Here is the next part. I think it's kind of bad, but please let me know what you think!!
Syd POV
The shot rang through the air, and Vaughn sunk down to the bottom of the hot tub. He tried pulling me with him, but I didn’t budge. I wasn’t sure whether he was shot, or whether he was just trying to protect both of us from the whizzing bullets. I pulled him up from the water and just held him there. I wanted to identify the shooter before worrying about Vaughn. I sat there and the shooter came into the light. I was so surprised.
“Will? What are you doing here?” I saw a shadow of a slim figure with short hair.
“And who is that in the background?” The woman stepped out of the shadows and smiled at my shock expression.
“Hello there Sydney, or shall I say Rita. I am so happy to see you here and with who other than my Michael.
“Alice, but I don’t understand. You and Will. And then you shot Vaughn. OMG you shot Vaughn.” I turned and saw Vaughn with a tranquilizer dart sticking out of his chest. He had a pained expression on his face and was laying there with his mouth half open. The tranquilizer dart had already had it’s effect on Vaughn. He was now unconscious. I held his face in my hands and I got ready to remove the tranquilizer dart. I kissed him and pulled it out.
“Hold it right there. What do you think gives you the right to kiss Michael. He’s mine. He wanted me all along. He was just waiting to get tired of you. Will tell her what you told me in the car.”
“Yeah don’t even get me started on you Will!” I felt like popping him one in the nuts.(I had to use that one. Thanks for all of the suggestions. Lmao.)
“Syd, you should be with me and not Vaughn. You can be with me and Vaughn can be with Alice. That way everyone can be happy.”
“Will you can take that proposal and shove it up you’re a%$.”
“Now Sydney,” Alice said in a conniving voice as if she was planning something. “Don’t forget who has the gun.”
“Ok first of all Alice, it’s a tranq gun, and second of all I am not scared of you. You cant force something that isn’t there. Michael and I love each other and things will work out.”
After saying this, I heard Vaughn stirring next to me.
“Syd, are you ok?” he said with a groggy voice. Man did I love him. He was always checking to see if I was ok before he worried about himself.
“Yeah hon, I am fine, but you might want to see who dropped by for a visit. Alice and Will. Will shot you with a tranq dart, and Alice was just about to do the same to me, when you woke up and saved my a&*. Again as always.”
“What Alice is here! And Will! They are working together? My head hurts.”
“Yeah I know the feeling.”
Alice and Will were in the shadows now contemplating their plan.
“Ok Vaughn. We need a plan.”
“Syd I have an idea. Are you listening? Ok first we have to……….”
More later. Hope you liked the new chap.
Luv ya
Seugnet
Post more, this story is good. And if Sydney and Vaughn, weren't going to kicked Alice and Will's a$$'s, Alice and Will would make a good couple, funny, yeah. Sydney and Vaughn will kick their a$$'s right? Oh, write more, this is great. 
