a.k.a.Kate_Jones
Cadet
I loved those, but this one's my fav. dunno why.nance said:what? you didn't like my other chapters? huh? huh? :lol: :rotflmao:a.k.a.Kate_Jones said:ooooo... yay! yay yay yay!
I actually really liked that chapter.
whaddya mean hot guys can't be smart... Prince William knows freaking 4+ languages
wow.... more than four languages.... but can he speak the language of lurrrve?
:lol:Sorry this chapter is so short. ^_^
Chapter 4.
In Joe’s POV:
She is stunning. Gorgeous. Striking. Breath-taking. Every word that describes the beauty of a Greek goddess. Maybe she is Greek.
Atari Chevalier. Chevalier. Was that Greek? It sounded French or something…Ah… who care’s… she’s amazing.
Her eyes. Her eyes are huge like an ocean of chocolate that I can’t help but stare into. And her hair. It’s so long and silky, I just want to reach out and run my hands through it. Every flicker of movement she makes, it seems as if her hair ripples out and shows off the chestnut color. Most incredibly… her lips. The way they are so full and look sexy even without the gunk of lip gloss. If only… my lips could be on hers.
And the wonder of it all… she doesn’t use makeup. Not even lip gloss. She’s so natural… and different. Why can’t all girls be like her?
God she’s just… beautiful. And intimidating.
When I stood across from her today, she was almost as tall as me. She must be at least 5’9”.
And it’s also no surprise she’s got an amazing figure. She beat Goldman at football a few days ago in class. That was absolutely great. Finally, his ego was hurt and the fact that it was a girl. Ha. Even though Jared’s my buddy, I have to admit... he’s such an arrogant ass sometimes.
I just hope Atari doesn’t think of me like that.
This guy’s obsessed about her. :lol:
Chapter 4.
In Joe’s POV:
She is stunning. Gorgeous. Striking. Breath-taking. Every word that describes the beauty of a Greek goddess. Maybe she is Greek.
Atari Chevalier. Chevalier. Was that Greek? It sounded French or something…Ah… who care’s… she’s amazing.
Her eyes. Her eyes are huge like an ocean of chocolate that I can’t help but stare into. And her hair. It’s so long and silky, I just want to reach out and run my hands through it. Every flicker of movement she makes, it seems as if her hair ripples out and shows off the chestnut color. Most incredibly… her lips. The way they are so full and look sexy even without the gunk of lip gloss. If only… my lips could be on hers.
And the wonder of it all… she doesn’t use makeup. Not even lip gloss. She’s so natural… and different. Why can’t all girls be like her?
God she’s just… beautiful. And intimidating.
When I stood across from her today, she was almost as tall as me. She must be at least 5’9”.
And it’s also no surprise she’s got an amazing figure. She beat Goldman at football a few days ago in class. That was absolutely great. Finally, his ego was hurt and the fact that it was a girl. Ha. Even though Jared’s my buddy, I have to admit... he’s such an arrogant ass sometimes.
I just hope Atari doesn’t think of me like that.
This guy’s obsessed about her. :lol:
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mystery_chick
Guest
wow he is obessesed about her. woah. Joe... naughty boy, think of kissing her :lol: :laughbounce: I love it!!
--mandy
--mandy
a.k.a.Kate_Jones
Cadet
oooo me to! wuv is in the air.... :laughbounce:
there's actually a french actor named Maurice Chevalier. he was in Gigi. :lol:
there's actually a french actor named Maurice Chevalier. he was in Gigi.
:lol:Sarahmañana
Cadet
hehe i think joe has a crush...i wonder what he will do about it? whatever he does i'm sure she'll "hate" it
by the way i just started reading ...and so far its really good!! our girl sounds a lot like a certain heroine that just happens to be one of your obsessions well except the fear part and the part with the abusive dad...
but anyway...its good...keep writing and don't leave us hanging!
whatever he does i'm sure she'll "hate" it by the way i just started reading ...and so far its really good!! our girl sounds a lot like a certain heroine that just happens to be one of your obsessions
well except the fear part and the part with the abusive dad...but anyway...its good...keep writing and don't leave us hanging!
Victoria King
Cadet
ooo someone has a crush on our herione!!! i hope she doesnt hit him! :lol:
ukaliaschick
Cadet
nance i can see what you mean by preffering this story. there are really good.
ukaliaschick
ps. can u pm me when u update??
ukaliaschick
ps. can u pm me when u update??
Betha Bristow
Cadet
ok, see at first I thought it was going to really be a fearless like fic, but it wasn't! ooo I love it!
