Mine

[SydneyBristow201717]

Name: SB201717
Summary: Will's feelings about Syd.
Disclaimer: I don't own Alias.
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Everytime she walks past me I feel a pang. A sense of longing, day after day. Her smell intoxicates me, it's of violet and roses. I wish she was mine. All day. And all night. I could have had her years ago, but the look of her made feel like a Hawaiian in snow. I look into her eyes and it feels like she should be mine.................
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I hope the Hawaiian in snow pharse wasn't to weird but, you know me. Crazy moi! Hope you like it! Please feel free to comment!

 

[spysurfergrl247]

:hi: That was AWESOME i liked it

 

[SydneyBristow201717]

I hopei t's not too weird. I'm very insightful. I think.......

 

[Codename]

That is sooo cool, that is a amazing poem!

 

[SydneyBristow201717]

I have another one called "Wanting You' it's Syd's feelings for Vaughn.

 

[Flames24]

Hey SB201717! That poem was really good and insightful in the way you wrote! That sounds like something I'd write. ^_^

 

[Alias Elle]

This is very... interesting.

I'm not much of a poem person though, but this was still good.

~Me :angel2:

 

[The Kate Vartan]

cool. the hawaiian snow thing didn't cliche, so it made it better.

 

[SydneyBristow201717]

Thanks! Maybe I'll do one about Jack's feeling for Irina. I'm gonna run out of people to analyze!

 

[Sunfire_77]

I really like how you showed Will's thoughts so dramatically.

 

[Scarlet Crystal]

very nice, very nice

 

[Katelyn]

I like it, though i'm not to sure about the Hawaiian in snow thing

 

[JoeysHero]

That was great, very well written.