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  1. aliascrazy35

    aliascrazy35 Ensign

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    soon im gonna post a story! if u like it post a (y) (thhumbs up! thanx!!


    *Story Coming Soon* :rolleyes:
     
  2. freelancer2bootcamp

    freelancer2bootcamp Rocket Ranger

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    ahhhhhh!!!!!! write more! i need to read more! its so good! i love it! keep on writing! i love it! i like to emphasize my point if you already hadnt noticed! im icky sicky today so ill be reading all the fan fics prob. and working on my own. mines called HIDDEN SECRETS. im on chapter 11. i think tis turning out pretty good. ill definately be working on it today. keep writing! i cant wait to read more!

    <3, Kailyn

    ps- i dont like to be SICK!
     
  3. freelancer2bootcamp

    freelancer2bootcamp Rocket Ranger

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    hey brynne! love you lots lil sis. to all those reading tis, her story is really good so far. i cant wait til she posts it.
     
  4. aliascrazy35

    aliascrazy35 Ensign

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    :rolleyes: thanx big sis only 1.5 years older!!! hahahah!!!
     
  5. aliascrazy35

    aliascrazy35 Ensign

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    :ph34r: guess my name!! youll never guess!! lol! :woot:
     
  6. aliascrazy35

    aliascrazy35 Ensign

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    :D finally!! im not yet done wit chap. 1 but here is some of it!!!




    Chapter 1

    Sydney Bristow quietly pulled out her gun. Her heart was racing as she huddled in a corner of the hotel. Her blonde wig fell over her blue contacted eyes. She heard a man’s footsteps coming closer to her hiding place.

    "Boot Camp, Mountaineer checking in." Sydney said, touching her flower necklace.

    "Roger that mountaineer." A familiar voice answered. It was Vaughn. "Go get him."

    Sydney stood up slowly and jumped out from the corner.

    "Freeze." She said to a man dressed in a suit. The man froze.

    "Mr.Rahjii?" Sydney asked plainly. The man nodded. "Come with me."

    The man hurried toward her. She motioned to a storage room near by. Quickly the man opened the door. Sydney walked in after him.

    "I’m Ms.Gristing, from the FBI. I need one of your finer artifacts. The Rambaldi clock." Sydney said, in a English accent. The man snorted.

    "I will certainly not give it to you." Mr. Rahjii said irritably. Sydney sighed.

    "Really? I would have paid you." Sydney said. Mr. Rahjii looked at her in stubborn eyes. Sydney knew she was not going to get anywhere with this man in the directions Kendall gave her. Sydney smiled at him. "Shall we go?"

    Mr. Rahjii stepped toward the door. Without thinking, she hit her gun on the side of his head. Mr. Rahjii fell limply to the ground. Sydney ran out of the room.

    *Back at the CIA Head Quarters*

    "What is she doing?" Kendall cried, jumping from his chair. Vaughn sighed as Kendall slammed his fist on the table. Jack Bristow glared at Kendall.

    "It worked! Look, sh…she…hold on, Mountaineer, take cover! Two guards are headed your way!" Jack exclaimed.

    *Back to Sydney’s Position*

    Sydney opened a door and jumped inside. She pressed her ear to the door. She heard laughing a little way down the hall. Slowly she backed away from the door.

    "
     
  7. aliascrazy35

    aliascrazy35 Ensign

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    i love it! this is kailyn by the way. i dont feel like changing user names. i love it! i love it! i like to emphasize my point. love ya brynne! keep writing! u copied mi clock! u poop!
     
  8. Mrs. Karie Vartan

    Mrs. Karie Vartan Rocket Ranger

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    Great job!! (y) (y) Please continue!!
    -Karie-
     
  9. freelancer2bootcamp

    freelancer2bootcamp Rocket Ranger

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    i dont get the "blue contacted eyes" but whatever! its all cool! i still love ya brynne!
     

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