C & C some of my recent rys at a new style-CnC

1st attempt-
lelouchsigv2.png

2nd one-
newestcopy.png
 
i told wat i thought of the 1st 1 =/
but i love the 2nd 1, the flow is good, the text kills it ( in a good way ), and it just looks nice overall, the only problem i have, is the lighting, idk if u meant to put the lighting on that left side, or if u just forgot about it, but its not good =]
i love the overall look of it tho =]
 
Second one I think the text kills it, and he seems too moisty/glossy? I don't know what it is but his face just seems to much of something? Maybe sharpen his face?
 
Second one I think the text kills it, and he seems too moisty/glossy? I don't know what it is but his face just seems to much of something? Maybe sharpen his face?

saturated it looks like.

In both sigs the c4d's and renders need to be blended better.
If they were blended better they would be awesome.
 
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