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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by spy_girl21, Jun 25, 2003.

  1. spy_girl21

    spy_girl21 Rocket Ranger

    May 16, 2003
    Hello to you all! This is my first fan fic. So I hope you people's like it. It's rated in between PG and PG-13. It's a S/V romance and i don't know for sure yet but there might be some S/W romance (don't quote me on that though)

    Sydney Bristow had waken up in Hong Kong, in different clothes, and craving for a shower. She finds the nearest phone and dials. "This is officer 23300844 calling for connection confirmation Looking Glass," Sydney waits looking around in this strange town.And then she realizes she was connected."hello?'' the familiar voice of Kendall says,"Get to our safe house in Sin Swa Sway as quickly as possible. Do you remeber how to get there?"
    "Of course I do."
    "I'll make sure they're expecting you."
    "okay" then she hangs up. when she arrives at the safe house a chinese man leads her to a room with a woman crying in the background."have they said anything about how i got here?"
    "Wait for the information until your contact gets here."
    While Sydney waits she changes clothes and pulls her hair back into a ponytail. And she sits and waits. Then Vaughn arrives she gets up from her seat and hugs him and says,"They doubled Francie."
    "I know"
    "What happened to Will, to Francie are they dead?"
    "Will's okay." Vaughn pulls her away.
    "What, how?"
    "It's you, sit down."He pulls up a chair and sits down. The look in his eyes. Started to worry Sydney. so sydney asks
    "we thought you were dead, they made me come back to explain." Sydney was getting confused by the moment. puzzeled she asks
    "From what? Come back from what?" Then Sydney notices the ring on his finger."Vaughn why are you wearing that ring?"
    "Syd, since that night you were missing, you've been missing almost two years."
    Sydney just speechless and tears welling up inside her manages to say,"Vaughn, please answer me. Why ar you wearing that ring?"
    "I got married."
    "You got married?"
    "When? Who?"
    "Don't strangle me when I tell you. Will you promise me?"
    "Why would I strangle you?"
    "Because I know you were never fond of her."
    "Who? Anna? My mom?"
    "EWW.. Heck NO! and No way! I'd never consider them."
    "Then who?" Sydney had been fearing this moment all along.
    "argh.......I had gotten married to Alice." Vaughn's voice quivered as he spoke.

    it's a little short. I might have more tommorrow i don't know. The next chapter will be better. Also I don't want any hate mail. So the Vaughn is Not married club and the alice haters club don't get me for this. As I said Alice turns evil and Syd and Vaughn will end up together in this story. That's all I'm saying.More later!
  2. berry_kyoote_spy88

    berry_kyoote_spy88 Rocket Ranger

    Jun 19, 2003
    good start but vaughn is so stoopid and alice she just sucks i hate her dammit :P but ya know good story please post more
  3. spy_girl21

    spy_girl21 Rocket Ranger

    May 16, 2003
    as i said alice turns EVIL. i'll post more later on. also vaughn ends up dumping her. :LOL:
  4. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

    Jun 21, 2003
    Good start can you pm when you post the next chapter.
  5. spy_girl21

    spy_girl21 Rocket Ranger

    May 16, 2003
    Thanks for the feedback. I thought this chapter was better than the first. Gets to be sounding more like a romance novel.

    Vaughn could see the horror in Sydney's eyes. They were the eyes he fallen in love with years before. He found himslef falling for her all over again. He just wanted to get up and hold her in his arms and kiss her. But someone kept him from doing this.... Alice. He knew that he couldn't cheat it would be wrong. He had sort of wished that he could go back on his wedding vowels but he knew he couldn't.

    Sydney kept her feelings inside and didn't strangle him. She just put on a fake smile and said,"Well that's nice. When is your anniversary? So I can get you a gift." Yeah like she was going to getthem a nice gift maybe a pet skunk and that'd be it. Inside it felt as if she was being stabbed a thousand times.

    Vaughn shocked to hear her response and said,"That's considerate of you to think about gettting us a gift. We got married 3 months after you disapeared" Wishing he hadn't said that.

    "3 months?"

    "Yes.I thought it was kind of sudden. But it was Alice's idea to get married on her 15th anniversary of getting her braces taken off. I never had thought of marrying her. But I knew I loved her. Though I love you."

    "3 months!" Losing her temper by the second just bit her lip and said,"So is that when you left the CIA too?!?"

    "I stayed with the CIA for another month to contiue the search for you. But they gave up on you and Alice wanted me to give it up because every mission she was so worried and stressed out about me being in the field. So I quit. But before I left I gave Kendall something he's been deserving for a long time. A good swift punch and a bloody nose." Vaughn looked at a clock and realized that it was time to board the plane. "Syd? It's time to board the plane back to LA."

    Sydney holding back tears just nodded, realizing that she had just lost the love of her life knowing that they couldn't be together.

    -A phone conversation between with Sloane and Sark-

    Sark: I am confirming that Sydney Bristow is alive.
    Sloane: Where is she?
    Sark: I believe she just boarded a flight back to Los Angeles.
    Sloane: Do you know if we can arrange an assasin?
    Sark: Yes. I'm going to get that lined up. I have an old contact.

    What do you think? I'll post more on Monday. Because i have a big weekend so i won't be on the computer.
  6. berry_kyoote_spy88

    berry_kyoote_spy88 Rocket Ranger

    Jun 19, 2003
    that was good keep wrinting and please let s/v end up together i mean thats what its all about right so give the readers what they want :P great job thanx for the PM :P
  7. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

    Apr 21, 2003
    I just caught up- Good start!!!! Can You send me a PM when you update , please?
    Please post more soon :woot:
  8. krzykty57789

    krzykty57789 Rocket Ranger

    May 7, 2003
    good start..but only 3 months is this like a dream or something..could i get a pm
  9. aliasgurl

    aliasgurl Rocket Ranger

    Mar 2, 2003
    Atlanta, GA
    i like it. great job..but alice??grr..hah jk
  10. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

    Jun 21, 2003
    Please right more soon.

    Thanks for the pm.
  11. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

    May 28, 2003
    HA!!!! I NEW ALICE WAS EVIL!!!! LOL!!!! Nice job!
  12. Vaughnluver

    Vaughnluver Rocket Ranger

    Jan 1, 2003
    In front of my tv waiting for the next ep!
    Evil Alice, I can't wait!
  13. spy_girl21

    spy_girl21 Rocket Ranger

    May 16, 2003
    thank you for the review. I'm going to try to post a chapter everyday. Because I'm going to be gone this Thursday, Friday, and all next week. :( So i'll put three more chpaters up before i go.

    -On the airplane-

    "Sydney, Um... I don't know how to tell you this. But your house, it's been sold to another family. And that now you'd be considered homeless."

    "I kind of figured that Vaughn. I didn't want to go back there anyways."

    "Will and I managed to divide up your things. So-"

    "You went through MY underwear drawer?!?"

    "Yeah well we uh... um... well...Alice made me get rid of it. So anyways if you need a place to stay. You can stay with us. I'm sure Alice won't mind."

    "Thanks for the offer. But I think I'm going to stay with Will and get my underwear back."

    "Oh okay." Vaughn said with a hurt expression. He was hoping that he'd get to see her more often. He guessed that wasn't going to happen. Instead he just said,"Well, I'm considering rejoining the CIA I'm going to discuss this with Alice first though."

    Sydney's face lit up when Vaughn had said that he was considering of rejoining the CIA that was the happiest news she had heard all day.

    -Will's place-

    Will greets Sydney with a hug and a quick kiss. Will missed Syd everyday since she had vanished on that night. He still felt that special friend love relationship towards her. Even though he didn't feel that way about her. He still kept her underwear just for the heck of it. Though he was polite enough to return it to her. The two of them went to Blockbuster and rented a movie.

    -Vaughn's place-

    "What? What do you mean she's alive? I thought you said she was dead."

    "She's alive Alice. Right now I feel that I should spend time with her right now"

    "You love her don't you?"

    "Yes. No question.

    "So you love her more than me?Is that it?!?"

    "At times yes."

    "I can't believe I'm hearing this! That's it! I'm staying at my sister's tonight. I just don't want to be surprised anymore tonight."

    "I'm sorry honey. So umm.....I love you."

    "Well I love you too AT TIMES!
    Vaughn got the door slammed in his face at that moment. He was telling the truth. He didn't want to lie to his "beloved"(Writer's note: yeah right.) wife. Vaughn just picked up the phone and dialed.
    "Hey, is Sydney there?"

    "Yeah, just a sec."
    Sydney came on the phone and said,"Hello, who is this?"

    "It's me, Michael."


    I promise you that Alice will turn evil before I leave. So what do you think?
  14. berry_kyoote_spy88

    berry_kyoote_spy88 Rocket Ranger

    Jun 19, 2003
    yeah that was a chapter he told Alice haha hahahaha good for her does this mean that syd and vaughn will get together huh huh does it im jus wondering but i enjoyed the chapter please post more :P :)
  15. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

    Jun 21, 2003
    :) (y) Good chapter. I can't wait for you to post more.

    Thanks for the pm.
  16. berry_kyoote_spy88

    berry_kyoote_spy88 Rocket Ranger

    Jun 19, 2003
    oh yeah and thanx so much for the pm i love this story :)
  17. spy_girl21

    spy_girl21 Rocket Ranger

    May 16, 2003
    glad you like it.
  18. spy_girl21

    spy_girl21 Rocket Ranger

    May 16, 2003
    Since I'm leaving for a week and a half I'm going to start posting two chapters a day since all of you will miss a week's worth of chapters. When I was writing this chapter for some stupid reason i had McDonald's on my mind.

    "Yeah. So I was wondering if I could take you to the breifing tommorrow?"

    "Sorry, Will was going to take me."

    "Oh okay. Um.... Listen I wanted you and Will to go out to dinner tommorrow night with Alice and me after the briefing?"

    "Um... Yeah that'll work out. Well I have to get going. Bye."

    "Okay bye. I love-" He cut himself off before he could finish that sentence. Vaughn already knew that he shouldn't say that because he married Alice but he was in love with Sydney.

    -Next morning at headquarters-

    As Sydney walked through the doors. She was greeted by friendly familiar faces. Sydney had noticed that Vaughn had been there awhile. He was talking with Kendall. So she decided to go over there.

    "So, you decide to come back after what you did to me?"

    Vaughn shrugs."Well yes."

    "uh huh. Well. Aw what the heck! Sure you can come back. I think we all should go to McDonalds!"

    Sydney thought that that was strange so she said,"Really?"

    "No of course not. It's good to have you back back but we have a mission to get done and we don't have enough time to do silly things like that."

    "Thanks for the warm welcome." She said in a sarcastic way.

    Vaughn looked at her and just said,"Well, I guess I'll be here awhile then."

    "Oh. Well that's great. Kendall shouldn't we get to the briefing?"

    Kendall as always, obsessed with work, said,"Yes we should all go to the briefing room."

    -In the briefing room-

    Around the table sat Marshall, Carrie, Dixon, Sydney, Vaughn, Weiss, and Will, but one person was missing Jack Bristow. Kendall started talking,"I believe that Miss Sydney Bristow has a lot to catch up on. Agent Bristow you are scheduled for physical and mental exams tommorrow to see if we can find out who kidnapped you. Also on the agenda we have sent Jack Bristow in for an artifact that might lead us to Sloane and Sark. But the operation falied and Jack Bristow was captured."

    Sydney decided to speak up,"Where was he kidnapped at?"

    "We don't know. We last heard from him when he was in Hong Kong."

    "That's where I woke up!"

    "Okay. Then you, Vaughn, Dixon, and Tippin will go out on a flight to Hong Kong in 48 hours to investigate."

    "Will is going?"

    "Yes. Ever since you left he's been training for field duty."


    "Okay this briefing is over then."

    Everyone left except Weiss, Vaughn, and Sydney."Vaughn, do you want me and Will to come by about 6:30 this evening?"


    "Okay then I'll talk to you later."


    Sydney left the room then Vaughn told Weiss he wanted to talk. So Weiss said,"Okay Michael, What's on your mind?"

    "Well ever since Sydney came back I can't stop thinking about her."


    "I'm married! Alice and I got into a fight over that I still have feelings for her."

    "Does Alice know?"

    "If we got into a fight about it. I'd think SO."

    "And you're inviting her to dinner?"


    "Well that's a good one. Your wife and ex-girlfriend eating dinner together. What is wrong with you? Did you invite Syd over for a chick fight?"

    "Well I never thought of it that way. But that's besides the point! I mean I still love Sydney!"

    "Wouldn't want to be in your shoes."

    "I know! What am I supposed to do?"

    "I don't know. Just don't do anything you'd regret."

    "You're a big help. Well, I have to go home and get ready." Vaughn said that and left the room.

    Well I'm going to sleep. Two more chapters tommorrow!
    :sleep: :sleep: :sleep:
  19. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

    Feb 26, 2003
    My House
    omg, this is so good! and i find myself cracking up over and over with the braces thing and he underwear! LMAO! i want to see syd kick alice's butt! LMAO!
  20. spy_girl21

    spy_girl21 Rocket Ranger

    May 16, 2003
    I won't disapoint anyone but Sydney does get into a fight with Alice. Two more chapters today. :)

    Ch. 5

    -Vaughn's place-

    "Dear, I'm so sorry about last night. I was just overwhelmed. I thought you'd leave me or something like that. So I'm sorry." Alice gave him a kiss. Vaughn didn't know what to say though.

    So he just said,"Well, I never would leave you." Which was the truth,"Are you ready to go?"

    "Almost, Yeah I'm ready."

    They greeted Sydney and Will and they went out to eat.

    -Fancy Italian Restuarant-

    "Will your party be dining in or carry out?"

    "Dining in. I didn't know you had a drive through here." Vaughn answered suspiciously.

    "We don't its just a habit from working at McDonald's. Now would you like a Happy Meal?"

    "No. Can you just seat the four of us?"

    "Yes. Right this way."

    They were seated in a large dining room.

    "Now what would you like to drink?"

    "Wine, please."

    "Okay I'll be back then."

    Sydney despised sitting across from Alice. She was a person who she disliked more than Sark. She decided to talk to Alice though,"So Alice. What do you do for a living?"

    "Well, I'm a homemaker. I stay at home and take care of the house."

    "That's nice." Sydney said and her voice was loaded with sarcasism.

    "You know what Sydney. Michael was so shy when he proposed to me. Since he was so shy that night and wouldn't say too much. I just proposed instead."

    "Don't brag about it."

    "I'm not. I'm just telling you about our special night."

    Sydney just wanted to go across the table and punch her. But she couldn't because Alice had to use the bathroom.

    -In the bathroom-

    As Alice was washing her hands and fixing her make-up her cell phone ringed.

    Alice answered it. "Hello?"

    "Hello this is Mr. Sark. I am here to ask. How did she escape your custody? I though you said that Bristow wouldn't escape."

    "How did I know that she'd escape?"

    "You up for another assasination then?"


    "I'll meet you at the warehouse tommorrow at 1100 hours."

    "Okay. How much longer do I have to put up with Bristow?"

    "Not extremely that long. I'll get you more info tommorrow."

    "Okay, thanks bye."


    -At the table-

    Sydney still annoyed with Alice, says,"So Michael, have you told Alice that you rejoined the CIA?"

    "Uh...no. it must have slipped my mind."

    "VAUGHN! Did you even plan on telling her?"

    "Eventually. Just chill out Syd. I can handle this."

    "Yea sure. Why don't you tell her now."

    "NO! It's too soon."

    "So what are you going to do when you go to Hong Kong? Oh I was at my mom's for a few days."

    "No. I'll tell her before then."

    Right at that moment Alice walked in puzzeled by the situation she asked,"Tell me what?"

    "Oh nothing." When Vaughn said that he glanced at Sydney making sure she kept her mouth shut. She just rolled her eyes.


    "You'll find out later."

    "I'm sure it's something romantic. Am I right?"

    "Um....might be."

    "Oh honey, you've always been a pro at being romantic."

    Sydney was just getting tired of the c--- she was getting from Alice. The next moment she found herself punching Alice. Then Vaughn had to pry Sydney away from Alice. As soon as Vaughn got Sydney off of Alice he handed her over to Will who had been speechless the whole night. Alice took a run at Sydney,Sydney just kicked her. Then the four of them got kicked out of the restaraunt. After a few glares at Alice from Sydney, Alice just returned the glares.

    To break the silence Will said,"Maybe we should go. Sorry it didn't work out."

    Vaughn said,"No I should of known better. I'm going to talk to Syd (she was sitting in a car while Alice was sitting in another car) for a moment. Watch Alice. I don't need someone jumping on me or anything."

    "Yeah okay."

    Then Vaughn walked over to the car Sydney was waiting in. He opened the door and sat in the driver's seat.


    Okay that's plenty to read for you all. I hope you like the story.

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