Running Out of Time

[Scarlet Crystal]

cool ^_^

 

[lenafan]

Exciting. What's next? Did she live? Where did she go? Who sees her first?

 

[pennstatechic]

please post more soon, I love this story, and I would love to read more!! Great, keep it going!!

 

[Spoiler]

jeez...that was pretty bad...
The first part was fairly decent. I actually liked the way you handled their goodbyes. But then she "drives around mindlessly" for an hour??? No no no no! Are you kidding? Sydney would never do that. After that, the rest just never rang true. And the news report was just awful. How on earth would they know who was in the car?? This is definitely not a story you should continue.
Try writing a different one. And please remember that a writer should never ever TELL us a story; a writer should SHOW us a story.

 

[Blackavar]

Keep writing, I thought it was great, and the way you switch from character to character is absolutely awesome! Keep going!

jeez...that was pretty bad...

I personally thought that this fic was GREAT. Don't listen too closely to Spoiler, it looks like most of the people who have replied to your fanfic thought that it was really good.

 

[*RougeVixen*]

Thanks to everyone who liked it and if you didn't...well, I respect your opinion, so whatever.

 

[IluvVaughn13]

awesome story i love it keep writing i need to know what happened

 

[Break Protocol: Agent_Elizabeth]

I'm new to this board and just wanted to let you know that you are off to an excellent start . . .I can't wait for more!

 

[aliaschick4mv]

I loved it. But I don't know why it's R-rated. Unless I missed something.

 

[*Agent Legolas*]

OMG!!! This is REALLY good!!!!!! Please write more soon!!!

 

[Scarlet Crystal]

i don't think she'll ever write more. it's been several months.

 

[Adriana]

I love this story!! I hope you continue it....its kinda cruel not to ;0) But anyway. I think you're doing great! Remember, all the positive comments and try not to pay much heed to the negative ones...also..you can normally always learn something from critism...

 

[pennstatechic]

c'mon, post more! I love it and what to find out ehat's going to happen next!

 

[Adriana]

i'm dying....i gotta know what happens!!! plllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeasssssssse post MORE!!!

 

[sydandvaughn4evr]

great story!!!!!! keep it goin!!

 

[~kimono~]

O.M.G. u have to write more soon

~Kim~

 

[aliasgurl]

wat happened to her?? she jus kinda left us here...

 

[Addicted to Alias]

What happened?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? You've got to update, this is great!!! write more!!!

 

[bluheart13]

you really need to write more. and i mean soon. everyone is dying for a new chapter

 

[*twinkletoes*]

plz rite more!!!!!!!!!!