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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by crazy_4_alias, Apr 2, 2003.

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  1. crazy_4_alias

    crazy_4_alias Rocket Ranger

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    Ok, I got an idea and I'll give it a whirl, and it isn't all fluff like I thought it would be!

    Setting: right after SD-6 has fallen.
    Disclaimer: I do not own alias. JJ made these people.

    Sd-6 had fallen! Syd and Vaughn could pursue the relationship they had wanted to for oh-so-long. In fact, they were doing just that. They were sitting on the couch in Vaughn's apartment, eating popcorn and watching a james Bond flick.
    "I'm Bond. James Bond" James Bond said from the T.V.
    Vaughn lkeaned over by Syd's ear. "I'm Vaugh. Mike Vaughn.'
    Syd giggled, rolled her eyes, and threw a piece of popcorn at him. "That was corny"
    Vaughn caught the piece of popcorn in his mouth and ate it. "I know."
    "It's a good thing you're cute" Syd said with a mischevious gleam in her eyes. She threw more popcorn.
    "Again, I know" Vaughn said, ducking the buttery projectiles.
    "That's it. POPCORN WAR!!!!!!!!!!!" Syd cried, pelting Vaughn with popcorn.
    "HEY! No fair. You have all the ammo"
    Syd grinned wickedly "I know." She threw more popcorn. It stuck in his hair.
    Vaughn picked out the popcorn, then made a growl of mock rage and pushed Syd over. Syd laughed and pulled him down with her.
    "Let's get back to the movie" she said.
    As they watched the movie, a dark shape crouched outside one of the windows behind the happy couple, with a gun pointed on Vaughn.
     
  2. sbmv12

    sbmv12 Rocket Ranger

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    DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!! MORE, MORE, MORE!! : :baa:
     
  3. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    AAAAHHH NOOOOO DON'T KILL VAUGHN!!!! And maybe you should ask someone to delete or lock the other one, considering you don't need it anymore.
     
  4. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

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    Pleas write more soon!!Vaughn better not die!! :) :D

    -surfer :cool:
     
  5. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    What is it, with leabing us hanging! I have to know, more, more, more! Very food start!
     
  6. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    oops, I really need to proof read what I write!
     
  7. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

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    o0o0o0 dang so for soooo good! ...dont kill vaughn plz....<=/
     
  8. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    :jawdrop: Vaughn.... :o
     
  9. kylo4

    kylo4 Rocket Ranger

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    This is pretty good. I'd like you to continue this story.
     
  10. crazy_4_alias

    crazy_4_alias Rocket Ranger

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    Ye he he he he! I'll give you the next chapter.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    A couple minutes later Syd asked "Did you hear something?"
    "I don't think so" he said, bu got up to look around anyway.
    BOOM! A single gunshot split the still night, and Vaughn fell to the ground, clutching his right shoulder.
    "VAUGHN! Are you all right?" Syd cried, ducking behind the couch and kneeling beside Vaughn.
    "I'll live" He said through clenched teeth. His face was a mask of pain and rapidlly turning grey. "Call Kendall, or somebody BEFORE you call the hospital. The CIA might want to keep this quiet."
    "OK" Syd said. She began to crawl toward the phone a little ways away from the couch.
    BOOM! another shot blew the phone into 30 pieces. Syd retreated. "felgercarb. My cellphone is in my purse. Ummmm..... plan B?" she asked
    "My cell phone is in my left jacket pocket." he said.
    Gently, Syd pulled out the cellphone.
    "Work is #4 on the speed dial."
    A couple of seconds later, Kendall picked up. "Kendall here." he boomed.
    "Kendall, this is Agent Bristow. Agent Vaughn and I are at his house and an unknownn intruder has shot him. I repeat, an unknown intruder has shot him. he is wounded in the right shoulder. We are trapped behind the couch." She said
    there were a few seconds of silence on the other end of the line, then Kendall spoke.
    "We will send an extraction team to your location. It should be there in about 10 minutes or so."he said
    Another bullet whined overhead. "Kendall, I dont think we have 10 minutes."
    I know. darn me and my everlastin' cliffhangers.
     
  11. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    Trapped on the couch?!?! :blink: It's cute though! ^_^ (chuckles)
     
  12. Moriel

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    i love this fic post more soon.
     
  13. crazy_4_alias

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    I'll try to have more up later today. And hey, at least the couch is keeping them from getting their heads blown off (eww).
     
  14. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    hahaha I like this story cute how there stuvk behind the couch cant wait for more
     
  15. crazy_4_alias

    crazy_4_alias Rocket Ranger

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    I won't be able to update untill tonight. My sig isn't working, so can someone tell me what the heck I should do? G2G, my sis wants the computer :(
     
  16. liliana

    liliana Rocket Ranger

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    um sorry don't know how to fix ur sig.but great fanfic i love it
     
  17. Moriel

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    PLEASE...........POST.............MORE.............SOON.............
     
  18. crazy_4_alias

    crazy_4_alias Rocket Ranger

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    Ok, I have chapter 3. By the way, Sark has quit working for Sloane and has his own operation.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Syd hung up.
    "What is it?" Vaughn asked, looking worried.
    "We're dead meat IF we don't do anything. Extraction won't be here for 10 minutes."
    "Well, what can we do?" Vaughn asked.
    Syd's eyes sparkled "Vaughn, I think I have a plan." She leaned over and began to whisper in Vaughn's ear.
    30 seconds later......
    Syd sat back.
    "It's awfully risky" Vaughn said, his dark green green eyes clouding with concern for Syd.
    "I know, but it's all we've got." she said.
    Vaughn sighed. "Let's do it." he agreed.
    Syd poked her head over the top of the couch, and a shot was fired at her. Sh let out a shrill cry and she reeld back as one hand flew to her forehead. When her hand came away, you could see a bullet hole on one temple.
    "Oh, god! Syd!" Vaughn cried.
    Syd fell with one hand just in veiw of the mysterious sniper.
    Outside, an extremely nervous Russian male spoke into the com. link at his collar.
    "I, um, I beleive I just killed Miss Bristow.
    A clipped British accent came over the other line "You fool! you were supposed to kill Agent Vasughn, not (in an adoring voice) the lovely Sydney. Report back to the base immediately!"
    "Y-yes, Mr. Sark" The sniper said. He then snuck off, leaving the night as still as it was before the first gun shot shattered the peace.
     
  19. crazy_4_alias

    crazy_4_alias Rocket Ranger

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    wow....page 2. That's a lot better than my last fic......
     
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    i love it post more soon!!!
     

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