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Hey I'm Sarah, this is my first fan fic , can you guys/girls review my first fic and tell me the truth if I should continue. So far I've written the first 2 chaps. And I'll try to post two a week, if i can get time.. hope you like.
Nothing is what its seems...
A love Triangle of a differnt kind...
Title: Chapter 1 Confusion
Disclaimer: I don?t own alias or anything associated with alias.
Description: A fan fic or a different kind with a insight to Sydney?s lost years.
Sydney sat hunched with her arms hugging her knees into her chest in the darkest corner of her damp cell. Her mind had recoiled from the pain into memories of before?
She never said a word, her were dark and vacant as she stared into some unknown place off in the distance. Unaware of the bleeding and the bruising that was being inflicted upon her body. She had simply given up on the world.
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For months on end they watched her as she cowered in the corner of her cell never moving never speaking. Her captors eventually gave up hope that she?d ever tell them what they wanted to hear. She had seemed barely alive since it happened, and still hadn?t uttered a word. The considered simply killing her that was until a visitor came. This visitor turned out to be a representative from Convent who said the she would be of use to his organization which is when he pulled out a sleek aluminum case, which he opened to reveal crisp hundred dollar notes packed tightly to the rim. Her captors were more than happy to accept.
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Three men silently walked down the dark hallway, the only was off their black army style boats stomping in a whimsical manner. These men were all dressed in identical black camouflage gear with flake jackets and AK-47?s strapped across their chests. At the end of the corridor the stopped turned and opened the door to dark cell. In the cell was Sydney hunched in the corner. Two of the men walked over and roughly each grabbed each of her arms and pulled her upright then continued to drag her back into the dimly lit corridor. The third man closed the door and followed them with a firm grip on his gun. Sydney was vaguely aware of what was happening and soon lost consciousness half way down the corridor.
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As Sydney regained consciousness she realized the whole right side of her body was stiff and slightly numb. It was as Sydney started to open her eyes she realized she was laying on slightly damp concrete. Sydney slowly started to get on her feet. And looked at her surroundings in awe. There were piles or rubbish, rotten food, soon the stench overwhelmed her. As Sydney finally managed to stand upright, her neck felt itchy which is when she realized she was wearing different clothes. She was wearing an olive green turtle neck jumper which was irritating her neck and slightly faded jeans. Soon Sydney realized she couldn?t even remember how she got there. Sydney rubbed the dirt off the side of her face and started to walk out of the alley and into the neon illuminates street of Hong Kong.
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After informing the CIA of her dilemma she continued to the nearest safe house. Were she was directed to a room with fresh clothes. She asked him if he knew what was going on but he wouldn?t say. So after she closed the door on her guide she had a shower and pout on the new clothes. She could still smell the stench of the alley way on her old clothes. As Sydney pulled on the grey sweet shirt she noticed a pinkish scar on her abdomen to the left of her belly button.
Just then there was a knock on the door. And Sydney quickly pulled the sweet shirt down. And walked over to the open the door and standing there was?
Hope you like Please Review ~Sarah~
Do you think they should longer??? plz tell me!!!
Nothing is what its seems...
A love Triangle of a differnt kind...
Title: Chapter 1 Confusion
Disclaimer: I don?t own alias or anything associated with alias.
Description: A fan fic or a different kind with a insight to Sydney?s lost years.
Sydney sat hunched with her arms hugging her knees into her chest in the darkest corner of her damp cell. Her mind had recoiled from the pain into memories of before?
She never said a word, her were dark and vacant as she stared into some unknown place off in the distance. Unaware of the bleeding and the bruising that was being inflicted upon her body. She had simply given up on the world.
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For months on end they watched her as she cowered in the corner of her cell never moving never speaking. Her captors eventually gave up hope that she?d ever tell them what they wanted to hear. She had seemed barely alive since it happened, and still hadn?t uttered a word. The considered simply killing her that was until a visitor came. This visitor turned out to be a representative from Convent who said the she would be of use to his organization which is when he pulled out a sleek aluminum case, which he opened to reveal crisp hundred dollar notes packed tightly to the rim. Her captors were more than happy to accept.
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Three men silently walked down the dark hallway, the only was off their black army style boats stomping in a whimsical manner. These men were all dressed in identical black camouflage gear with flake jackets and AK-47?s strapped across their chests. At the end of the corridor the stopped turned and opened the door to dark cell. In the cell was Sydney hunched in the corner. Two of the men walked over and roughly each grabbed each of her arms and pulled her upright then continued to drag her back into the dimly lit corridor. The third man closed the door and followed them with a firm grip on his gun. Sydney was vaguely aware of what was happening and soon lost consciousness half way down the corridor.
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As Sydney regained consciousness she realized the whole right side of her body was stiff and slightly numb. It was as Sydney started to open her eyes she realized she was laying on slightly damp concrete. Sydney slowly started to get on her feet. And looked at her surroundings in awe. There were piles or rubbish, rotten food, soon the stench overwhelmed her. As Sydney finally managed to stand upright, her neck felt itchy which is when she realized she was wearing different clothes. She was wearing an olive green turtle neck jumper which was irritating her neck and slightly faded jeans. Soon Sydney realized she couldn?t even remember how she got there. Sydney rubbed the dirt off the side of her face and started to walk out of the alley and into the neon illuminates street of Hong Kong.
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After informing the CIA of her dilemma she continued to the nearest safe house. Were she was directed to a room with fresh clothes. She asked him if he knew what was going on but he wouldn?t say. So after she closed the door on her guide she had a shower and pout on the new clothes. She could still smell the stench of the alley way on her old clothes. As Sydney pulled on the grey sweet shirt she noticed a pinkish scar on her abdomen to the left of her belly button.
Just then there was a knock on the door. And Sydney quickly pulled the sweet shirt down. And walked over to the open the door and standing there was?
Hope you like Please Review ~Sarah~
Do you think they should longer??? plz tell me!!!
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