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The Adventure of Life

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by alias8000, Jun 5, 2003.

  1. alias8000

    alias8000 Rocket Ranger

    May 26, 2003
    Okay, this is my second fic ever! My first one wasn't very successful but that's okay.

    Author: Erika
    Age: 12 (Okay, okay. I'm not 12 but I will be on June 15, 2003)
    Disclaimer: Unforturnately, I don't own Alias and etc. etc.

    Chapter 1

    Sydney finally had some peace and quiet. Vaughn was on a mission in Cairo, Egypt and she finally got Rachel in bed. Rachel was one hyper 6 year-old. Sydney plopped on the couch and turned on the TV. Nothing good was on so, she turned it off. She went outside and looked out at the starry night. "I remember nights like this," she thought, "It was the week that Michael proposed."


    It was a beautiful summer day in Santa Cruz, California. Sydney was standing with Vaughn on the beach. Sydney was glad that Vaughn was able to convince Kendall that they deserved a week off after all of their hard work. She thught to herself, "I'm so lucky to have a guy like Vaughn. He is all that I every want and need."


    "Huh? Oh! Sorry, Vaughn."

    "It's okay."

    "So, since we're actually here, now what do we do?"

    "Well, I suggest that we first get off the beach and check into the hotel."

    "Yeah, let's go."

    Syd and Vaughn walked back to the rental car and drove to the hotel. It was only the block over which Syd was thankful for.

    After they checked in, they went and took a walk on the beach. Syd was wearing a pair of shorts and a tank top. She was holding her flip flops in her hands to make the walk easier. Vaughn was wearing a pair of shorts and a T-shirt. He, as well, was holding his flip flops. "Hey Syd?" he said.

    "Yeah Vaughn?"

    "Eric has been up here before. He told me about the Santa Cruz Boardwalk. He said that it's a small theme park. It's up ahead. You wanna go tomorrow?"

    "Sure. Sounds fun! I haven't been to a theme park in years."


    It's starting to get late. Let's head back the hotel."

    "Sounds good to me!"

    Syd and Vaughn walked back to the hotel and unpacked. By the time they finished, it was almost dinner. They headed to the the downstairs restaurant. The prices looked reasonable. They went in and ate. Syd had steak and Vaughn had ham.

    After they ate, they headed back to the room. It was sunset and they went out on the balcony to watch. Their room was facing the ocean as well. It was so romantic. Vaughn wrapped his arms around her body as they watched. A few minutes later, it was a beautiful starry night. Syd and Vaughn listened to the waves crashing and got into a romantic mood. Soon, the couple was kissing in the moonlight.



    Sydney sighed. "COMING!"

    Sydney walked up to her daughter's room. "Honey, what is it?" she asked.


    "Do you want me to scare him away?"


    "Go away or you'll be messing with me and my self defense tactics!" she yelled under the bed.

    "Thanks mommy. I'm still scared."

    "Do you want me to turn on the night light?"



    Sydney turned the night light on and kissed her daughter good night. "I love you honey, good night, " she said.

    "I love you too mommy," she said as she hugged the teddy bear that Vaughn gave her for her birthday last year.

    Sydney smiled and left the room. She decided to go to bed. She was exausted from today with Rachel.
  2. alias4life_4

    alias4life_4 Rocket Ranger

    May 6, 2003
    That was a good start! I liked it! I cant believe ur 11...such good writin for an 11 year old. What grade r u in? Interested to hear more....
  3. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

    Jan 9, 2003
    shouldn't matter to you where I live
    :LOL: the boogie man!!!!! That was a good start ^_^ you're continuing right? (just making sure... :unsure: )
  4. alias8000

    alias8000 Rocket Ranger

    May 26, 2003
    Oh! Thanks! Yeah, yeah Jo. I'm continuing with this one. I feel more confident now.

    Oh! Thanks! I'm in 6th grade like any other 11 year-old. I go to a private school that teaches differently than normal schools but I know about all the parts of speech and how to use the punctuation and how to write stories and stuff. I know a lot about grammar already. I dunno when they teach that in public schools but, yeah.
  5. liliana

    liliana Rocket Ranger

    Jan 8, 2003
    South Africa
    cool story i liked the boogie man that was so good i want more please update soon
  6. Flames24

    Flames24 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 2, 2002
    [N]orth [C]arolina aka NASCAR Country
    That was good, Erika. :)
  7. very nice Erika. it sounds like such a normal conversation that you would have :LOL: poor boogie man, he's gonna be so scared of Sydney! :LOL: :ROFLMAO: any ways good start. continue a.s.a.p.
    --Mandy :angelic:
  8. *SPYnish*

    *SPYnish* Rocket Ranger

    Mar 16, 2003
    It´s Good, continue Pleaseeee :LOL:

  9. ILuvMichael

    ILuvMichael Rocket Ranger

    Jan 26, 2003
    nice start! i hope you write more soon!
  10. spysurfergrl247

    spysurfergrl247 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 18, 2002
    Where the lovers lose...
    :thumbup: :thumbup: Awesome beginning!!!Keep bringing!!! :) :D
  11. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

    Dec 29, 2002
    Right where I am sitten
    That was awesome Erika! ^__^ :)

    You are talented.... Cant wait for more.
  12. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

    Apr 21, 2003
    That's a really good start! (y) Please continue! :D
  13. supergirl14

    supergirl14 Rocket Ranger

    May 5, 2003
    it's good, i like it keep going i see potential.
  14. krzykty57789

    krzykty57789 Rocket Ranger

    May 7, 2003
    great start
  15. Alias_luver33

    Alias_luver33 Rocket Ranger

    Apr 9, 2003
    MI, US
    Wow!! Very good! I agree with everyone else, you are talented!! You gotta post more ASAP!! Can you PM me when you do? Thanks!

  16. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    East Coast
    Awww sweet! Post more soon!
  17. SarahMichelle

    SarahMichelle Rocket Ranger

    Jun 2, 2003
    That was very good!
    can't wait for another update
  18. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    My House
    yay Erika! awesome! please continue!

  19. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

    Mar 31, 2003
    the outskirts of HELL
    wow this is a great start!! (y) damn i cant beleive you are only 11!! much more mature and mastering writing then i was at 11!! hope you update soon!!
  20. alias_luver

    alias_luver Rocket Ranger

    Apr 1, 2003
    Racine, Wisconsin
    Thats a really good start! I cant belive ur only 11! Not that I can talk, I'm 13. lol. Good to meet a fellow younger alias fan! :) Write more soon!

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