The whole callback to them going to Santa Barbara, never making it, and what might have happened/what he had planned was the cheesy part ... It's one thing to lie about a fake romantic proposal ... but taking it and basing it in Santa Barbara just tipped the scales of cheese.jems said:soory to come back so soon but i just had to reply to these-------------------------
i didn't actually think the proposal speech was chessy :hide: thats actually why I liked it so much. It reminded me of Friends (see above post) - not a chessy fic.
As long as he didn't say, 'Let's go to Santa Barbara!' - Paris was fine by me. And a big no to going to dinner in Paris with Vaughn.Didn't even romantic suzi like it even a teeny weeny bit??
even that didn't make you smile a teeny weeny bit and wish it were you. i was like - ask me i'll go, take me...meeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!