this sounds really good and original!
     
  5. bAtWoMaN_88

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    im intrigued
     
  6. Avrilfan89

    Avrilfan89 Rocket Ranger

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    You should write it.
    -Amber
     
  7. The Kate Vartan

    The Kate Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    That sounds like a really cool idea! You should definitely take a stab at it!
     
  8. Sarahmañana

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    it sounds like it would be interesting!
     
  9. nancee

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    o0o0o sounds good
     
  10. aliasgurl

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    it sounds really interesting, but is his ex gonna be alice or a different character u were gonna make up
     
  11. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    no i want to bring in a diff. character any ideas for names there is 3 boys and 2 girls names anyone?
     
  12. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    thanks for ur reviews i'll post it later to day
     
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    That would be a very different, but neat idea. That's a cool approach to take, from the ending of telling. Please, write the story, now you have me wondering.......


    Lauren :angelic:
     
  15. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    when i said that i mean shes not alice but.......
     
  16. sounds good. post it. :D
    --Mandy :angelic:
     
  17. aliasgurl

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    huh? wats that supposed tomean?? :unsure:
     
  18. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    ok here goes i'm just a lil scared
    All of this happened before the Second Double $ the Telling. I hope u like it!!!!!!
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    Vaughn slowly made his way out of the bed careful not to wake syd. He tiptoed to the bath room to take a shower when he returned he was fully dressed and ready for work. He quietly went back into the bedroom but he noticed sydney quickly wipe a smirk off her face and pretended as if she was sleeping. Syd was on her side of the bed facing away from vaughns side. He went over and wisperd ~morning

    syd didn't react she still just pretended to be asleep

    *I know your awake*still nothing
    *fine then if thats how you want to play it then 2 can play at this game*
    he moved his hands to her stomach and statred to tickle her. Instantly she reacted laughing and rolling from side to side trying to get him to stop
    *you need to get up or you'll be late for work*
    ~I'm not getting up and you can't make me*
    *oh ya*
    ~thats right <she sticks her tounge out at him>
    at this he walked into the bathroom turned on the shower checking the temp. then walked back into the bedroom where syd was still laying on the bed
    ~ I'm not walking in there*
    *who said you were walking*
    he walked over to the bed and pickd her up
    she kicked trying to get away but he was to strong
    he started to carry her into the bathroom her pouting all the way
    he just laughed at her expression. He sat her down in the shower still in her pjs, getting all wet
    *see I told you i'd get you up*
    ~thats not fair your bigger than I am and I couldn't get out she said pouting<knowing she could if she wanted too>
    ~ I feel like a mermaid wearing close in the shower*
    *well I got to go see ya at work Marial<i think thats it anyway the lil mermaid>
    she laughs and says ~shut up*
    he walks over and gives her a kiss then goes to walks out.
    as hes walking out of the house theres a van parked along side the road off in the distance with a women with dirty blond hair watching him........
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    I hope you liked it i'll post more later and trust me i'll get to the point of the reunion.
    oh ya and i forgot to mention that francie is not evil and will and her are sorta going out you'll see what i mean by that later.please review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  19. interesting..... i've never seen the little mermaid so i wouldn't know. but it's a really cute start :D
    --Mandy :angelic:
     
  20. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    aliasgurl~ that ment that shes not the only one in her family
     

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