Gone in A Whisper

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Gone in a Whisper

Stockholm

Nadia lay in the tall grass that was keeping her hidden from the cameras. She was wearing all black with her hair pulled back into a tight ponytail and was concentrating hard on the driveway that curved up to the building below her.

“Evergreen, report in.” Jack Bristow's voice came through her comm.

“Evergreen to base, targets have not arrived.” she whispered. This place was supposedly one of the most secure places in the world. She heard the squeal of tires on the driveway below and turned on the night vision in the goggles she was wearing. She inched herself forward and saw two people get out of the car. Zooming in, she saw they were the expected targets.

“Evergreen to base, the targets have arrived.” she whispered. No one answered. She repeated herself but all she heard was static. “Evergreen to base, is everything okay. Base! Report in!” She raised her voice on the last two words. The two targets disappeared through a door that blended into the wall of the building as to keep out unwanted visitors.

Meanwhile...

“EVERGREEN! PHOENIX! SHOTGUN! HOUDINI!” Jack shouted over the comms. He couldn't seem to get a signal. “Report in! Evergreen, Phoenix, Shotgun, Houdini! Come in! Report!”

“Jack, shouting isn't going to get a signal. Probably one of the safety measures that Elena put in to keep teams from communicating and coordinating. Sounds like Elena. I've worked with her before my reformation.” Arvin Sloane sat at the head of the table with his knees crossed and his head on his hand. “They'll probably report in, in a couple of seconds.”

“That's my daughter, almost son-in-law, your daughter, and your almost son-in-law and you are telling me that you are not worried in any way?” Jack was furious. They would all be having a chat when they got back. “I mean, even for you, that's ruthless.”

“Jack, I cannot control what is happening overseas. They are in Stockholm, we are in Los Angeles, please, they’ll be fine.”

Back in Stockholm


“Phoenix? Do you copy?” Nadia was getting nervous, this had never happened before. If someone was keeping them from communicating, it had to be something really powerful. She decided that she should move towards someone and chose her sister, Sydney.

She ran towards the building, trying to stay out of the searchlights and avoid the touch sensitive mines that could go off at the slightest bit of pressure.

“Syd? Where are you?” Nadia had come to the place where her sister was supposed to be. “Syd!” All traces of her sister had disappeared. Her pack was gone, her parachute, everything. “Syd!” She raised her voice a little higher. This was nerve-wracking, and she started off again, this time crawling on her stomach so she would not be so inconspicuous.

She arrived at her fiancée’s spot, same thing.

“Houdini, Weiss, come on! Where the hell are you guys? This isn't a game anymore!” She spun around. Standing now, she was talking in a normal voice into her comm. “Anyone copy? Does anyone copy?”

Suddenly she sensed a movement, and turned around, trying to figure out what she had heard but no one was there. “Syd? Weiss? Vaughn? That you?” her voice grew a little higher, shriller. She was trying not to panic. Maybe they had all gotten together and were coming for her. No, they had agreed that if the mission was compromised, then they would meet in pairs to avoid the same thing that was happening. Damn. She hated this.

“Hello sweetheart.” Nadia spun around. A woman was standing next to her, wearing all black and carrying a rifle. The rifle came swinging down, in an almost invisible streak, and Nadia saw black.

“I've got her.”

Please don't forget to review, it helps me to write. thanks
Nads :blink:
 
Meanwhile...
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“EVERGREEN! PHOENIX! SHOTGUN! HOUDINI!” Jack shouted over the comms. He couldn't seem to get a signal. “Report in! Evergreen, Phoenix, Shotgun, Houdini! Come in! Report!”

“Jack, shouting isn't going to get a signal. Probably one of the safety measures that Elena put in to keep teams from communicating and coordinating. Sounds like Elena. I've worked with her before my reformation.” Arvin Sloane sat at the head of the table with his knees crossed and his head on his hand. “They'll probably report in, in a couple of seconds.”

“That's my daughter, almost son-in-law, your daughter, and your almost son-in-law and you are telling me that you are not worried in any way?” Jack was furious. They would all be having a chat when they got back. “I mean, even for you, that's ruthless.”

wow. . I just love How Jack is concerned. . .
And what a cliffhanger!
Please please update soon!
Zoe :daisy:
 
Oh my God! What an exicting start for a fanfic? It's a bit confusing, though. Why couldn't Nadia hear Sydney, or Weiss? Well, maybe it'll be explained in the next chapter.
However, I liked this one. Especially the ending was mean. What a cliffhanger. :D So who has got her? Elena? Irina? I think it was one of them, because this person called Nadia "sweetheart". My guess is it's either Irina or one of her sisters.

You have to update soon! I can't wait for more. :D
 
Great start. I loved it, good end to a chapter.. can't wait for the next one. I too enjoyed how Jack was concerned. hope Nadia and the others are okay!!! :eek: But still great fic, please pm me with update.
 
It appears Jack's worries are well founded. Elena seems to have captured all four of them. Now it will be up to Jack and Sloane to find and get them back.

Thanks for the PM.

Chris
 
“That's my daughter, almost son-in-law, your daughter, and your almost son-in-law and you are telling me that you are not worried in any way?”
Hehehe, that's so sweet, especially from Jack. It's nice to see him accepting Vaughn into his life. And having Nadia and Eric together, that's great.

“Jack, I cannot control what is happening overseas. They are in Stockholm, we are in Los Angeles, please, they’ll be fine.”
That does worry me though. You can't trust Arvin, even with his out daughter.

Can I get a pm when you update? Can't wait!
 
Great start Nads, I'm really enjoying it. BTW, that was an evil cliffy and I wanna know how this continues.

Thanks for the pm and keep me on that list :hug:
 
And I know that you keep telling me not to thank you, but thank you again SpygirlAmy! You are so cool!

Chapter 2

4 Hours Earlier

The APO team was all assembled together in their places in the conference area, Nadia, Sydney, Weiss, Thomas, Rachel, and Vaughn. Marshall and Dixon had been sent back to Langley for a long-term deep cover assignment and wouldn’t be back for another 2 weeks. Sloane and Jack were debriefing them on their mission. Rachel was performing an ordinary search on the Interpol discovered a criminal had escaped from a secure facility in Washington D.C. The name was Elena Derevko.

“What?” Sydney exclaimed loudly. “She’s supposed to have gotten the death penalty.”

“She wasn’t allowed to be killed, she’s not an American citizen, but we cannot allow her to go back to Russia, so she was in prison.” Sloane said, trying to justify. He hated having to do that. He felt his employees should know who was their boss, but what he hated even more was how close together his daughter and Nadia were sitting.

“Mr. Sloane sir.” Marshall broke into his steel train of thoughts. He was trying to get permission to get up and show off the latest from Flinkman Inc.

“Marshall.” He waved nonchalantly to Marshall who stood up and told about the highly sophisticated comm. units that they would be wearing and their suits, which were bulletproof, and flame-retardants. “

“Wheels up within the hour.” Jack said, ending the meeting. He didn’t like the situation either, Rachel and Tom, his own daughter and son-in-law, and his half-daughter, as she had been named, and Weiss, his other son-in-law. They were not supposed to be allowed to mingle, but no matter what they did, they always found ways around it, so Sloane and Jack pretended to turn a blind eye, but seethed under their skins, boiling.

“Damn them Jack, how can they all be so happy, and so carefree! They are CIA agents!” Sloane muttered angrily, once they were behind closed doors.

“It’s not any easier for me, you know.” Jack said. They could see out and look at the agents all communicating easily and laughing together. Marshall was bent over his computer, Nadia, Sydney, and Rachel bent over him, looking at the pictures of the facility he pulled.

Conference Area

“Kings won last night huh?” Weiss said jokingly. He smiled and slapped Vaughn playfully on the back.

“In your face!” Vaughn said back, smirking, he pulled out the edited version of the score out. Weiss’s mouth opened and he tried to stutter out something. He noticed that Tom and Vaughn were snickering and then looked at the second sheet, the correct scores.

“You guys suck!” Weiss said as he pretended to pout. “God.” He said, as he threw the papers on the table. He couldn’t believe he had just been suckered like that.

“Sometime Weiss, you’ll catch up to me and Vaughn.” Tom said.

“Not funny.” Weiss said and stalked off to where the girls and Marshall were working. “What do we have here?”

“Well, someone obviously doesn’t want to take any chances.” Marshall said.

Meanwhile Vaughn who had been on the phone turned to the group …


“Pack it up everyone! You’ll have to debrief on the plane!” Vaughn said as he hung up a phone. Someone has moved up the meeting. Let’s go!” He shoved all the papers into a file and the team ran for the airplane.

Meanwhile …

“They’re on their way.” The woman dressed completely in black hung up the cell phone and walked away towards her own private jet, her black hair blowing in the breeze coming from the running engines.
 
LOVED IT!!!
what an amazing fic indeed! :P
sorry i couldn't resist!
great chapter sweetie! :D
an your welcome, im honoured so you can stop thanking me i should be the one doing the thanking
THANK YOU!! :smiley:
x
 
Great update!
I liked the who they suckered Weiss!
Good ending to it as well, very mysterious.
Thanks for the pm.
Can't wait for more!!
 
That was good. Hmm...wonder who that women in black was...well we know that the other guys know that they're coming now. I hope they're ok, too many couples for something bad to happen! Thanks for the pm and can't wait for another update.
 
I'm betting the lady in black is either Elena or Irina. Both are capable of fooling the CIA and drawing them in on a wild goose chase.

Thanks for the PM.

Chris
 

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