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Not another Season 3 Story

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by sarahh729, May 22, 2003.

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  1. sarahh729

    sarahh729 Rocket Ranger

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    I have been extremely bored in study hall lately, and this story just came to me, so I decided to go with it. It's not another season three story, just something I made up that probably comes in in the beginning of season two. Enjoy! (I hope) :D

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    “I don’t want to go...I don’t want to leave here...I don’t want to leave y-“ but Sydney was cut off by her father walking into the warehouse.

    “Sydney, it’s time to go,” Jack said grimly.

    “Okay Dad...I’ll be out in a minute,” she said giving him a look.

    He nodded and exited the warehouse. Sydney then turned back to Vaughn.

    “Maybe it won’t be for too long, maybe you’ll get to come back soon. We are closer to bringing them down everyday,” Vaughn said sadly.

    “You know I won’t get to come back for a while until its safe Vaughn.”

    “Yeah...I know Syd. I’m sorry about this.”

    “Vaughn...it’s not your fault. I just wish I knew who ratted out my dad and I.”

    “Yeah, I promise I’ll find who, and they’ll wish they were never born,” Vaughn said passionately.

    “I know you will. I-I-I guess I just wanted to say thank you. Yes, thank you for everything you’ve done for me. I couldn’t have gone this far without you.”

    “Syd...I-“ but he was cut off by Jack entering.

    “We have to go Sydney.”

    “Okay Dad,” she said as she walked past Vaughn. She couldn’t leave though. She stopped with her back to him, then turned around and ran to him. She threw her arms around him and he encircled his own around her and pulled her close. Jack cleared his throat so she squeezed him once more, then let go slowly. She gazed into his eyes and saw friendship, trust, loyalty, and something else she couldn’t figure out. Could that be love? No...he couldn’t love me, he was in love with that Alice.

    “Bye Vaughn,” she said as started to walk away. She was almost out of earshot when he finally whispered, “Bye Syd.”



    So what do you think? Should i continue with this story??? Reviews PLEASE! :D
     
  2. *twinkletoes*

    *twinkletoes* Rocket Ranger

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    Yes please keep going!! That was sooooooooooooooo good
    Mel
     
  3. liliana

    liliana Rocket Ranger

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    yes please keep going I want to see what happens
     
  4. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

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    Yes ! I like it so far- please continiue!!!
     
  5. sarahh729

    sarahh729 Rocket Ranger

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    Here is some more....there will be romance later on, don't worry! :D

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    It was a nice house, with three floors and a front and back porch, white siding with peach shutters. If she could have picked a house herself from any house in the whole world, this would be that house. This house did not stand out however compared to the houses around it. This quiet street, this street you were on, you would never expect you were in Italy.

    Italy was not her first choice. Her first choice would have been to stay in California. To at least stay in the United States would be better, then maybe, just maybe could see Vau-, no she couldn’t see him. She hadn’t wanted to admit it to herself, but she truly missed him more than anyone else. More than Francie and Will even. He was her confidant, her friend, her guardian angel.

    Their covers were father and daughter, husband and wife just wouldn’t work. Their names, Lily and Tom Di Filipo, their hair, a few shades darker. They looked the part, spoke the part, Sydney more fluently then Jack. They had no problem fitting in here. Their jobs, his a security guard at an office building downtown, hers, a waitress in a small café that was also downtown.

    Becoming adjusted to life in Italy was not hard, just without him, it was not a happy adjustment. She could not get him out of her mind. His face was there when she went to sleep, when she woke up, when she swore she saw him walking to a store near her café. She had seen him everywhere. He was who she wanted to see, who she wanted to wake up every morning to. It was after about a month in Italy before she finally admitted to herself that she was in love. In love with her handler, in love with her friend, her best friend for he was the only one who truly knew who she was. If only she would have realized this earlier, then maybe...just maybe...no, nothing could have happened, nothing could happen. Not until SD-6 falls.

    There was that other thing that bothered her and kept her from sleeping some nights. He was in love with Alice. She had that stuck in her head. She kept picturing them together, doing things she wished she could do with him.
     
  6. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    aww this is really good!! you got to kepp gooing!! :D
     
  7. aliasjunkie4ever

    aliasjunkie4ever Rocket Ranger

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    Oooh i love it!! Please keep going!!!
     
  8. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    This is sooooo good!! I love it!! More please!! ;) :D
    ::mumbles to herself:: *Stupid Alice!!* :P
    -Karie-
     
  9. sarahh729

    sarahh729 Rocket Ranger

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    thanks for your nice reviews, i have some more typed up, but i need to edit it a little, so i will have it up by tonight for sure. :D
     
  10. feeling_like_a_spy

    feeling_like_a_spy Rocket Ranger

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    yay!!! nice fic.. really adorable :D:P:) ehehe..
     
  11. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    please post more. i really like it. and mean i really really really like it.
     
  12. Kristina

    Kristina Rocket Ranger

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    I have one word for you "Incredible!" lol did i spell right? This is so awsome keep going. :D
     
  13. sarahh729

    sarahh729 Rocket Ranger

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    here's some more...enjoy :D

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    “I’m off to work, if I don’t come home...it’s because I shot myself from boredom,” Jack said as he walked out the door.

    “Bye,” Sydney said quietly.

    Jack had noticed how quiet she had been lately. He knew she missed her life in LA, her friends, school, but he had a hunch that it was not just that that was making her as sad as she was. He knew her relationship with Agent Vaughn was closer than it should have been. He knew she missed him the most, he knew that was one person she could be completely honest with, be herself with. Jack wasn’t naive though, he knew she missed him and quite possibly loved him. He could see it in her eyes. There was no question he loved her in return, everyone knew that, except maybe her.

    Sydney headed off to work later than Jack usually, usually after a good long jog, shower, and some breakfast. She had become accustomed to working at the café, made friends with some of the regulars, but still found no need to smile, no need to laugh. She realized that she had not smiled nor laughed in over two months. Her father knew of this as well, and was constantly trying to cheer her up, but did not succeed. The regulars were no where near her age, no one to go shopping with, to even chat with. She talked to her father, but could not pour her heart out like she did with Vaughn.



    reviews pleeeease :D
     
  14. sydney_alias_vaughn

    sydney_alias_vaughn Rocket Ranger

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    Please go on great story
     
  15. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!I hope you post more soon.
     
  16. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :confused: ^_^ ;) :P :shamefullyembarrased: :angelic: :woot: (y) (y)

    timmy :blink:
     
  17. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    heheheheheheheh i bet you are typing more right now. so i think i can be patient.
     
  18. sarahh729

    sarahh729 Rocket Ranger

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    heres some more......enjoy :D

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    It was one day at work when the old woman who always came in around eleven in the morning stated to her in Italian that she never smiled, that she needed some happiness in her life. Ok, so even an old woman who I serve tea to everyday is noticing how unhappy I am, how said am I.

    She was bringing the old women her tea one day when she spotted a new customer with his back to her. From the back he almost had the same build as...no, not again, she wasn’t seeing him everywhere again. She delivered the tea, then made her way over to the new customer.

    “Posso ottenerlo qualche cosa, signore?” (Can I get you anything sir?)

    “You wouldn’t happen to have any slush-o’s here would you?” he responded in English.

    She had been looking down but when she heard his voice, her head jerked up instantly. He turned his head to meet her shocked expression. She opened her mouth to say something, but no words came out.

    “Hi,” he added smiling. It was a weak in the knees smile that she dreamed about. She then remember where she was and pretended to write down his “order.” He chuckled at her expression, and she turned to walk towards the kitchen. On her way, she passed the old woman who shouted “Siete ancora felici!” (Your happy again!) She then announced to her boss that she was taking a bathroom break. She hoped he would get the hint. He did and followed her to the bathroom. He wasn’t sure how she was taking his sudden entrance into her life again, but he hoped it was good.



    good, or no?
     
  19. musically83

    musically83 Rocket Ranger

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    wow...I like this!!! keep going, please!!
     
  20. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    Ahhh!!! OMG!! So very good!! Great even!!! :woot:
    More!! More!!
    -Karie-
     

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