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My name is Devon

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Alias_Freak, May 30, 2003.

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  1. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    It is now 6 years later, after Sloane was killed and the world was a safer place. Sydney and Vaughn have been married for 6 years now and have a beautiful daughter named Devon. Devon looks exactly like Sydney, her hair,lips,face but her eyes are the same shade green as Vaughn's. Irina is now a good guy and always comes to visit Sydney and her grand daughter. Irina loves Sydney and Devon very much and would do anything to protect them. Everything is pretty much the same as it was 6 years ago.

    "Mommy, Mommy!"

    I'll write more later
     
  2. um... a little short, but that's fine. i'll really judge later when i have more to base one.
    --mandy :angelic:
     
  3. *SPYnish*

    *SPYnish* Rocket Ranger

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    It´s Very Interesting, Please write moreeee ;)



    ~Natalia~
     
  4. Alias_luver33

    Alias_luver33 Rocket Ranger

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    I love the fact that Vaughn and Syd are married!! But it is kind of short, though, so I can't really say if it's good or not. Post soon!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

    ~Shammi~
     
  5. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    Thanks. I had to go somewhere and I was in a hurry. That's why it's so short. I'll continue it right away.
     
  6. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    s'okay. cool!
     
  7. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    YOu posted this topic twice. You should talk to one of the Admins about deleting one or something
     
  8. aliasjunkie4ever

    aliasjunkie4ever Rocket Ranger

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    Yep. But you should add that little summary or whatever in the beginning of the other topic, so people understand that Irina is good, and how old Devon is etc...
     
  9. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    Thanks 4 ur ideas. I'm new and I don't know wtf i'm doing.
     
  10. aliasjunkie4ever

    aliasjunkie4ever Rocket Ranger

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    hey, its ok...I know it gets confusing. If you ever have questions, feel free to PM me (with hopes that I can answer them :P). I'm Gigi, btw. Nice to meet ya. :)
     
  11. aliasgurl

    aliasgurl Rocket Ranger

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    umm im kinda confused...isnt this the same story as my name is devon...???
     

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