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Season finale aftermath

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  1. DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47

    DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47 +SuPer HoT FeMaLe+

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    Title: Season finale aftermath

    Author: me, Abby

    Genre: um.... sad??? is that a genre???

    Status: in progress i hope to keep writing if it turns out good

    Rating: i think pg-13 for language and sexuality....note: im not the swearing type realli i actually HATE it especilly the f word so call me a hypocrit but i think it makes the story more dramatic.

    Spoilers: um... i dont get what this is....

    Summary: Life goes on after the finale for sydney... or does it.....




    Chapter Uno (1)

    "What?" chocked Sydney as she choked back tears. Vaughn sighed heavily and looked up at sydney with tears in his eyes. Sydney stared back with tears of her own confusion. "What the *sob* hell do you mean Ive been missing for two years *sob*?" Vaughn started sobbing,"Sydney I.. we...you..." Sydney looks confused,"WHAT?!? What?" she yelled louder. Vaughn just sat there sobbing uncontrollably.... he couldnt get the words out. "What the hell is going on here?? Why have i been missing for two years *sob* and why *sob* are you.. you waering a wedding ring??" Sydney breaks down crying. Vaughn stands up and whispers so quiet even he could barely hear himeself,"I am so so sorry Sydney.... but I *sob* I cant do this right now.... all this... its just all too fast for me and i need some time to help slow things down...." Sydney sobs,"No, Vaughn please.... i need you now... i need you more than ever..... please *s0b* you can not leave me here.." Vaughn whispers back,"Im sorry Sydney" he stands up, slowly reaching for the doornob, turns it and walks out without looking back.

    Sydney sits there, in the small room for a little while, hugging her legs to her chest and rocking herself as she cryed harder than ever. It seemed as if in one night she had lost everything. Her two best friends. Her family. he love of her life. And her life, or at least two years of her life. What was the point? Why go on? Everything was so ****ed up anyways.... why even go on living? All it would do was give her more pan. Living each day knowing she could have been the one Vaughn was married to instaed of who ever she was. Knowing that everyone she ever cared about went on living without she.... why not just end it all before....
    Her thoughts were interupped by a knock on the door. Before she said anything a man walked in. Jack Bristow. Afraid she would make the same mistake she had just made with Vaughn she just sat there. Her mascara running down her cheeks and her hair knotted and snarly. Jck was the fist to speak."Sydney". Sydney replied," Dad?" Jack rn up to Sydney and held her for all as seemed eternity. Sydney just stood there, still as cardboard as her fahter hoovered her crying. "Sydney" he said,"I have bben imaging this moment for almost two years.. this moment where i would be able to see you again. I...I" Sydney finishes his sentence by saying," I love you daddy." Jack kissed Syney on the forehead and sighed,"We have no clue what happened to you. All we know is that you have been missing for two years and we havent a clue how or why and who did it to you." Sydney," None of that matters to me now i just.... i just want to go home." Jack," Me too sweetie, me too." And they walk out of the room with Jack's arm around Syaney's shoulder as Sydney rests her head on Jacks arm. Life went on. At least for now. Sydney suddenly felt reassurance. Reassurance that everthing would turn out to be fine....or at least ok as longas she still had family, something she never really had for a long time.

    and that my folks concludes chapter uno (1) i hae so much more to wite but i need to sort it all out in my head first so let me know how you all like it....... (y) (n) lol~
     
  2. DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47

    DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47 +SuPer HoT FeMaLe+

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    by the way soryy for all the spelling errors lol ill have to be more careful next time.....
     
  3. pasta_sauce385

    pasta_sauce385 Rocket Ranger

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    not bad, not bad at all...but i agree, it is kinda tough to read when things aren't spelled right....aww, vaughn is mean, poor sydney.
     
  4. DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47

    DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47 +SuPer HoT FeMaLe+

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    Chapter Duo (2)

    5 days later
    Sydney walks into the CIA headquaters. Kendall approches her,"Sydney we still have many unanswered questions and thoughts about what happened and where you have been for the past two years... but these questions can not be answered without a lead...." Sydney stares at him blanky. Kendall continues,"What I am saying Ms. Bristow is that, well it would be extremely helpful if you could try and remember anything maybe... who kidnapped you..." Sydney cuts Kendall off," I assure you Kendall if i knew anything or remembebred ANYTHING i would let you know...." Kendall shakes his head and turns to leave. Sydney grabs his shoulder,"WAIT! Why can't you just hyponotize me? Then i could maybe remember what happened to me..." Kendall shakes his head,"I already thought about that, the thing is ms. Bristow is that alot has changed since your 2 year absence and the process of hypnosis is no longer legal. I'm sorry." Sydney,"this is the CIA for god's sake since when is anything legal???Kendall," Ill take it into consideration Sydney but Its something like that, that could get me court marshalled!" Sydney rolls her eyes. Kendall," Ms. Bristow.... its a... its nice to have you back." Sydney smiled,"Thank you, its nice to BE back!"

    ugh!!! i g2g well um..... ill write more ch. 2 isnt over yet folks.lol.
     
  5. AliasBabe12

    AliasBabe12 Rocket Ranger

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    :D those were 2 really great chapters the only thing i ask is when someone is speaking u should start a new line but everything else is GREAT!! hope u post more soon!!
    ~Kay~
     
  6. *SPYnish*

    *SPYnish* Rocket Ranger

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    It´s GOOD, continue Please ;)

    ~Natalia~
     
  7. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    i really like this!! great job!! :D (y)
     
  8. Alias Obsessed 47

    Alias Obsessed 47 Rocket Ranger

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    yeah.......i agree. i just read another story like this with very very verry paragraphs and it gets very hard to read. so mayb try starting a new line every time soomeone speaks. that would help alot!
     
  9. DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47

    DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47 +SuPer HoT FeMaLe+

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    ok ill be sure to start new paragraphs here goes.....

    Sydney pulls up to the house the CIA has provided her in the car the CIA has provided her. She sat in the car a moment thinking. Remembering, an=bout life before all this... It was perfect... well, not perfect but better... at least better than this. Finally sje blew the hair out of her face, opened the car door and swung her legs out on to the wet ashphalt. It was now raining. Sydney rushed into the house, she hung her coat on the coat rack and quickelystashed her keys on the kitchen counter. She sighed and glanced at the message reciever. It flashed three new messages. She hit the play button and flopped down on the living room sofa.
    "Beep" the machine went
     
  10. DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47

    DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47 +SuPer HoT FeMaLe+

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    ok ill be sure to start new paragraphs here goes.....

    Sydney pulls up to the house the CIA has provided her in the car the CIA has provided her. She sat in the car a moment thinking. Remembering, about life before all this... It was perfect... well, not perfect but better... at least better than this. She blew the hair out of her face, opened the car door and swung her legs out on to the wet ashphalt. It was now raining. Sydney rushed into the house, she hung her coat on the coat rack and quickelystashed her keys on the kitchen counter. She sighed and glanced at the message reciever. It flashed three new messages. She hit the play button and flopped down on the living room sofa.
    "Beep" the machine sounded. "Hi Sydney its Vaughn... I've uh, been trying to get a hold of you for a couple a days now. Your father, Jack, gave me this number... listen Syd we need to talk. I'm sorry about the other night, I just really beed to talk to you right now so please call me back, um you can reach me at 317-4747." "beep!" the machine seemed to yell.
    "Next new message" the machine continued "Hey Syd its our mother just calling to check up on you... anyways call me love you"
    "Next new message" the machine continued again " Hi Sydney it's Vaughn again. I wasn't sure if you got my previous message, but i really need to talk to you right now *he sniffles* uh, *clears throat* just call me back please my number again is 317-4747. "Beep"
    The number sounded over and over again in Sydney's head... 317-4747. She hesitated for a second before picking up the phone. Her fingers shook as she dialed the numbers. Ring. Ring.
    "Hello?" a female voice answered.
    Sydney froze. She had not expected Vaughn would give her his home phone number. She remained silent.
    "Hello?" the voice sounded again.
    Sydney quickely hung up. She took a deep breath and picked up the phone from the reciever, and once again dialed the number.
    "Hello?" the same female voice answered. Sydney again remained silent.
    "Hello?? O.k. who the hell is this?" the woman demanded.
    Sydney cleared her throat. "I'm sorry" her voice shaking, "May I please speak with Vau... I mean Michael?"
    "Yes hold on one moment!" she yelled into the background loud enough for Sydney to be able to hear," Hun its for you!!!" she returned back to Sydney," So.... you must be Sydney..."
    Sydney replied," Yes... and you are?"
    "ALICE.... Vaughn's wife..."she said in a sort of rude manner.
    Sydney replied meekly under her breath," So i've heard..."

    ~Vaughn picks up the phone now~

    "Hello?" he askes
    "Hi its me... Sydney."she says sullenly.
    Vaughn, "Yeah, i know which me it is!" tryng to made Sydney laugh without success. h,
    Sydney, "I, uh, got your messages."
    Vaughn clears his throat,"Yeah, um sorry if i was bothering you...."
    Sydney, "No,no...."
    Vaughn," Sydney we need to talk... face to face.
    Sydney," I'm uh.." she takes a deep breath and continues," I think I still need ome time to think things over."
    Vaughn, " I understand... let me know when you are ready...
    Sydney,"Its just that so much has happened you know?? Its hard to accept that when you're gone... that when your gone life goes on without you.... PEOPLE go on without you...." she whispers,"its just not fair!"
    Vaughn,"Sydney i want you to know that i m here for you... I mean as a friend...I will always and forever be your friend."
    Sydney swallows hard,"What if i want more.... more than friendship...I want it to be like it used to Vaughn.."
    Vaughn," Me too, Me too... but Sydney i am married and you need to accept that... as much as i love you Syd i love Alice very much.... all i can give you is friendship, i can always be your friend."
    Sydney starts to cry,"I, I have to go... i think its better if we take a break from each other.... at least until i can get things settled out in my head..."
    Vaughn clears his throat," all right."
    Sydney sobs," Bye Vaughn..... I love you." and she puts the phone back on the reciever. She breaks down on the living room floor crying hysterically. She crys and crys and then almost as sudden as she started crying she siat up, wiped her fingers under her eyes cleaning up the running mascara as if she has a split personality. She then stands up and walks into her bedroom and closes the door. Shortly here afterwards she runs out into the bathroom, shuts the door and throws up.

    End of chp. 2

    all right i already have a twist planned for the next chapter or maybe the one after that but its gonna be REALLY good i can assure you. i hope you realli like my story i have so much fun writing it....~
     
  11. Alias Obsessed 47

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    thank you! much much better! that was much easier to read! great chapter.
     
  12. Alias Obsessed 47

    Alias Obsessed 47 Rocket Ranger

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    do you think that you could pm me when you post more? that would be great! thanks alot!

    -muffin
     
  13. Ames47

    Ames47 Amy Strikes Back

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    aww i really like this!!! damn it vaughn needs to ditch alice!! but i love how he isnt goin to or not yet anyways!! cant wait for more!!
     
  14. Roxy

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    Abbs, (lol can i call u that now?) that was great! I thought we were going to do one together, do u still want too? PM, email or call me or something when u have more lol.

    -Roxy
     
  15. AliasBabe12

    AliasBabe12 Rocket Ranger

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    this is so good i can't wait for that lil twist of urs haha well post more soon!!!
    ~Kay~
     
  16. TephieD

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    post more!!!!
     
  17. Alias Obsessed 47

    Alias Obsessed 47 Rocket Ranger

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    more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!
    can you pm me when you post more? that woul be great!
     
  18. dontfrostdapie

    dontfrostdapie Rocket Ranger

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    i love it abbs! its great! and did you know that you can edit your posts, and fix the spelling errors? hehe anyways.. i really really loved it!! you need to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe and pm me when you post the rest!
     
  19. DoNtFrOsTtHePiE 47

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    Chapter 3

    4 months later...

    Irina is with Sydney at a cafe.
    Irina," You are looking better everyday now Sydney, but I know this is only the beginning. You still have a long road of recovery that awaits you."
    Sydney," I feel better. At forst I felt all alone but now... now i realize I have something i never really had my whole life... I have my family, you and dad."
    Irina," Yes and Sydney I will always be here for you... but there is something else... thats been concerning me... what concerns me is your social life. You don't have any friends and I think you are ready to start meeting new people...
    Sydney cuts her off," You mean meeting new people. Look, everyday I tell myself, this is THE DAY. The day that I will move on and live with the fact that we can only be friends. And everyday passes and I still can't let him go. Not yet mom."
    Irina," Well Iim not sure if I'm in the place to say this but from my point of view it seems that you two need to talk. You should tell him how you feel, Sydney look at me, it will make you feel better..."
    Sydney sits up straighter," Your right!" she says suddenly with confidnce. Irina is a bit surprised, but only for a spilt second. Sydney continues," I'm ready now!"
    Irina smiles," Good because he is already teo minutes late!"
    Sydney looks agahst,"WHAT?? Mom!" she moans,"Now? Right now?" Irina grins and shakes her head.
    She moans again," This i so typical of you. You, you, are so.... UHHH!!! Well at least tell me if i look ok since i probrably dont even have time to go the BATHROOM BECAUSE HERE. HE. COMES. !!!!" she whimpers,"O my god he looks gorgeous." she blushes
    Irina grins," And so do you." Sydney smiles as Irina offers her chair to Vaughn to sit in.
    Vaughn sits and politely fold his hands in his lap and says," Thank you."


    Sorry i have to go but when i reurn I will write about their dinner and what it leads to and what THAT leads to.... are you getting me?!? GOOD!~
    Irina smiles and whispers,"
     
  20. SD6Agent24

    SD6Agent24 Rocket Ranger

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    When i read all these really good fan fics and when things become kind of sad, i just say to myself well its ok it's just something somebody else made up. But then i realize that Vaughn IS married and the show is going to take us through emotions just like the fan-fic. Don't think i'm a quack, but it brings tears to my eyes. I never really thought that it mattered to me that Syd and Vaughn were together, but it does matter.
     

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