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Vaughn's Roommate

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Mrs. Karie Vartan, May 19, 2003.

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  1. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    Summary:
    Sydney Bristow couldn't be happier when the man of her dreams asks her to move in with her. Exstatic, she envisions she and Vaughn living happily ever after...that is, until she meets his roommate!!
    (Enter Vaughn's dog, Donavan.) Sure, he seems all cute and cuddly...but, the second Vaughn is away, all hell breaks loose!! Sydney and Donavan then wage a war against each other!! A war that could end in complete distruction and total chaos!!
    Who will win this war?? Will it be Sydney? The super spy trained by the C.I.A. Or will it be Donavan? Vaughn's dog!! :LOL:

    Spoiler:
    When Syd slowly awoke to the sound of a snoring Vaughn, a small smile played across her lips. She couldn't believe that she was now living with the man of her dreams.

    She lazily stretched her arms above her head and slowly opened her eyes. But who she saw snoring next to her was not Vaughn!! She couldn't believe her eyes. It was Dovavan!

    He was sleeping in the bed right next to her. His little body under the covers, and his head peacefully resting on HER pillow!!

    Syd just shut her eyes and let out a loud sigh.


    -Karie-
     
  2. *twinkletoes*

    *twinkletoes* Rocket Ranger

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    Lol thats soooooo funny please continue
    Mel
     
  3. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    LOL. Yea!! Someone likes my story!! Thank you *twinkletoes*, you are my very, very first poster!!...ever!! :woot:
    ::gets all teary eyed:: What?!?! There's something in my eye okay!! LOL.
    -Karie-
     
  4. Sophie

    Sophie in love

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    Yeah, it was funny, you shoud go on !!
     
  5. definitly. that is sooo cute! keep it up :D
    --mandy :angelic:
     
  6. Moriel

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    it sound really good keep going
     
  7. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    sounds like a great start!! yeah i need some humor after the finale!! :D
     
  8. feeling_like_a_spy

    feeling_like_a_spy Rocket Ranger

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    sounds great!
     
  9. liliana

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    i say continue i wanna see what happens next
     
  10. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    LMAO!!!!!!!!!!THAT SOUNDS FUNNY PLEASE POST IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

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    :LOL: just keep writing- Ithink it's a good beginning and it seems to be something different- more or less :)
    Please post more :woot:
     
  12. xdancer

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    This should be cute. Keep going.
     
  13. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    Yea!! You guys are awesome!! Thank you so much for you responses!! I really appreciate all the words of encouragement. :D
    Okay, I am off to write Ch. 1. ;)
    Sorry for the delay, but I just got back from The Matrix!! :woot:
    -Karie-
     
  14. sydney_alias_vaughn

    sydney_alias_vaughn Rocket Ranger

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    Thats gonna be a good story, keep going i wanna read more
     
  15. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    Title: Vaughn's Roommate
    By: Mrs. Karie Vartan, but just call me Karie for now. ;) (Refer to my sig.)
    Rating: PG
    Disclaimer: I own nothing! Nothing I say! Nothing!...except this story.
    Apology in Advance: I would just like to take this moment to apologize to everyone before hand. I am not a writer in any way!! I am just a very sleep deprived person who needed something to do, when I should have been sleeping....but couldn't!! ;) :P
    My Summary is ^up^ there somewhere. :P

    *I don't have much right now, but I am writing as I go. So, please be patient with my small chapters.
    Please read and review and let me know if I should continue or stop.
    Also, I welcome constructive critisism. :D

    This starts off kinda slow, but ::rubs hands together and gives an evil grin:: I promise it will pick up soon!! ;) :LOL: The little wheels in my head are just a turnin'!! LOL. Oh, how they are turning!!

    Chapter One: "Can't Hardly Wait"

    Sydney could hardly take it anymore. She was filled with so much excitement, she could hardly stand it! She was going to see Vaughn soon.

    Sydney stood, waiting impatiently next to the airport terminal she knew Vaughn would be heading through at any moment.

    She had missed him so much while he was gone. Vaughn had left three weeks ago to visit his family in France. He had asked Sydney to come with him, and boy she wanted to. But that boob Kendell simply wouldn't have it.
    So Vaughn left, and Sydney stayed.

    The last three weeks had been complete torture for her. You could literally beat her up, pull her teeth out one-by-one, rip her hair out, and any other physical pain you could possibly think of, but nothing even closely compared to the pain she felt when she wasn't with Vaughn.

    So she stood there, waiting in both agony, and anticipation. Waiting for 'Her Man' to come running up to greet her.

    *Sorry, like I said, I know it's short, but I am going to try to make up for that by adding to the story frequently.
    Hope ya'll enjoy. Please review and tell me what you honestly think....even if you think it sucks. :)

    -Karie-
     
  16. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    hey that was great. post more soon.
     
  17. Sophie

    Sophie in love

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    I don't think it sucks, it's a good start !!
    I liked when you said 'HER MAN' !!
     
  18. *SPYnish*

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    Interesting, very interesting. It´s Funny. More Soon Please

    ~Natalia~
     
  19. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    Thanks for the reviews guys!! :D
    -Karie-
     
  20. FrEeLaNcEr03

    FrEeLaNcEr03 Rocket Ranger

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    that's it? i need more. that was so funny! kendall is a boob! lmao! please post more soon!
     

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