Kuzzle
Cadet
Ok, I know it's not technically a technical issue, but I didn't know if there was a place to say it, so I just chose here... Anyway, the first paragraph reads:
"Hero's Journey is composed of eight races. The Stoneborn, Qwi, Ilvari, Mistfolk, Earthfolk, Suwari, Domesticates, and Ferals. Each race has there own advantages, and disadvantages to the others, and will be unique inside the story of Elanthia."
...Yeah... It should say "their", but that's not the issue that made me decide to post this. The... crazy race list thing was the part that convinced me to post it. Just... The Qwi are Stoneborn, and both the Domesticates and Ferals are both Suwari. Not to mention the Ilvari issue...
Anyway, just pointing this out, not meaning to be hyper-critical. It's just, ya know... not accurate. Anyway, have fun.
"Hero's Journey is composed of eight races. The Stoneborn, Qwi, Ilvari, Mistfolk, Earthfolk, Suwari, Domesticates, and Ferals. Each race has there own advantages, and disadvantages to the others, and will be unique inside the story of Elanthia."
...Yeah... It should say "their", but that's not the issue that made me decide to post this. The... crazy race list thing was the part that convinced me to post it. Just... The Qwi are Stoneborn, and both the Domesticates and Ferals are both Suwari. Not to mention the Ilvari issue...
Anyway, just pointing this out, not meaning to be hyper-critical. It's just, ya know... not accurate. Anyway, have fun.
