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Love,lies and spies

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Sunfire_77, Mar 22, 2003.

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  1. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Ok so after the crash you all know I lost my story well some of it, well I thought today "Ok i had something here so I am going to start where I left off with sydney and vaughn in the rain..... (See Love,lies and spies #1)


    Sydney and vaughn stumbled into the house laughing. They were both soaked and laughing from the site.
    Sydney started the fire in the living room and kissed vaughn on the cheek.
    "I'll be right back. I need to change."
    Vaughn smiled and pulled her close.
    "I like you wet." He joked.
    She smiled,but teasingly pulled away.
    After a while sydney came out in dry clean clothes.
    She sat next to vaughn on the floor.
    Vaughn pulled her next to him making her tumble over to him.
    he started to kiss her put she put her index finger up to her lips. Seperating them.
    " I bought some wine earlier. I'll go get it." She jumped up and walked to the kitchen.
    She came out with a bottle of vintage wine.
    "Niceeee." Replied vaughn as sydney sat down.
    "What me or the wine."
    "The wines nice, But I was replying to you."
    Sydney went to kiss him but was intrupted by the door bell.
    Sydney got up and answered it.
    It was Francie with a crying look on her face.
    "Sydney. Wills been shot."
     
  2. Porter

    Porter Rocket Ranger

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    hehehe! I am glad you started this one again! I LOVED IT! And I will love this! KEEP it up! :)
     
  3. The Kate Vartan

    The Kate Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    Ooh yay! This part was good. I'm going to go read the first part.
     
  4. Aliasfan23

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    this is good!
     
  5. alias8000

    alias8000 Rocket Ranger

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    ALLY! This is great! i can't really remembered what happened in the first part but this is great! :) :)
     
  6. SpyGurl001

    SpyGurl001 Rocket Ranger

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    wow really good!!!

    ~KM
     
  7. pasta_sauce385

    pasta_sauce385 Rocket Ranger

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    this is really good! i'm glad you started this fic again
     
  8. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Ahhhhh Thanks you guys! :)
     
  9. alias8000

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    your welcome ally! :D
     
  10. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    This is good! :D
     
  11. nancee

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    o0o0o0o good one
     
  12. Scarlet Crystal

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    o i bet she shot him...
     
  13. Alias*Kelli

    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    Is this evil Francie or Francie Francie? It is really really good!~
     
  14. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Sydneys hand went from her side to her mouth. A tear trickled down her face.
    "Francie what do you mean?"
    Francie stopped crying
    "We were walking and This guy tryed to steal my purse. Will tryed to stop him,but he was shot. You need to come quick."
    Francie saw Vaughn stand up.
    "Michael, You should stay here. I told The hospital to call here if anything happened."
    Michael looked at sydney to see if she need support,but she nodded an reluctant agreement with Francie.
    They hopped in the car and started driving.
    The whole time there Francie cried so hard that nothing more was said.
    As they got out and started walking out of the parking garage. Francie stopped. Making sydney turn around to see why.
    A glim look came on her face and stood straight.

    "Sydney you are Niave. You have been for awhile." Francie pulled out a gun.
    Sydney stood in shock. Her first reflects were to start to fight.
    But how. How could she to a friend.
    Sydney kicked the gun out of Francies hand, making her weaponless.
    "What the hells going on Francie." Yelled Sydney.
    "Didn't you know you Idiot. I am not francie. I am alice.Ya know! The women you stole her Boyfriend from."
    Sydney was both mad and confused.

    "Wheres Francie you S. O . B!" Yelled Sydney.
    "I took care of her." Francie reached for the gun.
    Sydney was inraged as tears came down her face.
    She kicked Alice making her drop the gun the Alice hit back sending sydney into the car behind her.
    Alice went to choke her,but Knee kicked her in the gut the flipped around behind her. Sydney Kicked alice to the car. Sydney was about to grab the gun when Alice went behind her and kicked her to the ground.
    ALice picked up the gun and aimed it at sydney's head.
     
  15. btvaughn

    btvaughn Rocket Ranger

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    Whooooo! That's always a shocker, but I hate Alice, so she's fine being evil! I'm loving reading this.... :D
     
  16. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    KILL ALICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE HER GUTS. AND AGAIN KILLLLLLLLL AAAAAAALLICEE!!!!!!!!!!!!1
     
  17. Bondgal2007

    Bondgal2007 Rocket Ranger

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    OMg this is so good!
     
  18. SiriCerasi

    SiriCerasi Rocket Ranger

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    KILL ALICE!!!!!

    Yay I'm so glad you decided to continue this!
     
  19. alias8000

    alias8000 Rocket Ranger

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    KILL ALICE!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO ALLY! KILL ALICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  20. SiriCerasi

    SiriCerasi Rocket Ranger

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    Yes, die die die!!!!!!! *ahem* my violent side :P
     

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