Yeh man, i liek this one.
The over all colors and C4d etc etc you use are perfect, i dont see any Text...
But it might just be my screen
My only suggestion would be to add some depth, like darker gradient set on soft light, and on 50-70 op.
Try it, see what happens
Thanks everyone. Yep, there's a wireframe lurking there The text isn't amazing, I know. I tried to make it small and hard to notice, but I wanted to practice my text to try and improve it. Didn't go so well lmao.