- Jun 19, 2006
First to respond huh? I'd like to thank you for this book length story. You wanted our feedback, so here's mine. Frankly your portrayal of Irina is not like mine which I told you before on my previous comments. Normally I try to find stories that portrays her like what I have in mind about her. What is the point of reading a fanfic that I don't enjoy, right? I make very few exceptions to this rule for a few stories and for a few writers. I must say that though our perspectives are totally different it doesn't mean that I can't appreciate a very well written story... like yours. Your characterization was consistent from the beginning to the end and also every time you gave us full long chapters following Alias' original story line without any mistakes. You updated regularly with long posts, never allowing us to be distanced from the story. Despite the general dark mood of the story you opted to finish it in a hopeful way, surprising us. That was unexpected from this story. So again, thank you for giving your time and effort and talent to this story for us.