short untitled poem

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Without trust, there is no love
Without love, there is no hope
Without hope, there is no life
And without life, there is no chance.

Everything is intricately entwined
As I am in your arms
Without one, there cannot be another
As I cannot be without you.

Trust in love is beautiful
Though sometimes it is a monster
It can strengthen hearts
But it can also shatter dreams.

Love makes us hope for something better
for love can make us soar
But without it, hope has no wings
And therefore cannot take flight.

(there were a few more stanzas here, but I took them out, 'cause they're... bad. I wrote this 2 years ago)
 
That was great Leah! Honestly....when some poems I see it's almost as if people just toss words in, but yours was definitely thought out and seemed to "fit" the way of a poem. Everything balanced well...and well, that was one of the best unrhymed poems I've seen!
 
that was really good. I love writing poetry but I would never share it with anyone. i really should tho. but it's rather embarrassing. but anyhoo, i loved your poem. it's really pretty.
 
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