I just went through and read the first 3 edited chapters. I love the changes that you made, while it was great before, this just makes it seem almost like an new fic. I can't wait to see how you go with the rest of the story.
Just finished re-reading the whole thing because I'm out of school and with nothing to do. This is amazing, you've got to update!
Oh and I changed my mind, Vaughn did make the right decision by not going after the people that hurt Sydney and leaving her once again. They're better together.