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How can it possibly be...?

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Ms.MichaelVaughn, Jun 17, 2003.

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  1. Ms.MichaelVaughn

    Ms.MichaelVaughn Rocket Ranger

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    This is the second poem I wrote...
    I hope you guys like it :)
    And even if you didn't like it,let me know... :D
    I could really use some feedback.... :) Thank you!!!

    How can it possibly be....
    How can it possibly be...
    That I'm walking on clouds...
    Whenever you're near me....

    How can it possibly be...
    That I'm feeling so alive...
    Whenever you look at me...

    How can it possibly be...
    That you...
    LOVE ME?
     
  2. Chanel

    Chanel Rocket Ranger

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    that si excellent.... makes me think of alex :love:
     
  3. Moriel

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    tis is really good!
     
  4. Ms.MichaelVaughn

    Ms.MichaelVaughn Rocket Ranger

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    Thank you so much for the reviews!!!! :D :D
    They really mean a lot to me :woot:

    THANK YOU
     
  5. twinzz2003

    twinzz2003 Rocket Ranger

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    How sweet!! I love it!!
     
  6. totally4alias10

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    AWW!! That was sweet!! You really are a great writer!!
     

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