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When I Close My Eyes

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Alias 007, May 11, 2003.

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  1. Alias 007

    Alias 007 Ensign

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    This is my first fanfic. its set 1 year after Syd disapears. Vaugn's POV. Please tell me what you think!! hope you like it.


    There's so many things
    I didn't say
    And even though
    It may be too late
    I want you to know
    I still love you so

    ~He remembered it all. Talking to her in the car, then goin to the debrief. Then going to her house to get her. But no one answered the door. After he saw all of the wreckage and Will, barely alive. And her bedroom, and Francie. He never got to tell her how he felt. That he loved her. ~

    Every car I meet
    Looks like your car
    Every movie I see
    You play the leading part
    You`re on my mind
    Can`t leave you behind

    ~Everything he did, he thought about doing it with Syd. All of his thoughts were centered around her and only her. He went through work on autopilot. All he ever did anymore was search for her. Weiss was always worried about him. He kept saying he should move on. And everytime, he blew up at him. What right did he have to tell him to move on and forget about her?~

    When I close my eyes
    You`re all I see
    In the dark of night
    You`re in my dreams
    Throughout the day
    You`re easy to find
    You`re always there
    When I close my eyes

    ~There was never a second in time when he wasn't thinking about her. Memories of their time spent together were constantly replaying through his mind. Their walks in the parks, their dinners. Heck, even their missions together. It just wouldn't go away, not that he wanted it to.~

    In my mind I know
    You`re far away
    But here in my heart
    Nothing has changed
    I`m still holdin` you
    Like I used to

    ~Images of him holding her shone in his mind the most. He was always her rock, he protector, her gardian angel. How was he helping her now? She was out there somewhere and even though they told him to give up, he just couldn't. He knew she was out there somewhere. He just had to find her.~

    On a busy street
    In a crowded room
    Wherever I go
    It`s just me and you
    Together again
    Girl it never ends

    ~He had always savored their time in public together. They had had to wait so long to be able to go out in public together, and now he spent so much of his time in the places they had loved to go. And while there he always thought he would just see her walk up, or that he would wake up next to her an Santa Barbara, and this whole thing would just be a horrible nightmare.~

    When I close my eyes
    You`re all I see
    In the dark of night
    You`re in my dreams
    Throughout the day
    You`re easy to find
    You`re always there
    When I close my eyes

    ~He would never forget her. He would never stop looking. If the CIA told him to stop, he would just look for her on his own with his own money and his own resources. He would never be able to give up on her or stop loving her.~

    You`re always there
    When I close my eyes

    ~His life wasn't complete without her. She was always there when he closed his eyes.~

    Ok, i hope you liked it. The song was Kenny Chesney's 'When I Close My Eyes'. Please review, i really want to know what you think!!!!!
     
  2. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    aww.......that was good. r u going to post more????

    timmy :blink:
     
  3. Xtremelimits08

    Xtremelimits08 Rocket Ranger

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    That was good post more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. spywolf

    spywolf Wicked Writer

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    That was lovely. But if he couldn't move on, then what about the ring? Perhaps to remember her by? (Can you tell I refuse to believe he is married to someone else?) I'd like to read more of this, please continue!
     
  5. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    Hey spywolf, I agree with you. I refuse to believe that he is married to somebody else! Anyway, great job on the flick, I loved it. You did a great job, are you going to post anymore. I am very interested. Please post more, great job! (y) :D

    Lauren :angelic:
     
  6. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    hey dont leave me out. i dont believe that vaughn is married. i will never even think that.
     
  7. aliasjgfanaticmv

    aliasjgfanaticmv Rocket Ranger

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    yup, same here! That was cool, are you going to write anymore? Vaughn can't be married..LMAO
     
  8. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    :bows down the genius that is spywolf: Smart one!

    That was great!! I've never heard that song, but it seems so perfect for this fic, by the lyrics.

    And yeah, you can find my theory in the season 3 forums.
     
  9. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    aww thats really good!! yeah vaughn dont give up she is out there somewhere and you are gonna find her!! this is really good!! i hope you write more soon!! :D (y)
     
  10. Alias 007

    Alias 007 Ensign

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    thanks, i'm really glad ya'll liked it! i heard that song after seeing the season finale and i just thought it fit w/ alias. as for writing more, im thinking about it. does anybody have and ideas? and im with yall on refusing to believe vaughn is married. i hope that's just a promise ring or something. thanks again!!! :D
     
  11. Alias 007

    Alias 007 Ensign

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    this takes place in the car right before Vaughn goes to Syd's house to pick her up for their trip to Santa Barbara. the song is Me and You by Kenny Chesney. i hope you like it! A/N:song lyrics are inside ~ ~


    Vaughn smiled as he pulled up to Syd's house. They were finally going to Santa Barbara. On a vacation. Together. His life couldn't get any better.
    As he was about to get out of his black SUV, he heard the first strains of a song that totally fit with his and Syd's relationship.

    ~Ordinary no, really don`t think so
    Not a love this true
    Common destiny
    We were meant to be
    Me and you~

    He decided to stay in the car and listen to the rest of the song. It'll give Syd a few more minutes to get ready. He really thought they were meant to be, just like the song said. And they obviously weren't ordinary. They shared their first kiss inside the debris of a building that held a former terrorist organization. There love was so true, and he knew it, nothing could keep them apart. And they were destined for each other.

    ~Like a perfect scene from a movie screen
    Where every dream comes true
    Suited perfectly for eternity
    Me and you~

    The way their lives had just clicked together what they were finally allowed to actually know each other. Their lives really were like a movie, and in the end it would be happily ever after.

    ~Every day, I need you even more
    At the nighttime too
    There`s no way
    I could ever let you go
    Even if I wanted to~

    He couldn't imagine his life without her. Every time she was mad at him because he had hurt her, and they weren't talking, he couldn't live with himself. His life wasn't complete without her, whether he wanted it to be or not.

    ~Every day I live
    I try my best to give
    All I have to you
    I thank the stars above
    That we share this love Me and you~

    He lived for her. He needed her opinion for everything. It wasn't right unless it suited her. He always tried to help her through everything.

    ~Every day, I need you even more
    At the nighttime too
    There`s no way
    I could ever let you go
    Even if I wanted to~

    He knew it was Vaughn and Syd. Syd and Vaughn. Forever. They sounded so right together. He was going to do it. He was going to ask her tomorrow night. There would be a dinner on their balcony, and he would ask her.

    ~Ordinary no, I really don`t think so
    Just a precious few
    Ever make it last
    Get as lucky as
    Me and you~

    He would be the luckiest man on earth if she said yes. He imagined it in his head. "Syd we are obviously not ordinary. But we fit together do well and we belong together. So will you marry me and be Mrs. Vaughn?" and she would simply say "Yes."

    ~Me and you~

    As the last chords faded, Vaughn got out of the car, and walked quickly to her door. hHis vacation couldn't wait any longer. As he was about to ring the doorbell, he saw throught the front window the destruction caused by Syd and Francie's fight. He forced the door open and ran through the house calling Sydney's name. He found Francie/Allison on the floor dead. And then realized that she was gone.

    TBC

    did you like it? do you like it should i write more? got any ideas? thanks for reading
     
  12. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

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    WOW :jawdrop: you should definitly write more!!!!!!! (y) I like it!!!! :jump: I'm sorry but i think I have not any useful ideas :( But you're doing a really good job! Please post more :woot:
     
  13. Syd_Vaughn4ever

    Syd_Vaughn4ever Rocket Ranger

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    I LOVE IT!!! OMG!!!! That is... I think I'm gonna cry! MORE
     
  14. feeling_like_a_spy

    feeling_like_a_spy Rocket Ranger

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    aww such a sweet fic!
     
  15. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    very good.
     
  16. Alias 007

    Alias 007 Ensign

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    i'm glad ya'll like it. i have an idea for another chapter, i just gotta write it. ill try to have it up soon but i'm really busy this weekend and tonight. i have a lab report and an english paper to write and we have family coming in from out of town and my mom doesn't like us to be on the computer when we do. but i'll try! :D
    And if you come up with any more ideas for me. please tell me!!
     
  17. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    omg that was great!! ahh poor vaughn now is plan is ruined!! :o :mad: ok take your time writing the next chap!! :D
     
  18. Vaughn4ever

    Vaughn4ever Rocket Ranger

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    I love it!!! please post more soon!!! Cant wait for more!!!
     
  19. bluheart13

    bluheart13 Rocket Ranger

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    me wants more. so write more write more write more please please please please.
     
  20. Alias 007

    Alias 007 Ensign

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    i'm really sorry i haven't posted the next chapter yet but my grandpa died and we had to travel about 12 hours on saturday and i just got home late yesterday afternoon and i haven't been able to get online until now but i will have the next 2 chapters up asap.
     

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