Hey guys thanks for the awesome feedback. I really haven't had a chance to work on the fic. I have a stupid social science essay to turn in on the 22th and I haven't even watched the movie. So it may take a while for me to actually get to work on the next part.
I would love to get on your PM List. I'm in the middle of finals until tuesday, so life is a bit crazy....but I would love to catch up with this in my post finals meltdown!
You updated! yay! I didn't get a PM, though...unless you haven't sent them out yet...
Anyway! On with the review!
Shower scenes are always always a great idea! This one was so incredibly hot!
:thud: <----- this was me. I was melted into a puddle of drool!
I love how they totally can't keep their hands off each other! And Sydney wants this "getting to know each other" to be non-sexual. Ha! I'd love to see her try!!!
Anyway, I'm totally loving this so far!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
These smilies are my favorite to use when talking about Sark/David Anders/Sarkney: :thud: :stretcher: and
:droll: shower scenes :droll: so hot! :sun:
how could anyone get out of the shower when they were in it with sark!?
you can even make sark sound yummy in your fanfics! :eat:
and i love how thye can go right back to business. "i'll contact you". what kind of boyfriend says that? the sark kind i guess.
anyway great job