Sun - A science fiction story

I already posted a link on the introduction boards. I'm not much of a self-advertiser but I'm in true need of hearing comments and advice from fellow sci-fi enthusiasts.

Sun is set far away in the human time-line; A ship, a human and a machine cast out in space, set off on a journey to the search of words long forgotten.

I hope you like it. Please give me any advice you feel worth giving.

Thanks everyone, see you around on the board!