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The Reaction

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Aliasgirl47, May 22, 2003.

  1. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    My House
    My poem on the reaction to the finale...

    I sat on the couch
    A pillow I squeezed
    I shouted out it terror
    And fell down to my knees
    Vaughn's hand had gone up
    There was a ring on his finger
    The pain and shock of it all
    In the room did linger
    I stood up and screamed
    The pillow I bit
    A shrill shreik came from me
    And the floor again I hit
    I threw down the pillow
    And stomped on it hard
    From this one moment
    I'd forever be scarred
    It couldn't be Alice
    If it was I would cry
    Not only that
    But I believe I would die
    The whole world would end
    My life would be over
    How could someone like Alice
    Be his new lover?
    No, it can't be
    I'm now in denial
    Without Syd with Vaughn
    Nothing's worth while
    I then sat alone
    In my living room
    All the while thinking
    Fall can't come too soon
    Waiting all summer
    Is going to kill
    To the nuthouse I'll go
    Not of my free will
    So to all the others
    Who are feeling my pain
    You are not alone
    Be assured I feel the same!
  2. Moriel

    Moriel Banned

    Feb 27, 2003
    Mafia Headquarters
    good poem that pretty much describes all of us s/v shippers
  3. nance

    nance TUMS

    Apr 18, 2003
    :( yes... exactly how i felt!!! and i did those things too!!!! what a great poem!!! :)
  4. aliaschick820

    aliaschick820 Rocket Ranger

    Mar 4, 2003
    somewhere in NJ
    lol, yup exactly.
  5. Alias_Gay

    Alias_Gay Rocket Ranger

    Jan 27, 2003
    (y) great poem ... (y)
  6. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

    Jun 21, 2003
  7. obsessetion

    obsessetion Rocket Ranger

    Jul 25, 2003
    great poem!!! :D
  8. Sarah Vartan

    Sarah Vartan Rocket Ranger

    May 20, 2003
    Sweet poem!!! Exactly how i felt ;)
  9. smarterchilds child

    smarterchilds child Rocket Ranger

    Oct 1, 2003
    ahhhh that is a great poem :)

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