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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by aliaschica47, Jan 20, 2003.

  1. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    his just kinda when ever no specific time but it is second season

    "ok dixion going radio silent" sydney said
    lazily turning the nacklace in order to turn dixion off
    then pressing the button on her watch she satrted to catch up with vaughn
    "Boy scout this is freelancer headed for the vault" she said to vaughn through the com
    "ok ill see you at the drop off point" vaughn responded
    "going radio silent" syd said to vaughn turning off her com
    racing through the corridor doging security gaurds and cameras, she finally made it to the painting with the vault behind her, pushing the painting to the side she took out the compact marshall had given her to get the combination. Holding it close to the vault she watched as numbers flooded over what looked like a regular mirror
    "ok 47-00-74" syd said to herself opening the vault and pulling out the disks that would supposedly keep peace in a small part of russia
    after clicking her necklace she alerted dixion
    "i will be at the extraction point in 15 minutes" she said only to turn the com of ad turn the CIA issued one on
    "boy scout i have the disk ready for dead drop" she could barley finish before she saw him rushing uo to her turning of his com
    "hey" he said out of breath
    "hey" syd said just being around him made her go week in the knees
    "ok he is the fake disk it should keep Sloane happy for a while" vaughn said
    "ok see you in LA" she said and they both started ti run in opposite directions

    * * *

    "Sydney this mission was a huge success" sloane said smiling
    "im glad" syd said wanting so badly to take out her gun and just kill him
    "ok that will be all" sloane said
    syd stood up and walked out

    * * *

    (next week)

    "so Francie i saw that guy staring at you again" syd commented
    "ugg he is a perv, he looks at everyone like that, even some guys" francie said in disgust
    "sydney of that is the bank i am going to throw it in the toilet" francie yelled
    "ok but i really need it so please dont toilet it" syd said and apologised and headed for her car

    (at SD-6)
    "this is Michael Stephan a head oparative of the tri-ad" sloan said as a picture popped up on to the dozen screens in unison
    "he is in possesion of this" sloane said a picture popping up of what looked like a simple hand gun
    "um what is so special about a hand gun" dixion asked
    "ahh here is the special part, remeber the clock maker you met with a while back sydney?" sloane asked
    "yes" she answered
    "well he made it, it has somesort of unknown use but recently someone tipped stephan off about its maker and it has been put under maximum survailence" sloane said
    "so what is the mission" dixion asked
    "well the next building over will be having a corporate party, you two will go in as party catering services a few hours before it starts, then well you know the rest.... Marshall" sloane instructed
    "oh yes....well this looks like a normal can opener right, you know that you well.....(imagining he is opening a bottle)...oh you wanted white oh ok......" he stammered
    "well no not only does it open bottles but it also,(flipping a small switch and a small device came out) it unlocks and lock you want it to" he said smiling

    * * *

    "dixion I am almost there going radio silent" but before confirmation a gaurd attaced her, she easily got pat him but in her haste forgot to turn off her com with dixion
    "Boy scout this is freelancer I am almost their and will procede with the fake copy" she said
    "syd?" dixion asked through the com
    oh s****
  2. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    hope y'all like it
    i needed something other then a missino to spain for a while!!
  3. vaughnmyangel

    vaughnmyangel Rocket Ranger

    Jan 4, 2003
    Reeallly good! i love it!
  4. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    "syd, syd what the hell is going on?" dixion shouted through the com
    clicking him off syd started to talk to vaughn
    "what the hell do yo uwant me to do?" syd screamed
    "look give me 3 minutes" vaughn said

    * * *

    (at joint task force headquarters)

    "agent vaughn what do you mean by dixion knows?" Kandall asked cursing under his breath
    "it means he heard sydney talking to me" vaughn snapped
    "ok you cant screw this up, have sydney leave the gun for dixion, we cant jepordize that, take bristow and inform us when she is with you" kendall said
    "ok" vaughn answered immediatly switching back to sydney, he was extremely worried by now all the work he had done with her all the sleepless nights he had spent worrying about her he was not going to lose all that
    "ok sydney leave the gun in the car you and dixion came in, and then cintact him let him know where the gun is, give him the real on......" he was cut off
    "no, im not giving SDD-6 the real copy" sydney protested
    "sydney you have to we dont have a choice it is about your safety" vaughn shot back
    "no, look screw my safety and what do you care" she didn't mean to say that she knew that vaughn cared about her but it just came out
    "why the hell do you th...wait just do it syd, then meet me here" she heard him say as she took the gun off of its pedastal
    "fine" she said a determined look on her face
    "vaughn agent vaughn there is a change in plans, agent dixion is going to be taken care of just make sure agent bristow makes it to you ok" vaughn heard from the phone

    Gald you like it more S/V coming your way but if you would give me some ideas for a place for them to stay, i was thinkin ski resort or some kind of beach house or something.
  5. sydbristow

    sydbristow Rocket Ranger

    Dec 17, 2002
    This is really good. A ski resort would be a neat place for them to stay at. But a private beace resort would be even better. :D :D
  6. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    "Syd change in plans just come to me, I am outside the building you are in now, parking lot B in a silver van, just hurry dont contact dixion just come now" vaughn ordered
    "fine" syd said reaching in and takking the gun out of the safe and placing it in the bag
    racing down the hall she turned sharply around the corner and started to run down the steps, knocking out a few gaurds out along the way.
    "what the hell am i going to do?" she asked vaughn slipping into the car and pulling the door shut
    steppping up into the drivers seat, vaughn handed sydney a pair of jeans and a t-shirt to change into
    "so what now?" syd asked out of breath
    "well i think they are going to tell Dixion, and we are going to go away for a couple days" vaughn said so unbeleivably happy that he would be spending the next couple days alone with sydney
    "what" syd said happy about spending time with michael but not about dixion
    "syd its the only way" vaughn answered
    "but" she protested
    "look it is not a far drive put the clothes on and chill" he calmed her down
    after changing syd sat down and fell asleep extremely tires from the mission

    * * *

    "what is going on" said a very confused Dixion who had been taking into custody of the CIA a little earlier
    "we are CIA" said an agent holding up his badge
    "but thats not possible" said dixion
    "ahh but you see you work for SD-6 right?" asked the agent
    "yes" said dixion
    "well SD-6 is not part of the CIA, I can promise you that" said the agent
    "thats not true" dixion wouldn't beleive it
    "oh yeah" an agent said walking through the door
    "yeah" said dixion "who are you?" he asked
    "Agent McKenzie Langley, head of CIA" said the man
    'ohh" said dixion looking beaten down and confused
  7. shakila

    shakila Rocket Ranger

    Dec 14, 2002
    its great please continue. :D
  8. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 18, 2002
    Where the lovers lose...
    This is COOL!!!Keep going!!! :) :D
  9. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

    Dec 30, 2002
    i loved your mission
    and the rest ;)
  10. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    Thanks for all the great feeddback!!!!!!
    im not sure when the next part will be up because some freak tried to hack into my computer!!
  11. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    * * *

    "syd, wake up we have news on Dixion" vaughn said stepping over the arm rest to the back of the car
    "yeah" syd said sleepily
    "ok we have confirmation we officialy have three SD-6 double agents" vaughn said smiling
    "oh" syd said a sulllen look on her face
    "what" vaughn said not understanding
    "well i mean I am really happy about there being another double im just....well im gonna have to tell Dixion I llied to him" she confessed
    "look it will be ok, his handlers eric, and he knows ehy you did it now, he is going back to SD-6 now your dad is covering for you, just as a safety precaution" vaughn said
    "ok but can I go back to sleep" syd asked

    * * *

    "ahh Dixion your mission went well?" sloane asked
    "yeas yes it did" Dixion answered
    "have you by any chance seen Agent Bristow?" sloane asked
    "last I saw her she was headed for her flight that got delayed and took a call from her father" dixion lied
    "ok well I will talk to Jack" sloane said

    * * *

    (small factory on the other side of LA)

    "ah agent Dixion nice to meet you" eric said
    "my name is Eric wiess I will be your handler" he introduced himself
    "nice to meet you" dixion said
    "ok this is a number, memorize it when you need to contact us call this number and ask for one of the following places, that is where we will meet" he instructed
    "easy enough, is that all" Dixion said
    "yes, Agent Bristow is with her handler in an undisclosed location for the next couple days, just incase sloane gets suspicious, so don't bring it up, also if Jack will be helping you at times to" Eric said
    "Jack who?" dixion asked
    "Bristow, he works with sy..agent bristow to" eric said trying not to reveal his and vaughns 'friendship' with sydney
    "oh ok that would explain alot" dixion said

    * * *

    "ok sydney we are here" vaughn said looking back at sydney who was fast asleep
    "ok well you aren't getting up" he said sarcastically
    picking her up and walking up a flight pf stairs which lead to the door
    walking inside he laid her down and looked around the house.
    it was a CIA safehouse but only to some extent, there were no cameras, no bugs, so that no one had a way of finding you
    On the table there were 7 items
    a feed looper
    a bug killer
    two fake ID's
    Two wallets with credit cards and some money
    One emergency phone

    Picking up his ID he stuck it in the new wallet which he pocketed
    along with the bug killer and feed looper

    he heard rustling brhind him, sydney had woken up and sat straight up in fright when she woke up in an unfamiliar place
    "are you ok" vaughn said
    "yeah, where are we?" she asked
    "the beach" he answered
    "we will be here for a couple days" he answered the unasked question
    "here" he said tossing her the wallet and ID
    "thanks" she said pocketing it
    "um what is there to do?" she asked
    "well it is probrabl best that you don't go out in public very much" he said
    "but..." he said opening the fridge
    "we have no food, so i am going to go to the store and pick up some stuff" he said
    "um ok" she said sleep still hanging in every word
    "do you want anything imparticular" he asked
    "ice cream" she said smiling
    "ok im guessing choclate" he said
    "yup" she answered
    "ok looks like we have some movies or TV" he said
    "and the the beach of course, I think are clothes in the closet" he said
    "ok" she answered

    ~thanks for the replies Im liking it so far!!!
    by the way sry i had to stop so sudden but i have to go
  12. Alias

    Alias Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    I like it a lot!!!
  13. aLiAsRaMpAgE

    aLiAsRaMpAgE Ensign

    Dec 5, 2002
    I love you story!! don't stop it's great!!
  14. btvaughn

    btvaughn Rocket Ranger

    Dec 7, 2002
    I just started reading this one and I really like it. Please write more soon!
  15. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

    Dec 1, 2002
    Los Angeles, CA
    Sorry I haven't replied yet. This is good, except it's starting to sound like a mission to spain. Just a thought.

    ~Me :angel2:
  16. aLiAsFaN_14

    aLiAsFaN_14 Rocket Ranger

    Jan 23, 2003
    This is a really good fan fic! PLEASE continue!

    "Write this down, E....M....E....T....I....B, now read it backwords." -Syd

    "Two things, one I dont think it's that big of a risk and two I'm hungry, I'm Starving, arent you hungry?"- Vaughn

    "It wasn't me."-Syd at the airport in The Getaway

    "Are you serious?" Will to Syd and Jack when the told him the truth

    “Man I liked this tie” – Marshall, after just accidentally cutting it

    “Actually, Mr. Sloane, I realized your not wearing the tie I gave you.” (Sloane stares)
  17. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    thanks (alias elle)- sorry i guess it is just my style of writing but dont worry it wont turn out anything like a mission to spain, plus better spelling!!!!!!
  18. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

    Dec 1, 2002
    Los Angeles, CA
    he he- I guess so.

    I like this, it's just, I don't know, maybe it's got the same recurring theme or something... maybe it's just me...

    ~Me :angel2:
  19. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    u sound like my best friend she is always on my case about how ALL my english papers are always the same, just a cuople differnet name changes it bugs her soo bad!!!!!!! I dunno?!! more now
  20. aliaschica47

    aliaschica47 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 8, 2002
    Walking down the isle of the grocery store, he stood there contemplating buying some wine, he was never really a wine person more of a beer and pizza guy but all the same he was still thinking about it he knew sydney liked it. Finally he picked up the bottle of red wine and headed for the freezer section he picked up a pint of ben and jerrys choclate and another of vanilla. as he headed for the check out he picked up a few other necessities.

    * * *

    walking out onto the beach, book in hand and towel in the other sydney sat down and started to read. But by the second chapter she couldn't think about the book anymore, thoughts pervaded her mind about vaughn and stupid protocal, she knew she had feelings about them but protocal and memories of danny wouldn't let them surface
    Suddenly she found herself letting her mind wander to things she knew she shouldn't even be thinking about, but what was the harm of dreaming? Suddenly she remebered her CD player she had, before she had left for her mission Francie had given her a cd, which by chance was in her bag she had with her when she feld to vaughn hitting the play button she laid back and drifted of into an obiss of thought

    Cremson was the color of the sky that
    A sudden flash try to shakes me
    Was someone singing in a dream
    I could not understand the voices

    There's nothing out there
    Am I the last girl on earth
    Don't you want me
    if I'm the last girl on earth
    There's nothing out there
    And I'm the last girl on earth

    Culture that is left behind cannot replace
    The warmth that once was your embrace
    And as far as I can see
    No starfish seas no love
    No love for me

    There's nothing out there
    Am I the last girl on earth
    Don't you want me
    if I'm the last girl on earth
    There's nothing out there
    And I'm the last girl on earth

    Out in the valley of wandering sleep
    The images flood I can not keep
    It's picking me up blind energy
    I'm floating on sensations wings
    Fluttering kisses I go by
    It catches me and soothes my worried mind

    There's nothing out there
    Am I the last girl on earth
    Don't you want me
    if I'm the last girl on earth
    There's nothing out there
    And I'm the last girl on earth

    There's no one out there
    Am I the last girl on earth
    Don't you want me
    If I'm the last girl on earth
    There's nothing out there
    And I'm the last girl on earth
    There's no one out there
    Am I the last girl on earth

    Suddenly she heard someone walking towards her, suddenly overcome with fear she turned around quikly hands ready to fight only to come face to face with vaughn
    "oh sorry" she apologized dropping her hands
    "hey I got some food" he explained
    "ok i was just reading" she said as she gathered up her towel to go inside
    "hey its ok stay I have some stuff I can take care of" he said
    "well i think im gonna go change and swim" she said
    but that sent vaughns mind into a buzz
    "um ok, I may join you later, but I have some work i need to do first"
    he excused he didn't really have work but he didn't think he could take sydney in a bathing suit
    walking up the stairs sydney opened the door and went inside followed by vaughn
    Walking to her room she opened the closet and took out the one bathing suit, deciding between the racing suit or bikini
    finally choosing the racesuit, red with vlack straps and an open back
    sliding it on she picked up her towel and walked back outside

    * * *

    Vaughn looked up from his laptop, he was currently just reading the news trying to keep his eyes out of the window
    but finally he found himself sitting back in his chair staring at sydney laying on her towel (having given up on the water when a jelly fish headed her way) tanning
    he was imaging what eric would be saying if he was here at the moment
    'man I would rather really not have to get a mop to clean up all your drool' he though laughing to himself
    staring at her he thought about his feeling towards sydney
    even though they didnt exactly get along when they met she had come to love him, but he was always a stick by the rule book guy, but when sydney came to his life he knew those days were over.
    Finally even though he knew the sensable side of his brain was screamin in agony over his decision he walked to his room, picked up a pair swimming trunks, a towel and headed outside

    ***Sorry i didnt check SP but i have to run!!!

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