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Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by SydneyBristow201717, Jan 10, 2003.

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  1. SydneyBristow201717

    SydneyBristow201717 Rocket Ranger

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    Summary: Will's feelings about Syd.
    Disclaimer: I don't own Alias.
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    Everytime she walks past me I feel a pang. A sense of longing, day after day. Her smell intoxicates me, it's of violet and roses. I wish she was mine. All day. And all night. I could have had her years ago, but the look of her made feel like a Hawaiian in snow. I look into her eyes and it feels like she should be mine.................
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    I hope the Hawaiian in snow pharse wasn't to weird but, you know me. Crazy moi! Hope you like it! Please feel free to comment!
     
  2. spysurfergrl247

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    :hi: That was AWESOME i liked it (y) (y) :)
     
  3. SydneyBristow201717

    SydneyBristow201717 Rocket Ranger

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    I hopei t's not too weird. I'm very insightful. I think.......
     
  4. Codename

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    That is sooo cool, that is a amazing poem!
     
  5. SydneyBristow201717

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    I have another one called "Wanting You' it's Syd's feelings for Vaughn.
     
  6. Flames24

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    Hey SB201717! That poem was really good and insightful in the way you wrote! That sounds like something I'd write. :) ^_^
     
  7. Alias Elle

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    This is very... interesting.

    I'm not much of a poem person though, but this was still good.

    ~Me :angel2:
     
  8. The Kate Vartan

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    cool. the hawaiian snow thing didn't cliche, so it made it better.
     
  9. SydneyBristow201717

    SydneyBristow201717 Rocket Ranger

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    Thanks! Maybe I'll do one about Jack's feeling for Irina. I'm gonna run out of people to analyze!
     
  10. Sunfire_77

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    I really like how you showed Will's thoughts so dramatically.
     
  11. Scarlet Crystal

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    very nice, very nice
     
  12. Katelyn

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    I like it, though i'm not to sure about the Hawaiian in snow thing
     
  13. JoeysHero

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    That was great, very well written. :)
     

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