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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by jaco16syd, Jan 28, 2003.

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  1. jaco16syd

    jaco16syd Rocket Ranger

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    I awoke from a daze
    Wishing it was just a dream
    Yet there you were asleep
    And nothing is like it seems

    For you are in a dream world
    Asleep with no cares
    Yet I am here with doctors
    Facing all of lifes hidden lairs

    My love is hurt with poisen
    And you asleep are my love
    Please awake and come back
    Wake and come back to life my love

    A mission, my loves fate in the balence
    For my love, an antedote to retreive
    Caught! a deal? a dare
    In Japan a devil to decieve

    In Japan, in a gazebo
    My boss to kill, he had no doubt
    A mesus I was
    A needle...he's out

    Back to the devil
    The antedote please
    back to my love
    his pain to ease

    Awake- I see him
    we talk, we embrace
    an atempt to explain
    I stop him, away I race
     
  2. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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    that's soo cute (y)
     
  3. Scarlet Crystal

    Scarlet Crystal Bibbity Rabbity

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  4. The Kate Vartan

    The Kate Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    i absolutely love this stanza! superb job!
     
  5. berry_kyoote_spy88

    berry_kyoote_spy88 Rocket Ranger

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    that was great please pm meeh when you have more like it okay thanx :P :P :)
     
  6. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    That was good!
     
  7. aliasgurl

    aliasgurl Rocket Ranger

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    that was great. is there gonna be more?
     
  8. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    That was so sweet. You should be a poet. That was great. I loved all the stanza's. Thank you for sharing.

    Love ya,

    Lauren :angelic:
     
  9. kittykat

    kittykat Rocket Ranger

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    Incredible work!!!!

    You really should be a poet :D.

    There is no words that will fit more perfectly than "perfection".

    I am totally in love with this poem :love:.

    *** Kathy ***
     
  10. A.I.C.

    A.I.C. Rocket Ranger

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    Great poem! You're really talented!!! (y)
     
  11. kittykat

    kittykat Rocket Ranger

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    This is so totally emotional.

    You are really talented.

    Sorry, but I forgot to write this before and I really felt like you should know this, not that you don't know this already.

    *** Kathy ***
     
  12. Alias Fan Gillian

    Alias Fan Gillian Rocket Ranger

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