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my dirty mind at work - hehe

Discussion in 'R-rated' started by vartansgrl, Mar 19, 2003.

  1. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    for future reference i am not a porn fan! i only write and read alias porn i promise!!

    anyways this is my second fanfic, my first was the meeting with fate! anything that's in parenthesis are my thoughts!

    she was staring out the window. she loved the rain. the way it sounded like a million drums going on at the same time. she looked over at the bed. michael was there - staring at here. she smiled and turned back.
    "syd is something wrong?"
    "no everything is perfect - i just dont want it to change"

    at this point he walked over, in his boxers(gotta love guys i boxers and mv in anything or nothing), to her and wrapped is arms around her. he started caressing her neck, then kissing it. it felt good - really good. he turned her around. he looked her in the eyes and then put his lips on hers. they were so warm and soft. she didnt hesitate to kissing back. she loved the kisses he gave her. she felt so loved by them. at this point he pushed back towards the wall. he then picked her up. needless to say the sheet covering her was taken off! he moved his hands up and down her back - he felt her goosebumps. she tried as hard as she could to satisfy his need - his desire for her. he moved back with her attached to him at the waist still. he layed down on the bed. now she was on top and she could do whatever she wanted. she ran her hands up and down his chest and at the same time worked on his lower body(i dont even want to try to describe this - personally i wouldnt mind, and even though this is r rated, i feel that you all get the idea of what's goin on). she started kissing his chest working her way up from waist level ( nothing that perverted was goin on) she heard him groan - she loved it when he groaned, but she didnt stop. she finnaly got to his lips once again - she kissed them. he looked her straight in the eye - he loved her eyes. he rolled her over - it was his turn to work his magic on her and he did (o how i wish it was me, nevermind) he knew excatly what she wanted.

    (damn bell - i'm in school i'll write more later) enjoy
     
  2. AgentNicBristow

    AgentNicBristow Rocket Ranger

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    it was good, but maybe next time you should leave the personal thoughts out...its kinda distracting.
     
  3. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    I actually liked that. But you wrote that IN SCHOOL! It's a good thing no one was looking over your soldier.
     
  4. AgentNicBristow

    AgentNicBristow Rocket Ranger

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    ...and i read and responded to it in school. some chick was lookin over my shoulder and called me a peurvert...whats wrong with sex? :D
     
  5. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    sorry about the distraction. yea i wrote it in school. kids here know me and they know that it's all fiction. now i fi were writing about events that happened with me - then i'd get looked at funny. but agentnicbristow is right - what's wrong with sex?? it's completely normal
     
  6. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    holy jebus! hahaha thats just funny that you wrote that at school. good job though.
     
  7. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

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    oOoOo i sometimes do alias stuff at skool too...but now im home....naughty!
     
  8. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    hahaha oh jeeez
     
  9. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    good job. and yes, sometimes it's better not to describe it.
     
  10. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    Yea, Id have to say so. lol
     
  11. Adriana

    Adriana Rocket Ranger

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    You are one brave gal ;0) Nothing was ever private at my school lol....so i would have gotten a lot of hell over something like that. but anyway.
     
  12. kylo4

    kylo4 Rocket Ranger

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    that's pretty good.
     
  13. *twinkletoes*

    *twinkletoes* Rocket Ranger

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    write more soon! but maybe not in school , teachers can be snoopy........lol write more soon!
     
  14. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    My school would die if anyone ever saw me writing something like that! I mean, people get freaked out when I write about blood in Untitled! But this was... interesting...

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  15. krisAll4Alias

    krisAll4Alias Rocket Ranger

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    You're pretty brave to write that in school. However, I would leave the personal thoughts out too, they are a little distracting.
     
  16. aliasbabe48

    aliasbabe48 Rocket Ranger

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    WOW!! good job!!!! and ur lucky. at least you have time to do something like a fan fic at school. even at home i don't have time!! good jod though! write more-soon!!~*
     
  17. aliasrocks

    aliasrocks Rocket Ranger

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    future cheesy romanece author workin' here
     
  18. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    i put up the second part of the fanfic put it got lost. now i cant remember it!! i feel so bad too! i haven's checked out fanfic or read much online since i have been really sick. i'll to put up another part
     
  19. Alias lover

    Alias lover Rocket Ranger

    good post post post

    ~Kim~
     
  20. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    yea i guess go ahead
     

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