I'll Be Home for Christmas

If only things could happen like that in the show ^_^
Things were perfect, I love how he kept and used the key to get in the house before sliping in bed and huggin Sydney. It was as if he had never left her and was just on a business trip. It was so natural for him.
Isabelle's reaction to her father coming home was so cute :love:

Thanks for the PM
 
That was just wonderful. I loved it. He was a nice present for Christmas I must say. Loved Isabelle's reaction to her father, and her knowing just where Syd's ring was!!
THANKS FOR THE pm
 
:cry:

I don't know how to say how amazing that one parter was without sounding like I'm an escaped mental patient... So I'm just going to say that made me smile, laugh, and cry. It was beautiful. Every aspect of that piece was simply beautiful... No one could've possibly written their reunion any more perfect than that, nor could they have written the first contact between Vaughn and his daughter Isabelle... It was absolutely awe-inspiring.

Writing like this makes me wish Christmas came more than once a year... So we could get more words out of you... :whistle: Keep up the awesome work!

:notworthy:

Cai
x
 
Aww! That was so sweet! I'm glad they found the happiness their family deserves!

“Daddy?”

As soon as Michael nods, Isabelle is off the couch and scuring to her father’s safe embrace. He scoops her up in his arms as her little legs wrap around his middle. Her tears run down his neck and sneak under his shirt as he holds her tight, holding the back of her head to him as he closes his blurry eyes.

After about five minutes he carries her over to the couch and sits down next to his fiancée, Isabelle still in his lap, clinging to him like she’s never done in her life.
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Awwww! How sweet! It makes me wanna cry! I loved her reaction to meeting her dad! I loved that she didn't hold herself back and wasn't shy. That is the way I imagined it and you wrote it perfectly!

Isabelle pulls away from her father’s shoulder after a moment and looks at him with tears still streaming down her beautiful face. Her small hands come to rest on his cheeks and she dips her finger into the cleft in his chin.

“I have this.” She says softly. She then moves her attention to his eyes, tracing her finger along a path under his eyelid. “And these.”

A smile pulls at his lips.

“Yes, you do. But you’re the spitting image of your mother.” He tells her as he brushes a piece of chestnut brown hair out of her face. Faint freckles cover her skin and the smile of hers makes his heart skip a beat. The dimples warm his heart.
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Another Awwww moment! I LOVED these lines! I thought that they were so sweet! It was a heartfelt moment that I bet made Vaughn's heart swell with love! Beautifully written!

Great job! Thanks for the PM!

Megan
 
that was amazing! the absolute best. Isabelle was sooo adorable... and HE'S HOME!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks so much for the pm!!!
 
OMG... i know i'm sooo late on my review... but i just a want to say that that was sooo GOOD... oh man... i know its a one partner... but i just want more... it was so cute... you have to continue... becuase that was just perfect... if you do decide to write more... give me a PM... thanx...
 
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