Winter Wonderland

1- omg, Mary, i cant believe nobody has asked about the title.
2- muahhaha.
3- i'm bored... *whines*
4- ok, gonna go read.
5- hhahaha muhahaha mhahah.
6- one for the road, muahaha.
 
AliasSydney502 said:
1- omg, Mary, i cant believe nobody has asked about the title.
2- muahhaha.
3- i'm bored... *whines*
4- ok, gonna go read.
5- hhahaha muhahaha mhahah.
6- one for the road, muahaha.
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ok, i am asking about the title since you apparently want it asked about!! so why is it called winter wonderland?

great chapter, thanks for the PM. can't wait to find out what they do about it!!
 
Great update!
Well that wasn't exactly the way I wanted him to find out about the baby but I guess that at least they're gonna have to talk now. Thanks for the PM and please update soon I can't wait for more.
 
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that wass such a good chap!!!!!


Kate paced impatiently back at the dorm. She hoped Sydney would be ok and not completely distraught like she had been two days ago. Michael had a way of doing that to her.Time passed too slowly for her liking, and she practically ran to the front hall when she heard the door open.“Syd, God. Are you alright?” She asked, immediately guiding her to the couch.“Yeah, totally.” She shakily lied, not wanting to scare her best friend.“Stop lying, Syd, you can tell me. What are friends for?” She soothingly rubbed small circles on her back. Sydney wrapped her arms around Kate and hugged her tightly. “Thank you so much. You’ll never know how much it means to me.”“I have a pretty good idea.” Kate chuckled lightly, hugging Sydney back. “You wanna talk about it?” She ventured.“He, he just…Arg!… He’s such an idiot! I mean, how could he do this to me!?” She stood up, a sudden burst of anger boiling through her veins. She paced around the couch, steaming and screaming about how much of a fool she was, how much of a loser he was.
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aaaaah poor syd..... what she is going through with vaughn
:vaughn1: and the 👶 !!!!!!!!!

“You son of a bitch. Go away.” Kate spat at her new enemy, who had once been one of her good friends just days before.“I just want to talk to Sydney…” Michael pleaded, desperate to explain himself.“She doesn’t want to talk to you.” Kate said angrily.“Please, Kate. I need to talk to her.” Michael begged.“You have done enough!” Kate yelled, catching the attention of Sydney, peaking her interest as she listened from behind the bedroom door.“I have to explain, she won't listen to me…” He tried to step into the room, but Kate held him from fully entering. She grabbed his shirt roughly and pulled him close, so that only he could hear her.“I said, She. Doesn’t. Want. To. See. You.” He knew she was stronger than him, after all, Kate went to the gym almost every other day. “Now get away before I really get mad.”“Kate… Don’t hurt him.” Sydney defended, finally coming out form her hiding spot, unable to allow Michael to get physically harmed, even though she was deathly angry with him.
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the whole concept of vaughn being beaten up by a girl that is not a bristow is quite funny!!!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

“If you need me to kill him, I’ll be right over there.” Kate indicated to the couch.
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again :lol: :lol:


“I just… I hate that I’ve hurt you. I didn’t want you to get hurt, it was-” He started to step towards her again, but she backed away and cut him off.“Don’t come near me. I don’t want to hear your excuses!” She didn’t want to cry in front of him and ran into her bedroom, slamming the door in his face when he tried to follow.“Sydney! Come out, please… Sydney?” He knocked on the door, he could hear her crying in her room. He wanted to go in and comfort her, he felt responsible for her pain and it ate away at him.He remembered that her bathroom had an adjoining door that lead into her room and decided to try it. He entered the bathroom and tried, without success, to open that door. He sat down on the closed toilet lid and put his head in his hands, a few tears rolling down his cheeks. He reached over to get some toilet paper, to dry his eyes, and noticed a box, sticking out of the trash can underneath.A pregnancy test.
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H.U.G.E......CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant wait for the update
that was amasing!!!!!!
thanx 4 d pm
gracie
 
Now he knows that someone is pregnant. That should scare him to death! I hope!! Maybe he will realize just what he lost here.
Thanks for the PM
 
Well now that Sydney most likely broke her hand, plus cut it up, she has to face the fact Michael is finding out she's pregnant. She'll probably deny it but the test doesn't lie.

I do think that maybe Kate should find out why Michael cheated. Because, I'm dying of curiousity and I want to know.

Thanks for the PM.

Chris
 
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that wass such a good chap!!!!!
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THANKS!
the whole concept of vaughn being beaten up by a girl that is not a bristow is quite funny!!!!!!
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yeah, Kate's just so tough.

Title.....hum....... well, i have no idea why i said that... cause i cant really tell you anything about it. how do i say this..?
well, lets just go with its a scene much later, and its awesome. (but it hasnt been written, lol.) plus, we like snow. haha
 
Sydney walked into the bathroom, only to be confronted again with the completed pregnancy test.

Positive.

With another fit of anger, she quickly swatted it into the small trash can under the toilet paper roll.
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I so knew that he was gonna find it after that little part! I think it is veyr good writing to foreshadow the big cliffhanger!

Excellentness!

I can't wait for an update!
 
He reached over to get some toilet paper, to dry his eyes, and noticed a box, sticking out of the trash can underneath.

A pregnancy test.
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Um... hi.... OMG! That was the best ending! I can't wait for the next update. I will make it so that it's soon... OK? It has to be soon! I need to know what he does next! :D

Thanks for the PM. it's nice to see that you still care about the neurotic people who have nothing better to do than to sit around and wait for that little notification saying "You've got mail!" That's me...

~Anja
 
ohh, i hope he's smart enough to put 2 and 2 together w/o having to ask! can't wait for the next update, and i hope you feel better soon!
Aliaschick347
 
oMg, he found the pregnancy test, hes gunna know now :eek:

poor Syd, ive tryed to punch the wall a few times like that but ive backed out coz it looks like it would hurt like heaps

thanx for the PM


-luv Em 💘
 
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