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Take Care of Yourself

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by lenafan, Feb 28, 2003.

  1. lenafan

    lenafan Rocket Ranger

    Jan 22, 2003
    So. California
    Reposting this story. Loved the idea that Jack would confront Irina especially after he had fought so hard against the two "bonding"
    As always the characters belong to JJ Abrams.
    Enjoy ^_^


    Irina stood at the window looking out at nothing. She couldn’t bear to remember those words she had spoken to Sydney. She had done it again. She had cut herself off from the only person who made it possible to live in this cell. Two days and it was already too long.
    You fool, she thought, why did you do that? She knew though that her wish had been for Sydney to leave the CIA and the spy-game, the danger, the constant living on the edge. She had wanted her daughter to live a normal life and now that SD-6 and The Alliance were gone, she had hoped Sydney would seize the chance. She did not want herself to be the reason Sydney stayed.
    She heard the buzzer warning her someone was coming. She turned around slowly, thinking that maybe it was Sydney, maybe she was coming to tell her she was leaving and would say one last goodbye.
    As the footsteps came closer though, she realized it wasn’t her daughter. She walked slowly toward the window as Jack appeared. She didn’t like the look on his face. Recently he seemed more resigned to her being here and talking with Sydney. She waited for him to speak.
    “How could you do that to her again?” His words were cold and his eyes, unforgiving.
    Her chest tightened in fear. It was fear of now losing the only other contact she had with the outside world.
    “Jack,” she began, biting her lips trying not to cry, “if she stayed in the CIA because of me, I couldn’t bear it. Do you think I put myself in this room or in any prison for the rest of my life because I had a change of heart? When Sydney showed up in Taipei and then in Barcelona, I could only see myself and I didn’t want this for her in thirty years.”
    “Commendable,” he said, “but it seems that she now feels once more abandoned by the one person she wanted to see most.” He stared at her, then blinked, as he watched tears starting to well up in those dark eyes.
    “Thanks, Jack. Her lips trembled and one tear rolled down the right cheek.
    “Irina,” his tone softened, “Sydney was taken by Sloane in Zurich. We don’t know where she is OR if she’s alive.”
    “What happened?”
    He told her quickly. “We need your help.”
  2. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

    Dec 30, 2002
    wow! amazing! do more! :)
  3. Ilikesloane

    Ilikesloane Rocket Ranger

    Dec 12, 2002
    good job
  4. kylo4

    kylo4 Rocket Ranger

    Mar 12, 2003
    Good job! Too bad you didn't continue it.
  5. smegheadalways

    smegheadalways Rocket Ranger

    Mar 29, 2003
    U.K, Liverpool
    more, pleaseeeeeeeeeeee :D
  6. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    East Coast
    :bounces in chair in anticipation:

    OOO I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! PLEASE post more soon! PM me when its up? Please?

    Luve ya,
  7. Moriel

    Moriel Banned

    Feb 27, 2003
    Mafia Headquarters
    this is really good PLEASE post more ASAP
  8. pasta_sauce385

    pasta_sauce385 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 21, 2002
    oh i remember reading this back in the day!! and oh i'm glad i read it again, i love this story!! please post the rest of it!!
  9. liliana

    liliana Rocket Ranger

    Jan 8, 2003
    South Africa
    great story I can't wait 2 read more
  10. K. Ackles

    K. Ackles Rocket Ranger

    Apr 26, 2003
    South Africa
    I love Irina Fics. They are the best. Good stuff!
  11. *SaMs SwEeThEaRt*

    *SaMs SwEeThEaRt* Scout

    Apr 9, 2003
    WOW!!! I almost missed this!!! Very cool!! Please continure soon!!
  12. IDB

    IDB Captain

    Mar 28, 2003
    Soissons, France
    No update ? Definitively ? :(
  13. Aliasmaster47

    Aliasmaster47 Rocket Ranger

    May 1, 2003
    Any more?
  14. Moriel

    Moriel Banned

    Feb 27, 2003
    Mafia Headquarters
    is there more??
  15. Irina_Derevko

    Irina_Derevko Rocket Ranger

    Jul 31, 2003
    Update?????? Well anyway, Great fic! (y)
  16. alias8000

    alias8000 Rocket Ranger

    May 26, 2003
    OH!! This is great! :) Could ya PM me when you update?
  17. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

    Jun 21, 2003
    This is good. Can I get a pm too when you update.
  18. Colly E.

    Colly E. Rocket Ranger

    Jul 15, 2003
    Southern California baby!!!
    Ahh!! update please!!! I wanna see what happened to Sydney and how her mommy helps her out in this one!!! :o :woot:
    Update soon I hope!! I just came apon this fic and love it cause I love the whole Mom/daughter thing with Sydney and Irina!!! :)
    Do you think you can PM me when you get an update??? :angelic: :shamefullyembarrased:
    thanx!~ (y) :P

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