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My Name is Devon

Discussion in 'Creative Writing & Arts' started by Alias_Freak, May 30, 2003.

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  1. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    "Mommy, Mommy!" "Wake up!" Devon cried as she shook Sydney half to death. Sydney got out of bed half asleep. "Where's your father?" She asked Devon. ""He left to work about an hour ago." "Didn't you hear him leave?" "No I didn't." Sydney always slept in. She could sleep through World War 2! Devon, on the other hand always woke up at like 6:00. "Now, what did you want?" asked Sydney. "I'm hungry!" "Make me some breakfast! please" Devon asked. "Fine, I'm hungry too." After breakfast Sydney took a shower and cleaned the house. Devon was watching T.V. "Devon come clean your room right now or your grounded for a week!" Sydney yelled. "But mom!" "Pokemon is on!" It's a brand new episode!" Devon replied. "I don't care, now come clean your room!"

    Later on that day.......

    Ding Dong!

    Sydney ran to the door. She wondered who it could be? She opened the door. It was her mother! Irina Derevko! "Hi mom how are you doing?" "I'm fine Sydney, how are you?" Irina asked. "Fine thanks" Sydney replied. Sydney and Irina were sitting down in the living room drinking tea. So hows-She was cut off by little feet running down the stairs. "Grandma!" Devon ran into Irina's arms to give her a hug- and with such force, it knocked Irina right out of the chair she was sitting in. Irina, Sydney and Devon all started to laugh. About 2 hours later Irina got up to leave. "Thank you Sydney" "It was nice to see you again!" Irina said with a grin on her face. "You too mom" said Sydney. Irina was half way out the door when she stopped. "Oh, and Sydney, watch out." Right then she closed the door and left. Sydney opened the door to ask her mother what she meant. Nobody was there. Sydney wasn't worried though. Irina always seemed to come and go, and disappear without a trace. She always came back. Sydney shut the door. She was worried about one thing though. She stopped and thought, "What did she mean?" "Watch out for what?"

    I'll write the next part later
     
  2. *SPYnish*

    *SPYnish* Rocket Ranger

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    Interesting, continue please.

    I´ve a doubt : Years of Devon ????


    ~Natalia~
     
  3. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    Hmm... interesting, I think you're gonna have to write more...

    But a tip? WHen you're having a conversation, skip a line everytime someone knew speaks:

    "BLah," said Vaughn.
    "Blah blah," said Sydney.
    "BLAH!" cried Vaughn.
     
  4. Alias_luver33

    Alias_luver33 Rocket Ranger

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    Hmmm.....interesting. I wonder what Irina is talking about?? I agree about the skipping lines thing. Just a tip, though. Post soon!

    ~Shammi~
     
  5. alias8000

    alias8000 Rocket Ranger

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    Hmmmmmm..... This seems very interesting.

    Pokemon? LMAO! :ROFLMAO: Sorry. lol :LOL:
     
  6. xdancer

    xdancer Rocket Ranger

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    Interesting so far. Keep going.
     
  7. Rambaldi_Follower

    Rambaldi_Follower Rocket Ranger

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    ooooohhhhhh mysterious.
     
  8. aliasgurl

    aliasgurl Rocket Ranger

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    this is really interesting...is irina like a good character or something??
     
  9. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    Sydney closed the door and came in. She went into the kitchen and started a pot of coffee. Devon walked in.

    "Mom have you seen......What's wrong?" Devon asked.

    "Nothing is wrong, I'm just a little tired" answered Sydney.

    "Your such a bad lier" said Devon.

    "Whatever" said Sydney as she walked away.


    "Maybe a little run will clear my mind" she thought.

    Just then the door opened and Michael Vaughn walked in.

    "Hey honey, what's wrong?" he asked.

    "What is with everybody today?!? They keep asking me what's wrong!" yelled Sydney.

    "By everybody do you mean Devon and I?" he joked.

    "Mommy's gone cuucuu for cocopuffs!" shouted Devon.

    Sydney and Micheal looked at her and gave her the "are you on drugs?" look.

    "No I'm not! I saw it on T.V.!" she said.

    "Oh, than it's not just me" Sydney laughed.


    "Michael, I'm going for a run, watch Devon for me. I'll be back in an hour" she said.

    "Okay" said Michael.

    Sydney ran through the park, thinking about what Irina said earlier.

    "I can't help but wonder what mom ment. Is something bad going to happen? will Devon and Michael get hurt? Is Sloane still alive? Did someone raid the C.I.A? Why I'm I asking so many questions?" Sydney though.

    "Oh well. Whatever it is, I'll be ready for it!"

    Sorry this part is so short. I'm still thinking. I'll write more later.
     
  10. aliasjunkie4ever

    aliasjunkie4ever Rocket Ranger

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    hmm this is interesting...i have a question. how old is Devon?
     
  11. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    This is 6 years after Sloane was defeated/killed whatever you want to say. Vaughn and Sydney got married a few months after and had Devon 1 year into their marrige. Devon is around 5 years old.
     
  12. aliaschick4mv

    aliaschick4mv Rocket Ranger

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    Hmm... interesting...

    I'm waiting for a plot type thing...

    Spell check is your friend, darling.
     
  13. alias8000

    alias8000 Rocket Ranger

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    Yeah, that makes sense. 5 years old.

    LMAO!! LMAO!!! :sideroll: Cocoa Puffs!!! LMAO!!! First Pokemon then Cocoa Puffs! :ROFLMAO:

    Btw, great chap.
     
  14. aliasgurl

    aliasgurl Rocket Ranger

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    im really curious as to wats goin to happen
     
  15. pennstatechic

    pennstatechic Rocket Ranger

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    I like it, please write more soon (y)

    Lauren :angelic:
     
  16. ILuvMichael

    ILuvMichael Rocket Ranger

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    interesting...

    very interesting...
     
  17. Aliasgirl47

    Aliasgirl47 Rocket Ranger

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    hey, Dani, that blahblah thing would make a cool story! LMAO!

    great fic, write more
     
  18. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    Sydney felt a bit better. She stopped to sit down on a bench by the jungle gym. She looked over to the swings. A little girl was laughing as her mother was pushing her. Sydney had a flashback. She remembered when she was little her mom used to push her all the time on the swings and Sydney would laugh. She got up and headed back home.

    She was on the doorstep and she noticed smoke comming from inside the house.

    "Oh my god! Is this what mom was warning me about?!?" she thought.

    She ran into the house. The smoke was comming from the kitchen. Devon ran out of the kitchen in her fireman costume.

    "Thank god you came! Daddy was trying to make fishsticks for dinner and he pretty much set the house on fire! I was the fireman helping daddy!" devon yelled in a panic.

    "A little help over here Syd?" Michael asked her.

    Sydney started to laugh. She ran in the kitchen to help him. After a few minutes the small fire was out.

    "Let's just go to the Chinese resturant" Michael suggested.

    "Good idea" Sydney agreed.


    After they got back Devon ran into the T.V. room to watch cartoons.


    "Oh no you don't! You've watched enough T.V today!" Sydney shouted.

    "But mommy! Dora The Explorer is on in 5 minutes!" Devon replied.

    "I don't care!" She said.


    Sydney walked into the T.V room and turned the T.V off.


    "Go upstairs and get in your P.J's. I'll come and read you a story." She said.


    Devon was too tired to argue so she went upstairs to get her P.J's and her book.

    "She's a handful" Michael said.

    "You got that right" Sydney said.

    Michael and Sydney started flirting, then Devon called down in her pokemon P.J's with little Pikachu's on them.

    "Mommy you can flirt later come read me a story!" Devon said.


    Sydney walked Devon up the stairs and tucked her in.


    "Read Pikachu's Fuzzy Friends!" Devon said.

    Sydney hated pokemon and she had already read her that book 3 nights in a row but she didn't want to fight.

    "Pikachu, Jigglypuff and Bulbasaur all lived together with Ash. The End" Sydney said as she finished the book.

    Devon was already asleep. Sydney kissed Devon on the head and went into her and Michael's room.

    Michael was waiting for her. He turned around and kissed her. She returned the kiss. Than he started too kiss her neck. He took off her shirt. Then he gently threw her on the bed. They continued kissing. He could feel her unzip his pants. He took off her pants aswell and started to unhook her bra. She pulled of his shirt.


    I bet you already know what's happening.

    Just then, right in the middle of them doing you know what, Devon walked in.

    "MOMMY?!? DADDY?!? WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!?!?"



    I'll write more later.
     
  19. sarahh729

    sarahh729 Rocket Ranger

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    omg hahahahaha she walked in on that!? :LOL:
     
  20. Alias_Freak

    Alias_Freak Rocket Ranger

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    There is a little bit of swearing in this part


    "MOMMY?!? DADDY?!? WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!?!?!?" :shock:

    Devon ran out of the room and closed the door. :unsure: She looked really confused.

    "Can I come in now?" asked Devon.

    "One minute!" said Michael.

    Michael and Sydney got up and put on their robes. They looked at each other.

    "How the hell do we explain that to a ****ing 5 year old?!?" said Sydney.

    "No clue" replied Michael.

    Sydney and Michael opened the door. Devon just stared at them. She didn't move.

    "Come on honey, time for bed" said Michael.

    She still didn't move. Michael picked her up and put her in her bed.

    "Mommy what were you and daddy doing on the bed?" she asked.

    "Ummmm....... we'll explain it tomorrow" said Michael.

    "Now, what did you want?" asked Sydney.

    "Can you get rid of the boogie man? He's under my bed and I think he's going to try and eat me" said Devon.

    Sydney and Michael looked under the bed and yelled "GO AWAY!"

    "Thank you mommy, thank you daddy" said Devon and she went back to bed.

    Michael and Sydney crawled back and to bed and went straight to sleep.




    more comming
     

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