That's so sweet of all of you! Thank-you so much for reviewing. A first time writer needs all the encouragement she can get! I don't think I'm going to add on to this one, but I'll probably write another one soon!
Alias Elle~Thank-you for reviewing. But I wanted to make sure I understand what you're saying and vice versa. The point of the fic was to play out the emotions of the characters. I wasn't focusing on the outside part, but I do see what you mean (I think). My intention was to focus on their thoughts, not what we actually see on t.v. (the unspoken ideas).
Alias Elle~Thank-you for reviewing. But I wanted to make sure I understand what you're saying and vice versa. The point of the fic was to play out the emotions of the characters. I wasn't focusing on the outside part, but I do see what you mean (I think). My intention was to focus on their thoughts, not what we actually see on t.v. (the unspoken ideas).
