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the meeting with fate

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by vartansgrl, Mar 14, 2003.

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  1. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    it was a beautiful spring morning and syd was at vaughn's apartment. she came in the middle of the night even though vaughn was visiting his mother in france(she visited her and her deceased husband's house in france). she felt more relaxed at vaughn's place like she could be free. she had decided to spend her days there since home was just too sad.
    Home! she knew that being there was just wrong. since the death of francie and will she just hasnt been able to grasp onto life. she had considered leaving the cia, but for what purpose now? the only reason before was so that she could finally lead a normal life, to be able to talk to her friends and not have to search the depths of her soul to find a little truth about her work and herself. syd decided to call into work today - a mental health day. kendall wasnt even gonna try disputing it with her, he had noticed a significant change in her whole attitude - she just wasnt the same.
    Syd got dressed - light jeans and a green tank top. she grabbed her purse and walked out the door. she thought about taking her car, but then realized how beautiful it was. she walked down the streets of LA. the sun was shinning so beautifully. she walked around for a while, just window shopping. everything reminded her of someone or something that had meaning to her life. she saw a robe and realized that her father's birthday was on sunday(march 16). she went in the store and purchased the robe for her father. she went back out to the busy streets of LA. she passed a jewlery store but then went back. she saw a watch that reminded her of vaughn. she knew that he had one already, one form his father that meant so much to him, but a gut instinct told her to buy the watch and vaughn himself told her not to go against her instincts!
    she walked in the store and walked towards the watches. "the watch in the window, how much is it to engrave it?" she asked the salesman. "the actual watch itself is about $250 and to engrave well it's about .60 cents per letter" he responded. "i'll take it" syd replied. "ok wat would u like to engrave i the watch miss?" syd didnt respond. she knew that she wanted it to be something sentimental that vaughn would remember her by. so she thought long and hard about it. finally she came up with the perfect message: "My Gaurdian Angel, now i can watch over you" When the salesman read the message he was a bit confused, Syd knew what the message meant and as long as vaughn knew, than all else didnt matter.
    the man told her that the watch would be ready in about a half an hour. he suggested that she go to the cafe for a good cup of coffee.
    syd walked into the cafe and ordered a french vanilla coffee and a how sticky bun. she walked outside and sat a table waiting for the time to go by. she wandered into thought vaughn - michael. she wondered what he was doing this minute. she wondered if he had mentioned her at all to his mother. then she figured that maybe it wasnt such a good idea, considering her family's past with his. she couldnt wait for him to come home. she felt a chill go through her body. she longed to be held in his arms, she knew that he was returning the next day, but she still coulndt wait. she looked down at her watch and noticed that the time was almost up. she threw out the cup and proceeded to the jewlery store. a few minutes later she walked out with a nicely wrapped box.
    she strolled down the street absorbed in thought about numerous things. she walked around. she went through the park and passed the cia building - not even caring about work. before she knew it she was back at vaughn's apartment - not knowing how she managed she walk there but she didnt care. she looked at the time. wow it was late! just then she heard michael's pfone ring, she thought about picking it up but then thought that it might be a bad idea and let the machine get it. it was michael! "syd look i have been calling your house but there's no answer, so ithought that maybe you'd stop by mine. anyways, i'll meet you tomorrow at that Italian restaurant on market street. be there for around 630. i am going straight there fro the airport - dont worry i'll be dressed properly." wow she couldnt believe it. michael was taking her out to dinner his first night back. she decided to wear her speghetti strap black dress with the rhinestone top. she couldnt wait.
     
  2. aLiAsFaN_14

    aLiAsFaN_14 Rocket Ranger

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    more ASAP - this is a GREAT story!
     
  3. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

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    Yes, this is a great story!! I hope you post more soon!! Actually...i won't be able to read it until next Sat...(not tomorrow, the one after) DAMN!! I'm gonna have a lot of catch up to do on all these stories! Oh well, still, Great story! :D
     
  4. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    This is good! :D
     
  5. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    o thankx guys this is my first fanfic i am gonna try and post more tonight
     
  6. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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  7. vaughnscaligurl47

    vaughnscaligurl47 Rocket Ranger

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    wow that is really good it seems like the thoughts and things are realy what syd would do and think. post more ASAP i lover reading this!

    LAUREN :super: TEIMLE
     
  8. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    o thankx guys this is my first fanfic i am gonna try and post more tonight
     
  9. jaco16syd

    jaco16syd Rocket Ranger

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    keep going...we want to know what happens ;)
     
  10. IluvVaughn13

    IluvVaughn13 Vaughnster's Girl

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    ahhhhh i need more lol write more soon
     
  11. nancee

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    oOoOo good one!!!!
     
  12. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    syd fixed her hair. it was long and straight - just how she liked it. she put on just a little makeup only because she remembered michael telling how he hated her in makeup because it hid her natural beauty. she checked one last time in the mirror just to make sure that everything was okay - perfect she thought to herself. she looked at the clock realizing that it was ten to six she walked out of his bedroom. she grabbed her purse, shawl ( personally think that shawls make a woman sexier i dunno), michael's gift, and her keys. she got into her car and drove towards the restaurant. she was so happy at the thought of just seeing him again. she wanted to ask him a dozen questions but couldnt decide which to ask first. how was your trip? how is your mom? she couldnt chose one. then she thought why waste her - thier time, with a question. just walk up to him and give him the best kiss that you have in yourself she thought. the restaurant - it's time
     
  13. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    what do u think should ahppen next?? i mean i have an idea - but i'd like to hear what others think first. then i'll make a decision.
     
  14. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

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    oOoOo sweet!
     
  15. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    great so far!
     
  16. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    she walked into the restaurant not knowing what to expect. not knowing what was going to happen next. all she knew was that she was going to see michael for the first time in two weeks!! she couldnt wait. the host told her that her party had not yet arrived. she said that she would be waiting at the bar and politely asked that he inform her when her party arrive. he suggested that she order a drink. she walked up to the bar and sat on one of the stools. the bartender asked her what she would like. after a moment of thought, she decided that she would have a dry martini - it just seemed appropriate to her. she took a sip, but couldnt focus on the drink. she twirled the little toothpick with the olive on it.
    just then vaughn walked in. syd had been so absorbed in thought that she didnt even realize he had walked in. vaughn couldnt believe how beautiful she looked. the host directed him to the bar. as he was approaching syd noticed he was coming at her. she was overjoyed at the sight of him. she promptly got up from her seat with the biggest smile on her face. her smile told him everything. he felt the same way but didnt even waste time with trying to talk. he embraced her but couldnt wait any longer and quickly rushed into a kiss. a deep kiss and probably thier most meaningful one yet. after a minute vaughn pushed away remembering that they were in a public place. just then sydney noticed something. something very alarming.

    dum!dum!dum!
     
  17. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    :jawdrop: WHAT'S ALARMING!!! WHAT COULD POSSIBLY BE SO IMPORTANT TO RUIN THEIR MOMENT!!!! (lets out breath) :shamefullyembarrased: That was such a sweet moment though.... :shamefullyembarrased:
     
  18. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    Oh, and by the way, try to space out a little bit. Reading this is kind of like trying to walk through a forest with all these bushes and brambles in the way. Your writing is really great though!! :D
     
  19. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    thankx for the compliment. i'll try to write a little more spaced out i promise.
     
  20. kleverkitten

    kleverkitten Rocket Ranger

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    Thank you!! :shamefullyembarrased:
     

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