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Discussion in 'R-rated' started by Digiti Minimi, Mar 11, 2003.

  1. Digiti Minimi

    Digiti Minimi Scout

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    Vaughn and Syd sat in the moonlight sipping champagne and feeding each other strawberries and chocolates. The twinkle of the stars glistened in the dew drops on the grass making it look like they were sitting in a field of diamonds. Vaughn slipped his arm around Sydney's waist and pulled her closer whispering in her ear,
    "These chocolates are heaven. Where did you say you got them?"
    "I found this quaint little chocolate shop in Brussels while you were taking care of buisness. I walked past the window and couldn't resist when I saw the display."
    "Well, I'm glad you were tempted."
    "So am I" she laughed.
    "I love that dimple when you laugh" Vaughn said lifting his hand lovingly to her left cheek.
    "Just there" he said kissing the spot softly.
    The kiss shifted to her mouth, softly at first, but becoming deeper as Vaughn pulled Syd to the ground. Syd let out a yell as the cold champagne in her hand tipped over her and trickled down the nape of her neck and into her cleavage. Syd pulled her now wet t-shirt up over her head and threww it across the garden. She looked down at her damp, sticky skin and said in a scolding manner,
    "Michael Vaughn, didn't your mother ever teach you to clean up when you make a mess?"
    "She sure did!" he said scooping Syd up in his arms and pulling her back onto the wet grass as he slowly began to lick up the champagne from her d├ęcolletage.
    "That tickles" Syd giggled as Vaughn slipped his hands around her back and unclasped her bra and slipped the straps down her arms. As the fabric brushed her fingers Syd grasped the straps and smiled with a wicked glint in her eyes.
    "Let's be bad" she said grabbing him by the collar and pullinig him towards the washing pole. Standing tall Sydney commanded
    "Back to the pole and hands behind you."
    Syd stepped behind him and tied his hands to the pole with her bra. Syd hooked her leg around Vaughn and slipped in front of him. She paused for a moment before ripping off his shirt. Buttons popped! She slid her hands down his chest to his belt which she pulled from the loops and cracked it against her thigh. A shudder ran up Vaughn's spine. Syd undid his trousers and slipped her thumbs into the waist band pulling them and his boxers down. Syd moved down rubbing herself against him, and then the heavens' opened.

    The rain came down heavily and Sydney ran for the house.
    "Hey" Vaughn called "are you just going to leave me here to get all wet?"
    Sydney smiled, "well that was the general idea, but I'll set you free......for now."
    Syd untied him and together they ran into the house. Both of them were now soaking wet so Syd removed the rest of her clothes. Forcefully she shoved Vaughn onto the couch and climbed astride him pinning his arms to his sides. As she slid down him Vaughn let out a slow moan and the door behind them clicked.

    Sydney sat bolt upright and turned her head. She found herself looking into her friends' eyes.
    "OH God Will!" she exclaimed
    Will averted his eyes, a slight flush in his cheeks and mumbled,
    "I need a stiff drink."
    "Are you sure? I know what you really need." Syd said provocatively as she dismounted Vaughn and prowled towards Will like a panther eyeing up her prey. She grabbed his shoulders and rammed him against the door causing it to slam shut behind them. Syd slid her hand under the waist band of his jeans to his groin and began to massage his goods. Will started to protest but then let her get on with it as a shiver ran up his spine. Vaughn watched as Syd removed Will's jeans and got down onto her knees. Despite himself he was unbelievably turned on and began to masterbate. Just before he climaxed Will came and Syd crossed the room to the couch and finished the job.

    To be continued..................
     
  2. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    umm, okay...
     
  3. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    Ok, um I get the title. Didn't I see this under the things that would NEVER happen on Alias?
     
  4. AgentNicBristow

    AgentNicBristow Rocket Ranger

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    i hate ragging on any fan fics, but this was bad, and not even a possibilty. also, if you are going to write an R rated fan fic, be mature about it. "goods" is not it. maybe leave it vague, or just say, PENIS.
     
  5. Digiti Minimi

    Digiti Minimi Scout

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    Reply to aliaschick4mv,
    Well duh! this is fan FICTION, get it.


    let's try to be nice. Everyone is entitled to their opinion, so there's no need to be rude

    Kewii
     
  6. Digiti Minimi

    Digiti Minimi Scout

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    Reply to AgentNicBristow,
    For your information we are very mature and penis is not a rude word only suitable for R-rated, it is in fact an anatomical word. Also we were not only refering to his penis but everything, his penis, scrotum and testis.
     
  7. AgentNicBristow

    AgentNicBristow Rocket Ranger

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    thats what im saying, use an anatomical term, not "junk" or "goods". it sounds like a 10 yr old wrote it with those words.
     
  8. vartansgrl

    vartansgrl Rocket Ranger

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    wow okay

    it started out okay - actually a little cute but i really dont know what the hell happened i mean syd having a threesome with will and vaughn - omg no

    then vaughn actually being turned on by this i mean come on did u seriously think that this would go over that well. i dont ususally put down fanfics but this one was just way too unreal for me to imagine
     
  9. AgentNicBristow

    AgentNicBristow Rocket Ranger

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    exactly...R-rated fan fics should be to create stories about what could possibly happen in their love life. i doubt a 3 some is believable, especially with the type of people syd and vaughn are. And what really makes no sense is that vaughn was turned on by this will thing. what guy wouldnt be extremely mad to find his GF with another guy?
     
  10. AgentNicBristow

    AgentNicBristow Rocket Ranger

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    and digiti minimi, who is we?
     
  11. Digiti Minimi

    Digiti Minimi Scout

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    Ok well three peple wrote this story so when my friend replied to it she just kinda said 'we' instead of 'i'. I do agree that this probably, in fact would never happen but it was just some really crazy thought we had one night. I don't actually know what possesed us to write it but what the hey!
    I'm the first one to admit that its really felgercarb so thats fine.
     
  12. Adriana

    Adriana Rocket Ranger

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    umm, i'm not sure how to feel about this one....i don't want to be negative...so i won't. yeah...i'll just leave it at that....
     
  13. Vaughn_Lovah

    Vaughn_Lovah Vaughn's Chin Fondler

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    it would be almost decent without the whole 3 some thing. Thats just tasteless.
     
  14. mer_vaughn

    mer_vaughn Rocket Ranger

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    I'm not trying to be mean but I didn't enjoy this at all. I didn't think it was too provocative ut it was unrealistic. I understand that these are fan FICTIONS but the characters are from the show. They need to stay the same. The events can change but no the people. Sydney and Vaughn would never do that. I don't think Will is that depserate either. Sorry. :o
     
  15. AgentNicBristow

    AgentNicBristow Rocket Ranger

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    besides will has freplica, remember??? ;)
     
  16. aliasbabe48

    aliasbabe48 Rocket Ranger

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    i agree with everyone else. the beginning was a little less than ok well actually it was so not syd and vaughn. i don;t think the dirty type of couple and that was reaallly dirty but good description. and the 3some. EEEWWWWW! yuck. i hated that part. ur story was reallly dirty. sorry*~ i'm not trying to be mean. i'm sooo sorry:(
     
  17. Vannie

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    I'm nnot trying to sound mean or critical, but this is just wrong. In writing fanfiction one of the unwriten rules is you have to keep the characters in check with their original personalities, for instance she could be spotaneous like that and go for sex o the couch, but she would never have a threesome with her best friend. And will would never do that, because even he can see that S/V are meant to be and is not that desperate. And Vaughn would never do that, he's just toomoralic and ethical, I'm not saying he isn't able to do interesting things in the bedroom, he probably can, but he'd never just have a threesome like that it's unrealistic. that' all I can say. Thanks for letting me rant on you.

    Brittany
     
  18. Caro

    Caro Rocket Ranger

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    i thought it was fine until will came along. sorry
     
  19. ILuvMichael

    ILuvMichael Rocket Ranger

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    vaughn to me just seems like a private kind of guy, and sydney, well, she seems like a private kind of girl, but that may just be me...
     
  20. Eat Sleep Alias

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    I have no problem with the whole believeablity issue.. I mean, it's fine to write non-canonical fanfics. But please get rid of the euphemisms! please! I beg of you.
     

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