rite, i am starting a new, but please don't add parts of what u want to happen to this, coz i find it hard to continue, and i sort of have what i want to happen in my head, so this time i am going to start characters from scratch....... As Sophie arrived with her long brown hair fluttering in the wind she carried her bags to a table where everyone was crowded around talking to their friends. PLacing her bags on the floor she sighed, and walked a few paces to find a guy telling people where they were staying. Seeing her he walked towards her with his clipboard, "hi and welcome, whats ur name?" "Sophie... Sophie Bonnett." she stuttered, her eyes looking around. "Ur in the Honey tent," he smiled pointing to a tent. Turning round and picking up her things, she walked passed him "thanx" she quitely said as she made her way to her tent, stubbling under the weight of the bags. "u need some help!" she heard a call from behind her, putting her bags on the floor she turned to see a guy running up behind her "it just seems u seem to b having problems carring all ur bags!" he said picking up the heavy ones for her he turned and held out his hand "i'm luke, " "i'm Sophie" she said holdiong out her hand and shoke his then returned to picking up her bags. " so which tent r u in?" He questionned, "coz i need to know where i am taking these bags!" he lightly laughed as Sophie smiled pointing to the tent she had been given "i'm in the honey Tent i was told" he smiled at her as she ducked under to get into the green canvas tent with her things "u know usually people get their parents to do all this, so y didn't u get urs to?" Luke asked as he ducked into the tent Standing up inside the tent, Sophie straightened out her clothes "coz my parents didn't bring me, got taxi here and he wouldn't come and help me. He didn't want to get dirty!" She said as Luke straighten up. "u know i am not ment to b in here!" he suddenly remembered rushing out, " i hope no one noticed!" Sophie followed him out, "me too" she replied as she turned back into her tent with her stuff in a pile while other girls had already arrived and had made their beds and gone to meet their friends. As she began to sort through her things three girls arrived back, all chatting as the entereed the tent. "oh! Hi! u must be Sophie!" said the tall Blonde one, and they all giggled "I'm Rosaline, my friends call my Roz," she smiled then pointed to the two besides her " this is Michelle and Carley" unfortunatly we have leaders too!" Michelle said frowning her blonde hair waving in teh wind, "but they are ok, but still, would b better with out them!" the three girls rushed and sat down on thier beds, "so first time i am guessing!" said Carley "they always put newbies with non newbies, did the same with us last year!" Just at that point someone stubbled though the tent landing on their face. "errr.... Hi!" they said nervously "i'm Sarah!" she said straightening her self up and she was followed by her two parents beinging in her many things.