Hey i know this fic sucks, but just bear with me. it probably is really boring, but you know what i dont' care. so here's the 3rd ch. maybe it's a little better.
CH. 3
Woman: (While on boat for colonies, flashback to instructions)
Gen. Gage: “I believe there is to be another spy among the Whitman family. We just received information on this. We were not able to inform the family. Do NOT tell the Whitmans just yet, we will notify you to tell them. You must find out who it is, who they work for, and why they are here. There is a little cabin in the nearby woods. They will be your backup team incase you run into any trouble. Once you find out the spy bring them there…”
She sighs…
(Philadelphia, PA)
The Bristow family is a very important family. They are personal friends with Benjamin Franklin. Mr. Bristow is the man that provides financial needs to the Continental Congress, and soon to be written declaration of independence. His daughter, Miss Sydney Bristow, is currently courting the very young assistant of Ben Franklin. Miss Bristow and Mr. Vaughn have been courting for almost 6 months now.
Jack Bristow: “So, when will Jefferson be writing this proclamation, Ben?”
Benjamin: “I think that he will be starting sometime next week. Myself and others will be over viewing and guiding his work.”
Jack: “Very good. Um…how is Mr. Vaughn doing?”
Ben: “He’s doing very well. He has just finished helping me with the bifocal glasses…He is a fine man Jack. Don’t worry so much; your daughter is in good hands with him.”
Jack: “I know, maybe to good of hands to be in. Well, I’ll see you tomorrow. Sydney and I are having a picnic together at the park.”
Ben: “Have fun, it’s a beautiful day.”
(Some park in Philly)
Sydney: “Hey Dad, where were you?”
Jack: “I’m so sorry honey, I was running late. Ben kept me up with some new fangled invention of his. Don’t worry now you have me for the afternoon.”
Sydney: “Well, I packed a wonderful picnic for us. By the way, have you heard anything about this new spy coming from London?”
Jack: “No, not yet. It’s just the same. They’re coming in somewhere in Virginia. Syd, I don’t want you involved in this. You’ve already been in enough missions for someone your age. I never wanted to get you into any of this. It isn’t proper for a young lady to do this type of thing. You should be enjoying your time with friends and just taking pleasure in the simple things in life.”
Sydney: “Oh father, I don’t care. It can never be that way ever again. I know these past couple of years have been very hard for me, but I enjoy this. For a woman I feel extremely powerful. The only thing I wish I an able to do is to talk to my friends. Oh well, at least I have Michael in times like these.”
Jack: “Yes, I know dear…so…how are you and Michael doing anyway?
Sydney: “We’re great. We just went to an art showing. The paintings were so beautiful. I saw one that you might like. Maybe we can go tomorrow and you can look at it, and maybe even get it?”
Jack: Maybe. For right now, let’s enjoy this magnificent lunch you have created for us. I’m just absolutely famished!”