Betha Bristow
Cadet
Ok, this is my first story ever so it it won't be perfect. It's kind of short. Please review! :rotflmao:
OH MY
She stared transfixed at her telivision screen. If she moved any closer, she'd collide with her TV. She ignored the faint beep..... beep......beep....coming from her computer. Except for that and the whisper of the telivision, her room was silent. The air was still. Her room was dark. She could feel her heart beat under her shirt. There was a dog barking in the distance. She didn't pay attention to any of these things though. Her gaze never left the TV. She listen really close to hear it though. It's sound was barely audible. You probibly could hear the dog barking two blocks away better. Why? Her mother had grounded her from her TV. And she had to do it on the weekend with the Alias season finale!
Alias. That's right. She was positivly obsessed with Alias. The season finale aired that night, and she'd watch it, even if she was grounded for life! Another commercial brake, damnit! She would use this time to finish her language homework. Coming back to her senses, she noticed her mouth was haging open so she quickly shut it. She couldn't remember the last time she looked at her alarm clock. The commercial brake finished and she sat back down in front of the TV.
Somehow she already knew what was to happen in the next scene, evil Francie was figured out and Syd killed her.It was the scene after that that was unexpected. She also foreshadowed the next sentence "Vaughn, why are you wearing a ring?" She didn't see that her alarm clock had already passed 9:59. Before she had a chance to take it in, before the words "Oh my" escaped her mouth, the screen turned black with white wordsthat spelled ALIAS.
"What?!" She shouted into the still, dark room. She heard the very annoying living room clock that chimed every hour. "Oh my God," she screeched again. All sorts of thoughts rushed through her head.
"How could they leave me hanging like that? 5 monthes, 5 monthes untill Alias premeired again. Poor Syd! Man, how I hate this! I positivly hate season finales, but on the other hand, I love them at the same time. This was different though. This was Alias! I am obsessed with it!!!! How can I live without it?!"
After standing there speechless for what felt like an eternity, she dashed to the one place she could go to disscuss the season finale: AllAlias.com!
She went to the little lap top and punched a few buttons. Then she let out a small gasp of shock...........
:tvhorror: to be continued...............................
OH MY
She stared transfixed at her telivision screen. If she moved any closer, she'd collide with her TV. She ignored the faint beep..... beep......beep....coming from her computer. Except for that and the whisper of the telivision, her room was silent. The air was still. Her room was dark. She could feel her heart beat under her shirt. There was a dog barking in the distance. She didn't pay attention to any of these things though. Her gaze never left the TV. She listen really close to hear it though. It's sound was barely audible. You probibly could hear the dog barking two blocks away better. Why? Her mother had grounded her from her TV. And she had to do it on the weekend with the Alias season finale!
Alias. That's right. She was positivly obsessed with Alias. The season finale aired that night, and she'd watch it, even if she was grounded for life! Another commercial brake, damnit! She would use this time to finish her language homework. Coming back to her senses, she noticed her mouth was haging open so she quickly shut it. She couldn't remember the last time she looked at her alarm clock. The commercial brake finished and she sat back down in front of the TV.
Somehow she already knew what was to happen in the next scene, evil Francie was figured out and Syd killed her.It was the scene after that that was unexpected. She also foreshadowed the next sentence "Vaughn, why are you wearing a ring?" She didn't see that her alarm clock had already passed 9:59. Before she had a chance to take it in, before the words "Oh my" escaped her mouth, the screen turned black with white wordsthat spelled ALIAS.
"What?!" She shouted into the still, dark room. She heard the very annoying living room clock that chimed every hour. "Oh my God," she screeched again. All sorts of thoughts rushed through her head.
"How could they leave me hanging like that? 5 monthes, 5 monthes untill Alias premeired again. Poor Syd! Man, how I hate this! I positivly hate season finales, but on the other hand, I love them at the same time. This was different though. This was Alias! I am obsessed with it!!!! How can I live without it?!"
After standing there speechless for what felt like an eternity, she dashed to the one place she could go to disscuss the season finale: AllAlias.com!
She went to the little lap top and punched a few buttons. Then she let out a small gasp of shock...........:tvhorror: to be continued...............................
