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  1. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Ok this is another one I had before the crash SO I am going to do a summary I what I have already wrote.

    This story is about sydney before she was recruited or even knew about sd-6 or CIA. This is before she knew danny.
    She actually works at a bank as the vice presidant. Her life is great with her Best friends francie and will (Who loves her secrately)
    Life has been normal for sydney bristow that is until the day a handsome man by the name of Michael Vaughn spilt coffee on her shirt.

    Someone close will betray her. Someone closer will be revealed and someone Close will try to save her. The only question is who.

    Sydney's search for the truth will be destroyed and everything she had worked for will be a dream.
    The perfect life she lived would be destroyed with these simple words "You need to trust me."
     
  2. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Ok I hope you like it! I'll be writing the ch soon :)
     
  3. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    o i can't wait! this is going to be good... :jump:
     
  4. Alias Elle

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    I remember this one too...

    BTW, that sounded like a movie trailer.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  5. aliasfan_614

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    hehe...i agree...can't wait wait to read the ff! :D
     
  6. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    O did it! :) I just wanted to write a summary. :) O well! :) I will write more soon! I promise :)
     
  7. Sunfire_77

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    Sydney got out of the car and followed the hansome stranger into the big building. She looked around and what was so new to her.

    "Hello Ms. Bristow. I am Kendall (anyone know a first name? :) ) I will be assisting you during this. I see you met your handler already. I know this is sudden. But we needed to do this for your safety."
    Sydney stared at him blankly as if he was a doctor who ha just said she was a man.

    "Um what he means is he sorry for all the trouble." Intruppted vaughn.
    "Ahhhh. ok."

    "Well agent vaughn will tell you about it all,but I must go for now. It was a pleasure." Kendall shook her hand and walked off.

    Vaughn leaned in and started to whisper to her.
    "Now sydney. I just brought you here so you could see that I wasn't lying. We need to go now. and you need to trust me.
     
  8. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    REALLY short... but I kinda liked it!

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  9. spysurfergrl247

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    I like it!!Pleas keep writing!! :D :D
     
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    Alias*Kelli Rocket Ranger

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    That's good, but it was really short! I hope you write mroe soon!

    Kelli
     
  11. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    I am sorry about the shortness but I was in a hurry! I will write more though :)
     
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    I herd this song earler and I though it fit this ch. so Its "Time after time." By Eva cassidy. :) Sydney followed Vaughn to his car. She got in and then he followed her. He turned on the car and drove out. Sydney looked around the nicely furnished car.

    "You must get paid well." She joked.

    He smiled.

    " I saved up to buy it."

    After a minute of silence sydney Sarted to play with the radio dials. She surfed until she found a song she liked. Then she sat her head on the rest and started to hum.

    Vaughn looked over and smiled. She caught her self humming and sheepishly grinned. :shamefullyembarrased:

    As they drove along the quiet moonlit road. The romance in the air overtook sydney.

    "I know you said it is important that we keep driving,but do you mind if we take a break down by the ocean." Asked sydney

    Vaughn contimplated it,but finally agreed.
    As he neared the sandy area sydney took her shoes off and her fancy over coat.
    As he parked she opened the door and took her hair out of the pont tail.

    "I love the Smell. Dont you."

    Vaughn smiled then sydney realized he wasn't one easy one to loosen. so She grabbed his hand and drug him to the end of the sand.

    "Yell as loud as you can." Requested Sydney."

    (Lightly the music starts in the back ground)
    When fall I will catch you I'll be waiting...Time after time.....

    "What? I cant do that."

    "Yea you can. Just tilt your head and let your frustration go. Its really theraputic." Joked sydney.

    Vaughn smiled at her then defeatdly let out a hollar.

    "I hate my job." He yelled.

    he laughed as he looked at the satisfied sydney.

    "Ok my turn."
    "I Just found out my lifes a lie." She jokingly yelled

    They both laughed at the stupidity they were doing. Then Vaughn leaned in and kissed her. he pulled away once he realized what he was doing but then sydney pulled back in and they kissed.
    When you call I will answer I will be waiting... Time after Time.... Time after time....
     
  13. aliasluver

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    great story and i read the beginning before but i must have missed an update the last thing i saw was vaughn telling someone on the phone that he hated doing this. what did i miss?
     
  14. Sunfire_77

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    O you missed him telling wiess that and he told her that he worked for the CIA And he was saving her from future pain now they are leaving it behind :)
     
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    LMAO!!!!!!! I HOPE YOU guys like it!!!!!!!!!!!! I will have a good ch tomorrow! LMAO! *evil laugh* LMAO!!!!!!!! :)
     
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    I will be doing the ch tomorrow or maybe tonight depends,but I did do Mystical agent fire! So I hope you guys like it! :)
     
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    I am hiding in a corner now in shame!!!!! I Have lost thee touch ye go in my pilgrim corner with an Yellow L On me! *GASP* LMAO :)
     
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    The ocean is bombarded with mermaid squirrls who capture Vaughn and make him a mermaid! Sydney trys to save him but turns into a squirrl!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO Actually thats not the ch. SO dont take that serious! :)
     
  19. berry_kyoote_spy88

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    that was pretty good im starting to like this story :P :) please keep posting :P
     
  20. berry_kyoote_spy88

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    please pm meeh when the next chapter is up thanx :P :)
     

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