Taken

oh man, angst in the first chapter?! i thought we might get a lil more fluff before the angst set in :( oh well!
cant wait for more!!!
add me to the pm list if it works :P thanks!
 
I hope Beth is going to be O.K, i only hope Sydney doesn't blame Vaughn for too long.

Thanks for the pm :smiley:
 
Oh, I'm excited!! Sequel!!

LOL... I LOVE Eric Here.. Hee Hee.. Freaked out by his own Daughter!

Sigh... Daddy Vaughn.... God, how amazing is he? So perfect....

Oh felgercarb, of course she goes missing when everything is perfect!!

Please keep me on the PM list for this one!! I loved TRT!
 
Oh no... this is just the worst thing to happen when they're at the park. It's like parents' worst nightmare... :(


Great start. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Keep me on the list!! Thanks. :smiley:
 
OO I hope nothing bad happens to Beth!!!!
-Can't wait to find out more!!!
I really like this!!! Thanks for the pm!!
 
At a break in the conversation, Michael looked up to find Beth, like he had a few minutes earlier, but he couldn’t see her. “Where’s Beth?” he asked, trying not to panic because most likely, he was just unable to see her.

“Dunno,” Eric said.

“Help me look, would you?!” Michael snapped as he got up from the bench. He walked quickly over to the wooden jungle gym where she had been playing, but found she wasn’t there. “Beth!! BETH!” he called out, frantically searching the rest of the playground, but his baby girl was nowhere in sight.
OMG who took her?? Great start. Please add me to your PM list.
 
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