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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by i want vaughn, Apr 19, 2003.

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  1. i want vaughn

    i want vaughn Scout

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    ok well this is my first fan fiction so..yeah


    Chapter 1

    Sydney woke up, looked at her alarm clock, it said 3:30am. She was contemplating wether to get up or not. She finally decided at about 4am that she should get up and go for a run.

    When she returned from her run, there was a message her voice mail on her cell. It was fron Vaughn. The message said "Syd its me Vaughn. You have to get down to the CIA asap, theres a crises with the computers someone hacked in and stole all the files. I'll give you more details when you get here."

    *****

    Sydney got the CIA asap "Hey Vaughn! Whats going on?"
    "Well sometime between last night at 12pm and this morning at 4am someone sole all the files on all the computer."
    "What about the security cameras?"
    "The power was shut off and the wire for the camers cut, before the power turned back on."

    "Sydney, so I guess you've heard?" said Weiss (<---sorry if not splet right)
    "Yeah, why would someone want to do that?"
    "Well we dont have any leads yet, but we're getting finger print dusting, until then theres nothing we can do."
    "So basicaly no work until then?"
    "Well not exactly, you still have a mission. You have to go to Barcelona, Spain. We think that Sloane might be there."
    "When do we leave?"
    "Tomorrow night"

    *******

    The next night Sydney and Vaughn got all their stuff together an left to go to Barcelona. They settled in at the hotel, and then started.

    Sydney went to a bar where they think Sloane might be hiding. In the bar there was a back room. THe only place in the bar where Sloane could be. Sydney found a guard, and knocked them out, and stole their VIP pass.

    ok well first chapter done...i hope you like it...sorry if it sucks! ill stop if it does just tell me...
    -jenn-
     
  2. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    This story doesn't suck at all!! It has great potential!! (y) (y) I think you should continue. :D
    -Karie-
     
  3. smegheadalways

    smegheadalways Rocket Ranger

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    I like, write more :) !
     
  4. aliasgirl89

    aliasgirl89 Rocket Ranger

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    (y) This story isnt stuid(lol) at all Jenn! I'll bug you at school for the next chapter! Emma( :ph34r: ) will too!
    ps great story
    :D ~ASH~ :rolleyes:
     
  5. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

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    o0o0o really good...post more
     
  6. i want vaughn

    i want vaughn Scout

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    Chapter 2

    As Sydney walked to the back of the bar, she saw two big humungous guards. She thought to her self, "they wont be a problem, this is why women have boobs" (tee hee<-thought that was funny)
    "Im sorry miss this is a rescrited area"
    "oh really...thats too bad" Sydney said as she smuthered herself in ice...(tee hee)
    "umm well sure you can go on ahead, no problem"
    "Thanks. Down Boy"she said as she looked down

    As she entered the back room there was no one there. Just a couple of leather chairs and a leather couch. But there was also a computer, Sydnet turned it on. Nothing just the normal everday thing.

    "Vaughn nothing"
    "go through the door on your left"
    "wat door?"
    "behind the couch"
    Sydney moved the couch out of the way and kicked the door down has she held out her gun. The room only looked like an empty basement.
    "again nothing Vaughn"
    "alright i guess this isn't the place then. Comeo n back to the hotel"

    ******
    Sydney arrived to the hotel. Vaughn and Weiss waiting in the hotel room. Syndey and Vaughn just looked at eachother for at least 15min straight before Weiss decided to leave the room. When he did...well you know what happened between Sydney and Vaugh :shamefullyembarrased:

    ******
    When they got back to LA. There was more information on the masked person who stole the files. Suposedly they were in the US. Actaully they were in California. So all they had to do was find anyone working for SD-6 in California.

    So they went searching on the computers for people working for SD-6 but then they remembered that there were no files on the computer. So Sydney had to go to SD-6 and get a list of all the people working for SD-6 in California. So she did. She printed it out and went back to the CIA.
     
  7. nancee

    nancee Rocket Ranger

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    hmmm theres really not alot this time...but good!
     
  8. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    ha this is funny i love the part with syd and the men!!! hey keep goin!! :D (y)
     
  9. aliasgirl89

    aliasgirl89 Rocket Ranger

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    Now if you hadnt told me that lign already Jenn it would have been better you just had to say it! awell loved it still!
    ~ASH~
     
  10. i want vaughn

    i want vaughn Scout

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    ty..cool thanks guys...
     
  11. smegheadalways

    smegheadalways Rocket Ranger

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    Good fan-fic :D ! More please!
     
  12. alias_luver89

    alias_luver89 Captain

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    Too bad you'r not gonna continue ur story jenn. It was good you should continue ah well. i just wrote this so i can get 10 posts now i have 10 i'll leave. but you sould write more
    ~Emz~
     
  13. freelancer2bootcamp

    freelancer2bootcamp Rocket Ranger

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    thats really good! keep going! i like i like i like! more more more!

    <3, Kailyn
     
  14. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    good first two chapters. post more.
     
  15. Agent Jadelyn

    Agent Jadelyn Captain

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    Great story keep writinh
     
  16. Agent Jadelyn

    Agent Jadelyn Captain

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    this is great keep writing
     
  17. alias_luver89

    alias_luver89 Captain

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    K well since you aren't going to write any more i'll just comment so i' can get to 25 posts
    ~Emz~
     
  18. alias_luver89

    alias_luver89 Captain

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    Hehe only two more nearly there
    ~Emz~
     
  19. alias_luver89

    alias_luver89 Captain

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    never mind
     
  20. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    wait...there won't be anymore?

    and alias_luver, please don't spam ;)
     

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