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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by jaco16syd, Dec 28, 2002.

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  1. jaco16syd

    jaco16syd Rocket Ranger

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    Vaughn

    It was a fuzzy blur in her mind,
    That terribly lonesome night,
    When her father had not been kind,
    And in tears she lost her sight.

    So she ran to her gardian angel,
    To whom she could not lie,
    With whom she could just dangle,
    Vaughn was her favorite guy.

    He'd sit and chat with her,
    Or just open up and listen,
    If she was sad he'd hold her,
    Until the morning glistened.

    So she wished to be able to stay,
    At his side in the open aray,
    So she hoped would come the day,
    Never from his side she would be away. :love:


    [Edited for formatting]
     
  2. spysurfergrl247

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    It rocks!!!good job!!! (y) (y)
     
  3. The Kate Vartan

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  4. awwww. soo sweet :)
    --Mandy :angelic:
     
  5. Scarlet Crystal

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    so cute!
    : )
     
  6. Scarlet Crystal

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    will u write another 1?
     
  7. Scarlet Crystal

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    i'd like it if u would
     
  8. Alias Elle

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    Good.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  9. Sunfire_77

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    :) That is soo cute :) Good Job!
     
  10. Alias Elle

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    Please post!

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  11. jaco16syd

    jaco16syd Rocket Ranger

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    Thankz 4 the feedback!!!!

    I Will write another, but what genre do you want it to be?
    (romance, comedy, etc.)
     
  12. Alias Elle

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    Hmm... maybe comedy? God knows there's enough angst around here.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  13. Sunfire_77

    Sunfire_77 Rocket Ranger

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    I agree. Comedy would be a change. :)
     
  14. jaco16syd

    jaco16syd Rocket Ranger

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    Comedy Then

    I'll Try to get it done by tomorrow.
     
  15. The Kate Vartan

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  16. shakila

    shakila Rocket Ranger

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    (y) good job (y)
     
  17. jaco16syd

    jaco16syd Rocket Ranger

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    Sorry It's not posted yet.
    I've had a LOT of mid-terms this week to study for. so mabey tomorrow I'll get it up

    thankz 4 feedback :P
     
  18. SydneyBristow201717

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    I like soooooooooo much!
     
  19. Sunfire_77

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    I really liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
     
  20. jaco16syd

    jaco16syd Rocket Ranger

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    okay..umm.. I'm haveing trouble with writing a comedy about Alias.
    What would you like it to be about ? (Marshall, Devlin, Sloane, credit dauphine, etc. )

    Sorry :confused:
     

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