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Twisted Bedtime Prayer

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Aliasgirl47, Jun 12, 2003.

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  1. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    my friend wrote this and sent it to me, so go ahead and read

    now you lay there fast alsleep.
    you pray the lord my soul he'll keep.
    but i shall die before you wake.
    and satan i know my soul he'll take.
    for i have been a bad bad girl
    and i've taken to things that are in this world.
    i've stole i've fought ive cheated and lied.
    and along the way i've almost died.
    so here is my prayer my wish my plea.
    that all of the pain will be taken from me.
    as of now i sit here and watch you breathin'
    knowing inside im a little damn heathen.
    i watch you chest rise up and down.
    and want to plant this knife through you to the ground.
    but you never did a thing except help and try
    so instead of murder i choose to walk out and cry.
    i walk to my room with this knife in my hand
    and i walk to the window and cry where i stand.
    and as i look down i can swear that i see
    a red horned demon beckoning me.
    so i know i shall die before you wake.
    and i now know for sure my soul satan will take.

    ok now don't worry, she isn't going to kill hersekf. she assured me of that
     
  2. Victoria King

    Victoria King Rocket Ranger

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    wow thats really good, INCREDIBLY CREEPY!
    lmao but good!
    i was really creeped out by it but how she worded things was good, im glad she didnt kill whoever she was going to though!creepy......
     
  3. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    yeah, kiela writes stuff like this all the time, i think she could be like poe or something, lol! but she would never kill herself, no worries there
     
  4. alias_fan

    alias_fan typically terrific

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    that's awesome! incredibly scary but still awesome!
     
  5. Betha Bristow

    Betha Bristow Rocket Ranger

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    omg, that was soo scary! I think I was crying...lol. Freaked me out. I'm serious. I thought of this: :devil: . I'm not kiddin'!


    maybe I don't wanna be Morgoth's grand daughter...lol
     
  6. Flames24

    Flames24 Rocket Ranger

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    That was scary, but good.
     
  7. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    I'm spooked. Good but spooky.
     
  8. Betha Bristow

    Betha Bristow Rocket Ranger

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    that's a good thing...
     
  9. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    creepy... and it rhymes
     

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