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Sweet Memories

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Sunfire_77, Mar 20, 2003.

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  1. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Hmmm I think shall be a fun one. Since I got the main idea from my pepper sprayed friend. :)


    Sydney walked down the paved side walk that led to her mail box.
    In her white sweater and jogging pants, she Lifted the little red flag and put her mail inside.
    The crisp fall air tingled her nose with the smell of cider and cookies which were baking inside.
    She walked back up and patted her cat on the head before opening her staind glass door.

    "Mom!!!!" Shouted a tiny voice from the kitchen.

    "What is it dear?" She replied back.

    "I think the cookies are done." Said the little voice as the best she could.

    "I'll be right there." Sydney put her gloves on thecherry wood stand that stood by the door.

    It has been three years since the last time she saw Michael.
    The memories pained her so. To think of the day Isabelle was born. The day they said their vows.
    The day he disapeared.
    It seemed like yesterday when Vaughn slowly faded in the fog of the room. The fog that magically carried her out,but left him there. Somewhere.
    It has been 3 years since he disapeared.
    Michael had put a down pay ment on the nicely built victorian house that her and Isabelle now lived on.
    It has taken all of sydney's hard work at the agency to pay for the rest of the house.


    "Mom! I think the cookies are burning!" Said Isabelles as she laughed at the smell.

    "I'll be right there honey."

    Sydney walked over to the picture of the day Isabelle was born.
    She rubbed her thumb across Michaels Warm smiling face.
    She frowned then smiled as she walked to the kitchen.
     
  2. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    OH NO WHAT HAPPENED TO VAUGHN!!! THAT'S SO SAD!!! I LOVE THIS!!
     
  3. Aliasfan23

    Aliasfan23 Rocket Ranger

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    this is good
     
  4. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    *bangs head on desk*

    Sorry, this is a good story. There's just other motives for me whacking myself on the head with my desk followed by a dull machete.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  5. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

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    noo!! vaughn baby!!
     
  6. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    ahhh what happened to vaughnsoooooooooo good keep writing
     
  7. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    Oh yea, I like the angle your taking. Its different. And what happend to Mah Vaughn!!! heheheh keep writing. ^_^
     
  8. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    hehehe Whats wrong? *Hands asprin to alias elle* I bang my head on my desk all the time! Explains the hadaches!

    O and If you dont like it blame my friend NOEL! He came up with the angle!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
     
  9. Alias Elle

    Alias Elle Rocket Ranger

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    Well, thank my friend Erin for the dull machete... it's just, a lot of the stories are starting to sound alike. It's just kinda getting on my nerves. Not that I don't like them!

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  10. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Hm Really! Maybe I should read some! I haven't had time to sit and read so I haven't been paying attention. :) I guess I should shut this one down so it doesn't sound stereo type.
     
  11. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Well O I dont know if anyone else has thi splot but this is what I have in mind and I dont want to say to much! Must keep something for later!

    Well someone (Not telling who) Is after Isabelle and sydney They flee for awhile then Something happens Summary...
    Can they make it or will sydney life be shattered. TADA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And thats all I am saying! :)
     
  12. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    oh no! but vaughn can come back, right?
     
  13. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    Ok So I was really inspired today to write a good ch! And I did at school during some class i wasn't paying attention in...
    I will post it soon.
     
  14. Kristina

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    I like it! keep writing. :D
     
  15. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    I need Vaughn!


    P.S. It's really interesting to hear everyone and the names that they pick for Syd and Vaughn's children. ^_^
     
  16. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

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    You gonna post anymore soon?! LMAO! I'll just sit here on my inflatable orange chair and eat poppy. Oh wait...Mo popped my inflatable chair...damn. LMAO! I forgot to post the first time I read this....eH...ditto what everyone else said, LMAO! I'm too lazy to type everything out! :LOL:

    *runs out of room like a drunken giraffe* LMAO!
     
  17. Sunfire_77

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    Later that night after all the cooking and fussing over cleaning was done, Sydney Quietly tucked Isabelle in and walked to her room.She folded her bed down and looked at the empyt where michael's head use to lay.

    After the the crying she use to do she had no more.
    She got into her Jersey shirt and flannel shorts and crawled into the cold non slept in sheets.
    She took a book from the nightstand drawer abd started to skim the first couple of pages. Then she put it back and turned the light off. But just as she layed her head down the sound of a THUMP! came from downstairs. She quickly opened her eyes and sat up. This time the thump was quiter.
    Sydney,instead of turning the light on got out of bed and headed for Isabelles room.
    Quietly she opened her childs door and peared in.
    There layed Isabelle peacefully sleeping next to her teddy.
    Sydney smiled and let out a deep breath. Then from the corner of her ear she herd voices downstairs.
    She turned in horror then ran to her daughter.

    "Sweety get up. Come on honey." She whispered as Isabelle opened her weary eyes.

    "Whats the matter mommy?" Said Isabelle as she tightened her squeeze on the teddy.
    "nothing sweety. I just need you to be quiet and follow me OK."
    Isabelle nodded and stuck one arm out for her mother.
    Sydney scooped her up and started for her room.
    As sydney got in her room she herd a crash from downstairs.
    The sound made her jump. Her hands shaked as she opened her bedroom window and first with her feet then her head she quietly snuck out. She reached in and grabbed Isabelle out.
    Sydney was glad she left the ladder up from when she was cleaning the gutters the other day.
    She tightened her hold on Isabelle and scurried down the ladder and into the misty grass of her front yard.
    She ran to her newly furnished car that michael had bought as an anniversary gift. She put Isabelle in the passenger seat then ran to the driver side. She quickly locked the doors and stuck her hand under the dashboard. She searched with her hand till she felt the car keys. She grabbed them up and started the car. The ding from belt sign rand two times the defeatedly quit.

    She looked out the rear window and quickly drove out of the driveway. As she started to drive away she saw a light gleaming from her bedroom window as were the livingroom lights on as well.

    "Why did I run. Wait dont say that. You had to run. You had to save Isabelle. You cant bring her up being afraid of life."
    Thought sydney as she stared at the road ahead.

    "Where are we going mom?" Said Isabelle as she stared up at sydney with the most unknowing eyes.
    "well honey we're going to see Grandma and Grandpa."
    Isabelle smiled the started to giggle.
    "Can we get some ice cream on the way?"
    Sydney peeked over at Isabelle and Smiled.
    "You silly,Its 4 in the morning. Way to late and to early for ice cream."
    Sydney smiled then stared back at the road.
    "Oh well it was the shot." Isabelle smiled again then let out a loud Yawn.

    "How much longer till Grandma and Grandpas?"
    With the hand sydney wasn't using to drive with she brushed some hair out of Isabelles face.

    "Sweety you can close your eyes. I'll tell you when we get there." Isabelle yawned again.
    "OK Mommy."
    Then she squeezed her teddy and closed her eyes.

    The whole way there Sydney thought to her self about Michael. And about how happy he was the day Isabelle was born.
    Sydney smiled then snapped back into reality when she saw she was pulling into Her mother and father's drive way.
    She stoped the car and got out. She walked over to Isabelles and scooped her up in her arms.
    "Are we there yet?" Said Isabelle with her eyes still closed.

    "yea honey. Just keep on sleeping OK."
    Isabelle didn't answer. She was already sound asleep.
    Sydney walked up the wooden steps and knocked on the newly painted door.
    Slowly the door opened and Irina peered out.
    "Sydney? Is everything OK?" She asked as she scooped Isabelle out of sydney's arms.
    "Well. I've come here because somehow someone was in our house and it could have been anyone and I-"
    But before Sydney could keep on the bable Irina sat Isabelle down on the couch and walked sydney to the kitchen.

    "What do you mean someone was in your house?" Asked Irina.

    Sydney took a deep breath and began again.
    "We were up stairs sleeping when I herd noises from downstairs, and you know I've seen a lot, and am not one to brush off noises.
    So I took Isabelle and we snuck out. I am sure someone was there,because as we were leaving someone had turned the lights on and.... and."
    Sydney started to cry. Irina hugged her daughter closely.
    "Mom! Ever since Michael disapeared I have been a mess. I mean look at me! I am a desk clerk at the CIA! I couldn't go on a mission let alone taking out people who are invading my home!"
    Sydney looked at her mother.
    "Sydney, You did the right thing by thinking of Isabelles safety and just getting out of there."
    Sydney smiled through her tears.
    Just then jack stumbled in.
    "Hey sleepy head!" Called irina to Jack.Jack looked up and saw sydney crying.
    "Whats the matter?" He asked in his normal self way.
    Irina turned to sydney.
    "There are blankets on the couch. I am going to fill your father in. We will take care of everything. I promise."
    Sydney smiled as Irina hugged her and walked Jack back to the bedroom.

    Sydney walked into the livingroom and layed next to Isabelle. She turned on a nightlight for Isabelles sake. She hugged her daughter close and closed her eyes.
     
  18. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    And dont worry guys! Vaughn will peak his head in sooner or later.......... *laughs evily* DO you think i am crazy! WE ALL NEED VAUGHN!
     
  19. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    WELL, OF COURSE WE ALL NEED VAUGHN!!!


    :P :D :P
     
  20. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
     

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