first - holy awesome! what a cool scrapbook affect
as for what it needs... when i look at it my first thought is that the page with the 2 pictures needs just a little something else... so what i would suggest to fix it - well, to see if this fixes it - is (if possible) offset the pictures... like right now they're both along the left edge of the page and the text is on the rightside of them... but maybe flip the bottom pic so the text is on the left and the pic is on the right... mabye? i dunno...thats what jumped to mind